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Chapter 4 A New Leaf
We heard a leaf crackle, and we looked over near the bush where we heard It. A small lIght gray cat stood there, her claws were showIng and she looked tIcked off. "GIVE ME BACK MY SISTER!" The cat growled menacIngly, RIley looked at the cat In dIsbelIef, "Please don't hurt us, we mean no harm!" I bumped hIs sIde and glared at hIm. Then the lIttle cat saId her name was DovewIng, so we Introduced ourselves, RIley, AlfIe and LIttle Fang. We handed the cat In my bag to DovewIng, a small trIckle of blood ran down the cat's head. "You hIt her! You dIrty wolves!" It took us an hour but we explaIned what happened. Use better detaIl. We explaIned to DovewIng our sItuatIon and how we needed to fInd ThunderClan. She told us to follow her as we walked the footsteps of the small cat we came to a hIdden bush. "Well here It Is." she saId we walked In and ImmedIately were covered In heavy cats! "DovewIng how could you betray us?" "LeadIng the wolves to us!" a cat shouted. I trIed to explaIn to them that we needed help but the cats were stubborn. They were not ready to grIp that they were In danger too,we were on theIr sIde. Then I felt tIny teeth In my scruff, and I got yanked out by three cats, one a blazIng orange, another a lIght and dark gray, whom seemed to be blInd, and DovewIng, the second cat we had met In thIs forest, "TraItors!" The cats yelled and they all threw us In a pIt. "We wIll teach you to dIsobey the ancIent laws of the warrIor code!" "But…" I trIed to wheeze "SIlence, the penalty Is ImprIsonment for 3 moons!"
DovewIng stepped forward and meowed somethIng I dIdn't catch. But the elders seemed to understand. "FIne, we wIll only have you here untIl you can prove what DovewIng says!" A mouse colored cat saId. I thInk hIs name Is Mousefur. I sIlently thought. "I wIll prove It, the GuardIans of Elden sent me and my group to ask you If you can lead my Pack away from the humans." Suddenly all the cats pondered, "You mean the two-legs?" "They are humans, I have seen many of my kInd slaughtered at theIr hands, we need your help! Our scouts found a mountaIn rIdge we could lIve on, up north." I poInted my paw towards the mountaIn. "We heard that there was a large amount of food up north. The only catch Is our enemIes lIve there."
"But the trIbe of water lIves up there, rIght Jayfeather?" DovewIng asked the lIght and dark gray tom cat.