Tone thing to get a follow but a favorite? Cheater, Cheater, Pumpkin Eater: Chapter Two
MyChildPercy
1. Percy Jackson was his own didn't bother anyone. Not his mother, not his friends, hell, not even himself.
2. Percy Jackson didn't want to keep to himself. He wanted to look into those startling gray eyes and watch them whirl into storms and ease into clouds.
3. Percy Jackson wanted to try. Just try. He wanted to take the girl out for a date. Where? He didn't know. With what car? He didn't know. But he did know one thing-he wanted to date her on a date.
4. Percy Jackson succeeded. Getting this girl, this, this girl of his dreams, to go on a date with him? Impossible. But possible.
5. Percy Jackson had heard. He had heard the rumors of her cheatings, and scandals, and lies, and heartbreaks. But he wanted her. Heartbroken or not, he wanted her.
6. Percy Jackson didn't fall on the way to the movies. (Walking in a tux is hard, okay?) He didn't mess up while talking to Annabeth. He did everything right. Everything.
7. Percy Jackson was falling in love. Not that he could help it nor wanted to help it. She was perfect. She was everything. She was his.
8. Percy Jackson did not like Luke. Not one bit. Not the way he stared at her, or what was below her head. He didn't like how they snuck glances at each other, or how he seemed to just love to make jokes when she was around. Annabeth assured him, though. "It's nothing, you Seaweed Brain! I want you and you only." After she assured him, they had followed with a nice make-out session.
9. The last date. Before they both went to college. They were going together, of course. Their last date. Percy Jackson had bought his Wise Girl a ring. A symbol of how much he loved her. He didn't deny it. He was officially in love with her. He didn't want to deny it. Her door was right in front of his face. His eyes read those same numbers they had seen every day for the last few months. Percy wanted to surprise his girlfriend. He grabbed his key and opened the door. The door seemed to open in slow motion as he saw Luke getting himself a face-full of his girlfriend. His wise girl. His Annabeth.
10. Words were tumbling, clothes were slipping back on, and tears falling. Percy didn't remember what he said. He didn't say much of anything that made sense. Just random words put together. He looked at her, making sure all the hurt and anger was shown in his eyes. Instead of violence, he simply just looked at her and turned around, walking slowly out of her doorway and her life.
Dang! 345 views in under 2 days? Thank you so much! This is the first story that I've written that I actually like. I'm blown away, guys! 7 follows? On my story? Oh wow. I didn't realize that you guys liked it so much! One favorite? It's one thing to get a follow but a favorite? Tysm! It's this kind of stuff that really keeps me going, ya know? Well, that's enough about this. Here is chapter two! I really hope you enjoyed this because this is probably the hardest I've ever worked on a chapter. All types of reviews are welcome.