A Phantom Life

by thesensiblemaroon

After awakening from a coma, Lincoln Loud discovers his family isn't what they use to be and vows to make up for the time he lost while gone. Things aren't what they seem though as Lincoln discovers more about how he ended up in a coma. Rated M for violence and coarse language. *cancelled*

4. Cancelled

Hey everyone,

So as you may have read in the bio, I've cancelled this fanfiction. Before you go getting disappointed, I may have cancelled the fanfiction but I am not done with this story. As it is, I don't think the story in this fanfic turned out the way I wanted it so I decided to scrap this project and move on to a new one with a very similar story as this one. So if you'd like to continue reading this story then please check out 'The Hounds of Loud' (It should be uploaded after this).

My reasons for canceling this one are:

1. The story turn out- I didn't like how this story turned out, especially the beginning which I thought was rushed and explained very little. I also didn't like how I was going with the Abe plot line since he was connected to Lincoln's backstory in some way but I couldn't decide what backstory that was.

2. Word demand- I didn't like how short my chapters were especially considering that I only updated once a week.

3. Exposition- I hate writing exposition and I thought I put way too much into this.

4. First Person and Tense- I hated writing in the first person and I hated how I kept switching the tense.

Anyway, those are my reasons. It's been a fun ride but I want to make and do better. I hope you've enjoyed so far and please check out the other story for more.