Okay so this is the chapter that I'm worried about. I'm not sure if you guys will like it or not, it's a little short and I didn't know how I was going to have everything work out. In my opinion this is like a not so good chapter... But please review and tell me what you think. Here goes nothing.
She was stupid. So, so stupid. How could she think that someone as little, as worthless, as unknown as her could be with someone like him. He was way out of her league. He was perfect. And she-and she wasn't. How could she have even thought that he would like her, even as a friend. Seriously, she couldn't even say a full sentence to him. In that moment time seemed to unfreeze around her and Adrien.
"Chole! You better delete that video right now you bitch!" Alya was straight out yelling at Chloe.
"Well-Oops. My finger just slipped," Chloe smirked.
"Now excuse me but I have places to go and people to see. Ta Ta."
Marinette stood frozen as she looked at Chloe's receding back. A single sob escaped Marinette's mouth and tears started to drip down her face.
"Mari, Girl, are you okay?" Alya walked over to Marinette reaching out to her.
"Ye-yes. I'm-i'm good. Fine just-just fine."
"Listen Marinette I'm really sorry, I didn't even know-" Adrien started.
"I already told you I'm fine. I don't even know how I thought that someone like you could even like someone like me. I never even had a chance!" Marinette yelled. She chuckled dryly, a laugh that had no humor in it. Her next words were dangerously soft and had a sickeningly sweet tone to it. "I'm fine." Her tone changed again and then she was a sad broken hearted girl again. "Like you would care." Then Marinette turned on her heels and ran.
Yeah, so that's it. I hope you liked it. I agreed with what someone commented and decided to put something that talked about that in this chapter. It was someone under the name Guest. They wrote: not sure why she thought he would say yes if she can barely talk to him. How are you supposed to fall for someone if they don't talk to you. I hope someone brings that up. I totally agreed with that so thanks Guest! Also some people commented with some nice comments about how they like the story which was nice because I was a littls scared that no one would like this story but I put it out there anyway. So thank you: Fangirl1375, Winxfan1066, Poksie, Buginette, Izzy, and once again Guest. Thanks guys!
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