Hey guys! So you all seem so stoked about the evil Percy side so I'm gonna keep it up! Honestly i never completely planned the personality but i just closed my eyes and let the creative juices float out of my fingers and onto the keyboard you know? Anyway lets get going, vote on poll, leave reviews blah blah blah
OH NO WAIT! My next goal is 100 reviews and 10,000 views! If i get that i will attempt a 3,000 word chapter but know i will definitely make a 2,000 word chapter
Ok Shoutouts:
Mavis Chase: Why thank you! It is one of my many talents
chameleonunlimited3: I will honestly answer, NO! BWAHAHA anyway glad you're starting to read it, also how can you stop cliffies? seriously though every chapter is gonna end in one cause it has to end soooooooo
Unknown: Well the personality in his mind has black eyes, him outside of his mind are still sea-green, but a little different, guess you'll just have to see cause i ain't spoiling it. Im so glad you like the plot twist!
Unknown: It is kinda like Inside Out but i had this idea before it came out but i just never wrote it so yea
Izzybella12: Thanks! Im so glad you like it, as for suspense this is payback for Frozen Body Broken Heart cause you basically killed me! :D HAHA, but luckily school is almost over and i will have more time to write, and i will never stop the cliffies
satvidesai31: Well thank you! But if i write 10 words 1) i probably couldn't, 2) everyone else would complain
aja: Well i promise you i won't stop until its over and it is far away from over, i will probably make a sequel...
DinoJoyrus: Well thank you for the constructive critism, im glad you spoke you're mind, unfortunately (And im trying to say this as politely as i can) I will not be doing a 3rd person because ive already done 1st person for a while plus i like it for you to see what goes on in the characters mind
DrakonOwl21195: Thank you for the compliment! But there is no way im as good as Rick, who would have thought of throwing them in Tarturas? NOT ME!
Guest: Yeah sorry i fixed it, just a mistake, i was proofreading some stuff
BEFORE YOU READ THIS CHAPTER MAKE SURE YOU READ THE AN OTHERWISE YOU MIGHT BE CONFUSED!
Disclaimer: I own PJO
Annabeth- do not!
Fine, Rick owns PJO
Percy (mind)
"What?"
My twin, I'm gonna call him my evil twin, slapped his forehead.
"Are you deaf?" He asked, "I am Perseus Jackson, your evil side!"
"Oh"
My twin looked really annoyed with me at this point, "Oh? Seriously? Your reaction to your evil side is Oh? Why don't you cower in fear!"
"Well a number of reasons" I said, "One, I don't cower, Two, I'm like chained to a wall and am tired, Three, I don't get it"
"UGH! I can't believe I'm gonna be stuck with you!"
"Soo, explaining?"
He rolled his eyes, "My name is Perseus, I'm evil," He told me like I was a small child
"No" I said, "Because I'm Perseus, and I'm not evil"
At this point he looked like he was going to bang his head on the wall, "Alright look here, you are Percy, I'm Perseus, you are the good personality, I am the evil one"
I decided to drop the clueless act now, "Ok, but I don't have an evil personality, also, I'm a personality?" Ok this wasn't an act I seriously have no idea what is going on.
"I was created by Polybotes, I came from a tiny speck in the back of your mind but now I'm stronger than ever!" He started to ramble, "All those monsters you killed, those innocent Telkines at Mt. Helena? They were children and you killed them, I bet you that they thought you were evil"
"That's different!"
"Is it? You weren't defending yourself, you just destroyed their home, they were just learning students and you killed them" He snarled
"I'M NOT EVIL!" I screeched
"You are, and the proof is right in front of you"
I looked up at Perseus, there was no heart, no hope, no emotions, just destruction and death. I'm not evil right? But he's here, he was created out of evil that was in my mind.
I am evil
"Finally you get it!"
"Wait, you can read my mind!"
"No you idiot! We are the personality's of a person, you are in the mind, you know what, it's quite complicated and I don't want to explain it, just know I will know what you are thinking at all times"
"Oh, OH! shist"
"Yeah"
"Wait so what's happening! I was in the lab and, and, this is crazy!"
"You are still in the lab"
"What?"
"See for yourself" He gestured towards the huge screen in the front
I tried to get up only to fall for two reasons: 1, I was chained, 2, My knees buckled
"Weakling" Perseus muttered
So instead i just looked at it from there, the screen showed a blank white room, the lab I was in!
"This is a lot to take in, I still don't get what's happening"
"Polybotes, transported me and you with his equipment into your mind, getting rid of all the other emotions and putting them in you, he created me and I am thankful for that," He explained, "You were weak from the beginning, the creation of me has weakened you even more" He continued
"But, why?"
"Isn't it obvious! I'm evil, I'm working for the giants! My job is to eliminate your friends and make sure you don't get in the way, your body is strong so it will take a while but I'll soon take over it!"
"You don't have to! They won't give you anything in return!"
"Actually I do, he is my master, it is what I was created to do, also, I don't want anything in return, I just want to see destruction" He sneered
What could I do? He's made up his mind
I strained against the chains, but stopped a moment after, the effort was incredibly hard, "You won't get away with this" I growled
"Oh, but the weaker you get, the stronger I do, once I'm at full strength I will be able to take over you, then your body will be fully evil and completely under my control, right now he's a mild evil but that will soon change."
What?! No this can't be happening!
"It is happening Percy" He said
That was going to get annoying, him reading my mind
"So the more energy you use up, the more you help me, so keep trying to escape" He turned on his heel and sat at the board
I had to get out of here
"You won't be able to get out!" Perseus called from the board
It was going to be a long night
Annabeth
"Leo! He's in trouble! Hurry up!" Piper called, "It will be okay Annabeth, were going to save him!" She turned and climbed down the stairs to tell the others
I was on the deck clutching my gut, I might have been there for hours, the entire time knowing Percy might be dying. It was horrible.
"We're a mile away Annabeth!" Leo called
"Thanks Leo!" I groaned out
Suddenly the pain stopped, that could only mean two things, either he was okay, or, or he was, no Annabeth refused to think about it
"Piper?" I called out
"Right here Annie"
I glared at her, I hate that name, "The pain stopped"
"Well, that's great right? That means Percy is okay!"
I looked down, tears welling up, "Maybe"
Piper looked down at me and seemed to get it, "Oh, Oh I mean, Annabeth, Percy isn't, he can't, not without you, he's stronger than that"
"Hey, look at me" Piper said, "We'll get him back"
I nodded, "Yeah"
"Get off your butts! We're here!" Leo yelled
I jumped up and raced to the railing, we're here, Percy is here, I'm going to see him again.
Percy (usual POV)
I woke up in the lab chair
"Ugh" I groaned, every bone in my body was sore, and I had a splitting headache. I rested my head on the chair
This day has been horrible.
The door opened and Polybotes came in, "How's our favorite demigod feeling?" He asked with a look of fake concern on his face
"Like vomiting on your ugly face" I responded
He looked away disgusted, a telkine soon came rushing into the room
"Master!" It quivered, "The demigods! They are close to the shore! Should we send attack teams?"
"No, let them come, I have a plan, follow me" Then he walked with the telkine to discuss his "plans"
I sighed, then it dawned on me, and if my hands were free I would have slapped myself. THEY ARE COMING!
They're coming for me, oh no, Polybotes plan was working, but I don't feel evil, maybe it didn't work? I won't hurt them. I'm not evil. Right?
This could still be a part of his plan, to make you fall into a lie, he made you fall for it once, he might be able to do it again
I hate being so clueless! I have nothing to go on.
I closed my eyes, so many things have happened in the past few days. I thought about everything that happened.
I totally forgot about dad's warning! Did it already happen? Should I be dead? Was it from me attacking the army head on, or from surviving Polybotes tortures.
Why is it always me?!
Happy? I didn't make any horrible cliffhangers! just like you wanted! Actually that's not true, i wanted to but couldn't find how at the time so yeah, you win, for now. Next one i cant make any promises. DONT FORGET! 100 reviews, 10,000 views! Ok that's it for now, please review! BAI! -greekgodsrox