Leafpool and Jayfeather part 2
Leafpool walked over to Jayfeather
"Come with me, I want to show you a secret clearing with special herbs." He nodded, and followed Leafpool . She led him to a different secluded clearing. He sniffed the air, and cocked his head to the side, obviously confused. Leafpool leaped into him, knocking him over. His eyes were wordsmith surprise as she turned and shoved his member into her mouth, and started to suck. Her core heating up, she felt his breathing and heartbeat increase. She shivered with pleasure when she felt his tongue swiping her core.
She then got up, and so did he. She got into a hunters crouch, and he mounted her. She purred with pleasure as his member rubbed against her walls, and yowled with pleasure when he shot his seed into her. She collapsed as he pulled out, and he left. But she wasn't done yet. She followed him, and he hissed, baring his fangs. She didn't like it, and jumped on him. She rubbed her core against his member, and they both moaned and purred with pleasure. Her tried to resist, but when she throated his member, he succumbed. She lifted her tail for him, and he sniffed and kicked her core.
Before she could utter a word, her juices all came out into Jayfeathers face. He picked the juices off his muzzle, and mounted her again. Before anything could happen, he pulled out and ran away. She was left there in a pile of her own juices, shocked at how run away. She then shrugged, and started shoving her tail in and out of her core, moaning with pleasure. She finally stopped, and found the strength to walk back to the stone hollow. Jayfeather never pleasured her again.
is this a little better? Also, I could use some suggestions about cats.