The Jedi King I: Rise of the Militia

by Blitzkrieger

When the specters are sent on an extraction, they find an old crusader and Ahsoka's SON? Ahkilleon, hidden from the eyes of the Empire for fear of what they'd do to him. He'll join the Ghost on it's adventures, learning how to become more than just a jedi. As forces in the shadows work against the Empire and the Rebellion for their own aims, with a interest in Ahkilleons destiny.

20. Help me readers, You're my only hope

I need your help.

Blitz here,

Dear readers, your reviews do not go unread nor do your suggestions, many of them have given me good ideas for future chapters, such as the inclusion of Ulic Qel Droma and other force ghosts, having Ahkilleon using battle meditation, and how the Wolf Militia(Lothal) should operate in the future.

But I AM IN DESPERATE NEED to answer a question that has being weighing on my mind, what is Ahkilleons heroic flaw, all great character have them.

A few star wars examples:

Ahsoka in her younger years was reckless, and a bit whiny when we first met her. But that made her fearless and it made her question authority when needed. Traits shared by Anakin and even Luke if you watch for it.

Obi-Wan is often portrayed as the perfect jedi but his training and discipline of his emotions like many other jedi, numbed him to the problems of the galaxy and people as a whole. It did make him a powerful and wise jedi though.

Hera, we already saw in wings of the master that she had to learn to overcome what she thought was the best way, and learn to adapt for any situation

Agent Kallus, his conviction for the justness of the Empire made him a superior ISB agent than others but it blinded him to the cruelty of the Empire.

Rex, the ideal soldier, follows his commander into battle without question, we saw that on the Umbara Arc. It was finally put to the test with Pongs betrayal and his leadership of the mutiny to save his brothers

And of course Ezra, and I can't understate how important it is they(Ahkilleon & Ezra) have different flaws, I see Ezras as his loyalty, an impulsive need to help others, and a desire for power, usually to justify the other two. Like how Maul tricks Ezra into saving his friends or how Thrawn uses it many times, and of coruse Ezra learning the dark side in the third season.

All in all, Ahkilleon needs a flaw that he thinks is a strength so that he can grow out of. Right now I feel like the character has become stagnant and needs to learn what this is, and how he could overcome it.

Please PM, or leave review of your ideas.