This update is just to address the questions and comments I've gotten so far on the fanfic since I have no clue how to respond to individual comments daily (and because I love the attention lol).
Pyrrha will always be one of sticking points for any Jaune pairing, their relationship is such a fundamental part of their character. So Weiss worrying fits, even of it is unfounded because of there is one thing we know about Jaune is that he will be faithful. Pyrrha waking up is going to be rather interesting.
I'm quite pleased to see that you remembered that being in a coma means Pyrrha is wasting away. Many forget that. She will be in for a long road for recovery, but with Jaune and Weiss helping she will recover.
– Celestias Paladin
OH. MY. GOD. Thank you so much for pointing that out, I'm so glad someone recognized the degradation of Pyrrha and how I wrote it in. I get so mad when characters go into a coma in books and come out as jacked as Macho Man like nothing ever happened. That was actually one of the MANY writing points I wanted to give extra attention and detail. This WILL tie into the story later on I can guarantee you.
Really glad to see an update for this, its interesting to see that Jaune's feelings for Pyrrha is that of sibling affection as opposed to romantic interest, personally I'm glad that is the case making it a little different to to the typical Jaune /Weiss (although I'm a fan of arkos too). I wonder how it's going to pan out if Pyrrha wakes up. Look forward to the other sub plots and hope you're feeling better from your pneumonia.
– G-Unot
Aw I feel so good whenever people actually look forward to my updates. I've always liked the idea of a platonic Pyrrha and Jaune in white knight fanfictions as well mostly because it creates too much drama having Pyrrha and Weiss pine after Jaune. I wrote Jaune like this specifically to show how long he's cared for Pyrrha and that there is still material behind the front the two put on about "Jaune caring for and old friend in Atlas while living with Weiss". And Thank you for the well wishes, pneumonia is a bitch.
Another awesome chapter so far, the purpose of the bar in terms of having accumulated Huntsman knowledge is a bit unclear. Loved the ending with it being evident that Weiss was annoyed at Jaune being his oblivious self and making plans with our consulting his better half. Keep up the good work!
– G-Unot
I'll admit I got out of hand with the description of the outpost but that was simply to show how old the bar was compared to the city and just to give it a general atmosphere. I'm so glad people are noticing how I write Jaune and Weiss too. Writing characters is what takes up 80% of my time since I try to think of what they would say in a situation or how they would react. Weiss is always posh unless she's with Jaune or her team and Jaune is typically goofy until he's alone with Weiss.
Any way I wanted to address those few bigger comments and just get to know my readers. I actually really love writing this story but I just wish I had more time and energy to do it especially on the weekends. As I write this now I'm only about halfway through my Varsity season and if we don't qualify for the playoffs our season will end about November 3. Once we reach that point I'll have more time/energy in the afternoons to write and respond and so forth. Thank you guys so much for all the likes, favorites, and comments, it really pushes me to write more and write better as well. See you guys in the next chapter.
This update is just to address the questions and comments I've gotten so far on the fanfic since I have no clue how to respond to individual comments daily (and because I love the attention lol).
Pyrrha will always be one of sticking points for any Jaune pairing, their relationship is such a fundamental part of their character. So Weiss worrying fits, even of it is unfounded because of there is one thing we know about Jaune is that he will be faithful. Pyrrha waking up is going to be rather interesting.
I'm quite pleased to see that you remembered that being in a coma means Pyrrha is wasting away. Many forget that. She will be in for a long road for recovery, but with Jaune and Weiss helping she will recover.
– Celestias Paladin
OH. MY. GOD. Thank you so much for pointing that out, I'm so glad someone recognized the degradation of Pyrrha and how I wrote it in. I get so mad when characters go into a coma in books and come out as jacked as Macho Man like nothing ever happened. That was actually one of the MANY writing points I wanted to give extra attention and detail. This WILL tie into the story later on I can guarantee you.
Really glad to see an update for this, its interesting to see that Jaune's feelings for Pyrrha is that of sibling affection as opposed to romantic interest, personally I'm glad that is the case making it a little different to to the typical Jaune /Weiss (although I'm a fan of arkos too). I wonder how it's going to pan out if Pyrrha wakes up. Look forward to the other sub plots and hope you're feeling better from your pneumonia.
– G-Unot
Aw I feel so good whenever people actually look forward to my updates. I've always liked the idea of a platonic Pyrrha and Jaune in white knight fanfictions as well mostly because it creates too much drama having Pyrrha and Weiss pine after Jaune. I wrote Jaune like this specifically to show how long he's cared for Pyrrha and that there is still material behind the front the two put on about "Jaune caring for and old friend in Atlas while living with Weiss". And Thank you for the well wishes, pneumonia is a bitch.
Another awesome chapter so far, the purpose of the bar in terms of having accumulated Huntsman knowledge is a bit unclear. Loved the ending with it being evident that Weiss was annoyed at Jaune being his oblivious self and making plans with our consulting his better half. Keep up the good work!
– G-Unot
I'll admit I got out of hand with the description of the outpost but that was simply to show how old the bar was compared to the city and just to give it a general atmosphere. I'm so glad people are noticing how I write Jaune and Weiss too. Writing characters is what takes up 80% of my time since I try to think of what they would say in a situation or how they would react. Weiss is always posh unless she's with Jaune or her team and Jaune is typically goofy until he's alone with Weiss.
Any way I wanted to address those few bigger comments and just get to know my readers. I actually really love writing this story but I just wish I had more time and energy to do it especially on the weekends. As I write this now I'm only about halfway through my Varsity season and if we don't qualify for the playoffs our season will end about November 3. Once we reach that point I'll have more time/energy in the afternoons to write and respond and so forth. Thank you guys so much for all the likes, favorites, and comments, it really pushes me to write more and write better as well. See you guys in the next chapter.