intomiddle3arth : You, are evil. Pure, unadulterated evil. You need to either make longer chapters or update like, twice a day. Please, feed my addiction.

This chapter was good, and the story is moving along at a quick pace so I will not have to wait long for the plot to "thicken". See what I did there. (I am despicable.)

Kikkie: I feed off your excitement!

ames95: omg I'm loving this xD keep writing

Kikkie: No problem!

WinxFan1066: i really love you fics and was just wondering when you were going to update mates next.

Kikkie: I don't know. I sort wrote myself into a wall with that one.

12345678910:Loved this chapter! I really like the idea that Adrien and Chloe are rivals making Marianette's life miserable. This is like a dark and twisted Romeo and Juliette with 50 shades of grey vibes.

Kikkie: ;)

TheNargana: It is really bothersome, i know everything about this story (except for Chloes personality) is wrong, but it is like a natural disaster in the evening news, i just can not look away.

I Hope someone will find out about that contract and that both adriens and chloes family will perish and be obliterated.

Your Style, bye the way, is good, many people make to big blocks of text without any blank lines

Kikkie: Thank you, most people criticize me about my writing. I am glad you say something different. Also, this story just takes place in the imaginary world like The new King for a New world and The Innocent Sin and The Angelic Demon

AryaDumbledore : This can't be it! Man, this is some damn good writing

Kikkie: Thank you hun!

Yoko89 : Damn that was steaming welp Mari you are going to marry him I cannot wait for the next chapter keep up the amazing work.

Kikkie: yep! or is she...

Synsoflove :oh shit mari now your fucked ha loved it

Kikkie: Or so you think :)

Komnenid:Adrien even if she already signed up you will never own her.

there something that will always hunt you until the day you die, the eternal worry of marinette leaving France and live outside your reach, the idea of your soulmate leaving you will surely hunt you because you were an idiot unable to see if you put a leash on someone sooner or later that one will rebel... you will live always wondering if Marinette truly forgave you

FANTASTIC FIC

Kikkie: I like your words my friend.

serinacorina16:I love this story!

Kikkie: Thank you! And thank you for reading it!

intomiddle3arth :F**********CK! Why must you end your chapters like this? Do you enjoy torturing us? Also, the time line in the past chapter is pretty confusing. Please(!), what is your update time/schedule? I want to be able to get my fix as soon as possible.

Kikkie: I update when ever a chapter is done. So it can be at random. Also, yes I do enjoy ending it at a cliff hanger, I love to hear your opinions on what will happen next.

Synsoflove:hmm i think someone fibed and now erm mari he owns your ass ohh chloes so ganna be pissed now

Kikkie: You have no idea, but lets not sell Mari short. Trust, she may surprise you like she's done before ;3

Yoko89:That was amazing I did not see that coming keep up the amazing work cannot wait for the rest.

Kikkie: No problem, thank you for reading!

Guest :Really?

Kikkie: Uh...yes!

Nanami-Hime :I love the suspense

Kikkie: Oh yea!

Lilly:Omg this is such a great story 0.O! its so different and i love it!

Kikkie: YES! Thank you! I love the fanfics on here for MLB (inudigifan201 being my fav author for the stories, I would be so honored if she read one of my fanfics) but I always wanted for someone to take a bit of a dark road with the characters and story line. Especially with Adrien, I like the kid and all, but I don't believe that he's 100% goody toe shoes. I think he's has a dark side and I like to explore that side. While Marinette isn't all sweet and clumsy, deep down she is a volcano ready to burst and I love exploring that side of her. So yea, that's how my stuff will always be different from the original story lines. That and I just like the animation of the show...don't know why though.

an1malover :looking forward to your next up later love your work

Kikkie: Thank you!

Yoko89 :I cannot wait for the next chapter I feel that Chloe shot Mari and Adrien is going shoot back at Chloe but who knows I cannot wait.

Kikkie: Hehehehehehe

Little Liar:It could be better.

Kikkie: Okay

Trash:Not gonna lie, I like thick girls...

Kikkie: I don't know why, but when ever I think of an older Marinette, I think she gains curves like her mother and dad. Lets be real, she works in a bakery, you cannot be that skinny! Especially when it comes to her folks who are both big in body mass. I am not saying she should be fat, all I am saying is she's a stick while her parents are thick. I just don't believe it! And that is why when ever she is older I make her thick.

Artcat4:This story is getting way too crazy. And is just my style I love it please write more soon. I cannot wait until next chapter comes out!

Kikkie: You might have to wait *finishes chapter 14*

Synsoflove :oh shit so she just got shot and im saying chloe well fuck somebody put a bullet in the bitch now ha need more soon happy Halloween

Kikkie: must...hold in...spoiler...

Synsoflove:oh god that is definitely a chloe move i wonder how she will get around this and hmmm wherr they arguing over

Kikkie: She always gets away! I mean like, she is the main reason most people got Akumatized in the series, yet no one confronts her about this!

Makerofallthingsgood :Already love it

Kikkie: Thank you!

Yoko89:I cannot wait for the next chapter keep up the amazing work I cannot believe Chloe would do that wait yes I can I wonder what Adrien is going to do to her.

Kikkie:No spoilers...

May 16 writer :Do you take requests?

Kikkie: I get paid to do those.

Yoko89 :Yay another of your amazing stories I cannot wait for the next chapters

Kikkie: 3

Artcat4chapter 1 . Oct 29

You are such a tease. I look forward too reading your stories soon.

Kikkie: Thank you!

Synsoflove :this is starting off brilliant cant wait for more

Kikkie: Hehehehe

WinxFan1066:i love your stories, your an amazing writer.

Kikkie: Thank you!

Kikkie: Thank you all for your words kindness! Thank you all also for being patient with me in a rough time in my life. I also wanted to tell you that I recent set up a Tu**blr account. Can't say the whole word because FF or put in the link or it will be blocked and made invisible. If you want to make a request or so, please contact me there in the PM. When my Tu**br account is up, I will inform you guys. Thank you guys for reviewing by the way, I like doing these things!

Have a lovely day!