Tigerstar and Sasha

Tigerstar walked through the woods, searching for Sasha's scent. His sheath twitched, and he kicked his lips, knowing if he couldn't find Sasha soon, he would have to take a quick break. After what seemed like another moon of searching, he couldn't take it anymore and sat down.

Even if other cats think I am evil, I am the same as them in some ways. he thought. Too much to reaist, he lifted his law and gently rubbed his member, wishing he could give himself a blow-job. Letting his surroundings fall away, he laid down, and managed to reach his head just far enough to be able to pick his member. not close enough for a blow-job, he says noted.

Her picked it vigorously, but it still refused to come out. I guess all of me is hard to please. he thought. His violent licking turned into soft, gentle strokes of his tongue. When it still refused to come out, he got up in frustration and started to pump his tail in and out of his hole. He closed his eyes, moaning in pleasure. Before he knew it a familiar sleep drifted around him, and he felt another tongue on his shaft.

"I thought you would never come, Sasha." Tigerstar moaned. He fell on his back, loving the way that Sasha licked his shaft. Her finally felt his member come out, and moaned when he felt Sashas tongue trail around it. She suddenly withdrew her mouth, leaving his member cold. He got up, angry that she had stopped the pleasure. Suddenly he felt something brush against his whiskers and the heat scent watermarking the air.

without a word he plunged his tongue straight into Sasha's cpre. She moaned, and her flanks trembled. He withdrew, becoming upset a out his cold member. He leaped on her, forcing her down into a hunters crouch. With her butt in the air, he shoved his member into her core. She howled in pain at the barbs, but when Tigerstar started to get a rhythm pumping in and out, the pleasure came to her.

She moaned and howled with pleasure, never wanting the moment to end. As she sprayed her juices, Tigerstar felt his coming on, and within moments both their juices were out and some flowed into he ground where Sasha couldn't contain them. He got off of her, licking her ears as they started to clean each other's pelts. When they were done, Tigerstar walked away, satisfied for a while.

I hope that was better! Still could use some suggestions please!