First chapter of a my first fanfiction with 1500 word, I want feedback to improve my writing

SUPERFLARROW AU Historia basada en fragmentos de los crossovers de Invasion, Crisis en Tierra-X, Elsewolrds y Crisis en Tierras Infinitas Reescritura de Invasion y semi-reescritura de la segunda mitad de Arrow S5, Flash S3 y Supergirl S2

Sequel to I Called Him Cariad

At age thirteen Kara Zor-El arrived on Earth but was taken in and trained by her cousin and The Justice League. Oliver Queen came back from Lian Yu but with a mission; save his city, by any means necessary. Both are souls marred with anger. In the natural order of their respective words, they never should have met. The damage done when they do could change everything for good

The heroes have finally returned home from being shipwrecked, where they learned that they were destined to be heroes and were trained by Yeo Few, Slade Wilson, and Ra's Al Ghul. This is the sequel to "The Beginning of the Age of Heroes." *I do not own Arrow, Flash, or Supergirl. They belong to DC comics, Warner Bros., and the CW as well as their writers.*

A series of one shots and ideas centered in the Arrowverse. (Requests Open Again)

Tragic events unfold in one day, which ultimately drive the Girl of Steel down a path of tyranny and destruction. Only the Emerald Archer and his allies can stop their former friend/ally, but with the heroes of Earth divided; lines are drawn, and loyalties and friendships are put to the test

Veronica Mars moved to Starling City when she left Neptune and, while Oliver was dead, helped Thea and slowly became a big sister figure to her. When Oliver comes back, she and Arrow slowly realize they're on the same team. Veronica is a successful PI and occasional blog writer. Mac, Duncan, Lilly, League of assassins, Keith, Leanne, Diggle,... QUESTION on last chapter

Luego de salvar el mundo en otra tierra, Kara Danvers jamas imagino que su próxima aventura en Tierra-1, seria todo menos tranquila y pacifica Mucho menos que una traición de parte de alguien que amaba sería tan solo el paso inicial para una serie de acontecimientos que marcaria un antes y un después en su vida y no solo la suya, también la de cierto arquero esmeralda. SUPER ARROW.

Will he come though? He renounced the Seeker life, Eathon." Eathon with the barest hint of a smile, "Nimue you know as well as I do. One cannot just renounce the life of a seeker. The call will always be there. He will simply need a push and that push will lead him here. Eventually."

The next addition to the Worlds Collide series. As Oliver and Natasha are getting used to their life as a married couple, they are drawn into a new fight with the mysterious Ten Rings. As they struggle to find out who is behind this mysterious organization and discover their goals, they encounter a new hero who lead will lead them on an adventure of a lifetime

When Sara sneaks into the house smelling of Oliver, Laurel knows things have to change.

Part 8 of rewritten second chances. My name is Thea Queen and I am a goddess. Literally. After waking up in this new reality following Crisis, I've found that things on this new world are very different for me, especially the fact that I'm now the vessel of an actual greek goddess. By using her power and my own skills, I'll bring justice to my new home. I am Artemis.

As children, Felicity Smoak and Damon Salvatore were best friends. But when life rips them apart and leaves them wandering through the world trying to find where they belong, how will they react when the truths are revealed? What will happen when the past and the present meet? When two worlds collide, will they ever find their way back to each other?

Peter's "twin" brother Jason has ran away from home after uncle Ben died and learned about being adopted, he was found dying from dehydration in Starling City and was found in the hospital by his birth mother Moira Queen and older brother Oliver Queen, his life is about to change for the better….(Peter adopted twin brother & Oliver Queen younger brother story)

Izuku leaves Nanda Parbat unable to take the killings. Chased by heroes and assassins alike he seeks to find himself. Amongst the streets of Musutafu he finds new and old friends. They seek to help him. He seeks to hide himself to not risk their lives for his own selfishness. To grow attached would mean risking The Leavue harming them.

The AU where Oliver, Barry, and Kara survive Lian Yu together for years, raising a baby Kal-El, and are eventually rescued – by the League of Assassins. (Note: This version is unedited. For main, edited version, go to AO3)

I'm the writer of The Emerald-Steel Collection, The Elseworlds Collection, The Scarlet-Canary collection and so many SuperArrow fanfictions across the fandom. This is my annual SuperArrow Xmas story the introduction of a new crackship I believe many people will enjoy. Have fun and happy holidays.

It has been a few weeks since the heroes of the multiverse paid a visit and encouraged our friendly neighborhood Spider-Man to be a hero and be Peter Queen. But now the test comes to Peter as he has to face terrorists, family dilemmas, and getting his homework done. And there are now six spiders on the loose similar to the one that bit him, but that's nothing to worry about. Right?

Sequel to Slings and Arrows of Outrageous Fortune A storm is brewing and threatens to tear the Avengers apart pitting friend against friend, hero against hero. Where do Felicity and Clint fit in this world and how will they handle the changes happening around them. REUPLOAD from Ellabee15.

Felicity never expected Captain America to ask for her help. She could also not have anticipated what searching for the Winter Soldier would result in. AU begins after the episode: "Draw Back your Bow". REUPLOAD from Ellabee15

Former M.C.U. Director James Gunn finds himself upon the verge of a new chapter in his life as Spectre Oliver chooses him for a very special and exciting opportunity. One that involves crafting the greatest story ever told across the revived DC Multiverse.

This is a summary of this Alternate Universe and how I got it. It includes Character and Organization Summaries for each character and group. How they develop differently from Arrow (2012) and the DCU; How they are the same; How I made them my own; Arrow Enriched Series: Part X.

Sah-him's (Oliver's) specialized field training with the Demon's Venom. Learning to use the Ruya. AU. Ship-Laurel/Oliver/Tommy. Graphic Injuries. Arrow Redesigned Series, Part 03.O.

The League would train them. Make them stronger. Give them a purpose... hunting evil. AU. Ship-Laurel/Oliver. Laurel/Oliver/Tommy. Graphic Violence. Graphic Torture. Arrow Redesigned Series, Part 02.