Hey everyone! I have finished rewriting, I did not think it would be so quick! So updates as usual. Please, if you can, can you go back and reread? Tell me what you think? I know the commas and periods still suck but I was hoping it would make a bit more sense...
Let me know in the comments.
Also for those who say they cannot picture Harry being carried or the height difference please go to Archive of our own, I have the same story there and in the latest update you'll see some pictures I found