The Search For Mai; Coma! =(

Recap:

The gang was at Mara's (A.K.A. Mai's mom) funeral and then there was an explosion and Mara's sister Amanda showed up and in the end, ended up kidnapping Mai.

This Time:

With Amanda & Mai:

Amanda had tied Mai to a chair and was just watching her with disgust.

"Well, well, well, it's just you and me brat. You do remember me, don't you?" Amanda asked.

"Yw-ywe-ywes." Mai stuttered out scared.

"Then who am I Mai?" Amanda asked scaring her.

"Aunt Amana." Mai said shaking.

"NO! IT'S AUNT AMANDA!" Amanda yelled scaring Mai even more.

"Sowee..." Mai said softly, scared.

"DAMNIT CHILD! WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU?! THAT MAN HAS TURNED EVERYTHING AROUND! DAMN HIM! DAMN YOUR DAD!" Amanda yelled infuriated.

"Daddy will com to get me, he will." Mai said softly, her voice scratchy, eyes red and puffy from crying, tears evident on her face.

"Your daddy is a twit! He will never find you. You hear me? NEVER!" Amanda yelled in little Mai's face.

"Yes he will." Mai said softly.

After Mai said that there was a hard, loud, sharp smacking sound.

Amanda had slapped Mai hard across her face before yelling at her.

"DAMNIT MAI! HE WILL NEVER COME! DON'T YOU EVER THINK ABOUT BACKSASSING ME EVER AGAIN! HE WILL NEVER COME, NEVER! AND IF HE DOES COME HE'LL NEVER FIND YOU! AND IF HE DOES JUST SO HAPPEN TO FIND YOU, YOU WON'T BE ALIVE!" Amanda yelled as Mai cried even more.

With Elliot & The Others:

"How could I let that happen?" Elliot wondered aloud as he paced back and forth.

"It's not your fault. None of us could have seen this coming." Wesley said as he, like the others, sat on a chair in the serving area of the cafe, in which they (Elliot, Mai, Wesley & Renee) lived.

"It's really not your fault Elliot." Zoey said softly.

"Yes it is. I was supposed to protect her at all costs, and I lost her." Elliot said holding and looking at Mr. Bear, blaming himself.

"..." Zoey was about to say something when her parents came bursting through the cafe doors.

"IS IT TRUE?! SAY IT'S NOT TRUE!" Suzie and Adam cried out, out of breath.

"It's true. Her aunt kidnapped her. It was all my fault." Elliot said simply.

"It wasn't his fault. She used a smoke bomb type thing, which blocked any of us from seeing Mai get kidnapped." Zoey said defending Elliot.

"Don't blame yourself hunny. If it happened the way Zoey said then it wasn't your fault." Suzie said simply.

"Yeah, it wasn't your fault kid; it is her aunt who is at fault." Adam said simply sticking up for Elliot.

"Thanks. So what do we do to find her then?" Elliot asked.

"That's the spirit! We'll go find and ask people if they've seen anyone that looks like Mai and the lady who might have her." Adam said determined.

"Ok. Well then we'll talk to child services and find out if Amanda had certain places she liked to hang out." Wesley said.

"Right! Well let's get going!" Kiki called out.

"RIGHT! LET'S GO!" Everyone else called out as they went to work.

With Amanda & Mai:

"So what should we do now Mai-Mai?" Amanda asked looking at Mai, whose face was slightly pink, turning darkish blue.

"I wan go home!" Mai cried, which got her another hard slap across the face.

"SHUT UP!" Amanda yelled at Mai, who was in pain.

Mai was crying so hard that it was getting hard for her to breath.

Eventually she just started screaming and crying out for her daddy.

"DADDY! DADDY! DADD..." Mai screamed and was soon slapped across the face once again. This time however, she got a bloody nose.

"WILL YOU JUST SHUT UP?! GOOD GOD KID!" Amanda yelled at Mai who was hurting in so many ways.

"That's it I can't take it anymore!" Amanda yelled as she untied Mai and dragged her to a small, dark, cold, mold infested closet.

"DADDY! Where is you?" Mai asked softly as she held onto her knees tightly and rocked back and forth as she began to cry.

"Shut up." Amanda said simply as she heard Mai.

With Elliot & The Gang:

So the gang was now talking of how they would split up into groups when two other people came in. It was the boy and girl from the funeral who sat next to Kiki and Ruby.

"Hey you, Elliot right?" The boy asked.

"Yeah why? Better yet who are you?" Elliot asked getting defensive.

"You're the creator of the mews right?" The boy asked again.

"How do you know that? Who the hell are you?" Elliot asked getting annoyed.

"I know that because my girlfriend here is a mew. As for whom I am, I'm Derek, Mai's older brother." The boy, Derek said.

"Derek, please don't start a fight. I'm Beverly, Derek's fiancée. And yes, I'm a mew." The girl, Beverly finally spoke out.

"Ok, so what do you guys want?" Corina asked annoyed.

"What do you think? We want to find my sister. And Beverly wants to get to know you guys." Derek said.

"Well you know what? You guys ca..." Corina started, but was cut off...by Elliot.

"Fine, you guys can come and help. It also means you guys get to work in the cafe as well." Elliot said simply.

"What?! Just who do you think you are?!" Derek asked enraged.

"Deal!" Beverly said out of nowhere.

"Ok, so we'll go in groups of four." Wesley said as he picked out the groups.

In group one it was Elliot, Zoey, Derek and Beverly.

In group two it was Dren, Corina, Sardon and Bridget.

In group three it was Tarb, Kiki, Tyson and Ruby.

In group four it was Wesley, Renee, Tyson and Berry.

So they took off, Derek grumbling angry words about being put into a group with this Elliot character that had sole custody of his sister, Mai.

They had been looking now, for about two hours and Derek was starting to ease up on Elliot, but not by much.

It wasn't much longer when all four groups were led to an old, dark, creepy looking abandoned house.

The doors were open so they all figured they'd go in.

They were in the house maybe half an hour looking and were just about to leave when Elliot hit his toe on something hard and yelled out loud.

That was when they heard.

"Daddy?" They heard Mai ask.

"Mai?!" Elliot asked looking around.

"DADDY!" Mai cried, banging on the door.

"Mai! Mai where are you?" Elliot called softly.

"Daddy!" Mai called franticly hitting the door.

She was hitting the door so much that her hands started to bleed.

"Daddy..." Mai called her voice weak, croaky, scratchy and sad. That's what Elliot noticed the most, her sad voice.

"Mai. Mai where are you?" Elliot asked one last time.

"Daddy, in here. I'm in da dark pace." Mai cried, scratching at the door, causing her fingers to now bleed.

Soon Elliot found the door, the closet that Mai was locked in, which was in a different room.

Unfortunately like it says Mai is locked in a closet and Amanda had the keys.

Luckily Elliot had an idea, maybe not a good one, but what else could he do?

"Mai, baby." Elliot started.

"Daddy?" Mai asked.

"Baby I need you to stay as far away from the door as you can. Do you understand baby?" Elliot asked

At first there was nothing but silence before a small "yes" was heard and then crawling to the left.

About a minute and three sore arms later the closet door was knocked down and then a VERY scared Mai shaking in the corner.

"Mai, baby. Oh My God! Mai what did she do to you?" Elliot asked when he saw her face, wrists and waist.

"DADDY!" Mai cried latching onto him.

"Elliot, Wesley, Derek! What's going on?!" Zoey, Renee and Beverly called running into the next room with everybody following close behind.

"OH MY GOD! WHAT HAPPENED TO HER?!" They all asked when they saw little Mai.

"I don't know." Elliot said as he felt her little hands turned to little fists, clutching his shirt and her head resting on his shoulder.

"What indeed? I know what happened to the girl." A voice came from the other room; it was Amanda standing there, looking evilly at them.

"YOU! WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER?!" Elliot and Derek demanded.

"Why I didn't do anything to her that she didn't deserve." Amanda said holding her arms out.

"Damnit! What the hell did you do to her?!" Derek asked his aunt.

"Oh, Derek. It's you isn't it? I haven't seen since you were, well, Mai's age." Amanda said sweetly.

"Well yeah. So you're my aunt huh?" Derek asked.

"Yeah I would be." Amanda said simply.

"Well then answer me this. Why the hell did you do that to her?!" Derek asked pissed.

"None of your business." Amanda said simply.

"YES IT IS! IT'S BOTH OF OUR BUSINESS! SHE'S MY DAUGHTER AND HIS SISTER! SO DON'T TELL US WE DON'T HAVE A DAMN REASON!" Elliot yelled as he handed Mai to Wesley.

"Well in that case… Watch out!" Amanda yelled running at Elliot, but then turned to Wesley, knocking him down and then grabbed Mai and threw her across the room, where she hit her head, after she hit the ground, knocking her out.

"MAI!" Everybody yelled worried.

About ten minutes later the girls took Amanda down and then she was taken to jail.

Elliot then ran straight to Mai, who was unconscious.

"Mai. Mai? Mai! Mai wake up! Please." Elliot begged holding her limp body.

Five minutes late the ambulance came and announced that Mai was in a coma and should be taken to the hospital until she wakes up.

At the hospital she would be prepped and stabilized so that they could do what they need to do with her.

There you go.

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