Hi, yeah I know I am late, I think rewrote this Chapter about five times and even now I am not sure about it but I can't delay forever, plus I could edit a lot in post if it's really that bad so here we are that whole Shinobi thing, I'll keep this short and answer reviews to the end BUT I have one thing to say here, in order to give myself some breathing space, I need to follow the anime for Rosario Vampire because while I did finish the Manga, I'd like to do a separate story for Naruto and Rosario Vampire manga because honestly the RV's anime is way different than the manga, that combining all of the events with Tsukune and Alucard and trying to integrate the Naruto world there is hard that said I'll keep some elements from the manga here like the ghoul, holy lock, Moka's Sisters and stuff like that, more info on that later, I know some of you guys won't like that but think of it as me just improving my writing skills here so I can make that Future Story the best I can, also I did finish an Outline for this story so I think some stuff here will be more organized, sorry for being a still crappy writer, I am still learning
Anyway on with this shitshow
Normal speech: "The beat plus the melody "
Flashback or thoughts: "I'll see you in hell...you handsome rogue "
Fox/Chairman/Inner Moka/Summoning: "Please for the love of god stop"
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Meme of the day:"I am gonna be the next Hokage" - Hank hill in VR
Disclaimer: I don't own anything, I really just doing this because I want to
A Dent in my iron will
"Yo!" Naruto said, appearing in the middle of the room with a poof of Smoke, immediately a Textbook flew across the room right into the blonde's face, knocking him off his feet
"Why?!" Naruto shouted, rubbing his face in pain, the Succubus gave him an angry stare and with another book in her hand
"Don't scare us like that again you idiot!" Kurumu shouted, she threw another book at him, this time, however, Naruto managed to dodge it and glared at the blue-haired girl
"And that's a perfectly good reason to throw a book at me?!" Naruto asked, Tsukune, on the other hand, looked at his friend and was curious as to what happened to him while he was gone
"So Naruto-san, What happened with the Headmaster...you aren't in any trouble are you? Tsukune asked as he also tried to defuse the Situation between his two friends
The Uzumaki picked up the two books and set them on a desk, Naruto was reminded as to what he was had promised to Mikogami.
"No, I am good, I just had to clear some stuff with him, he wanted me to be clear with you all that so there were no future problems" Naruto answered
"What problems exactly?" Tsukune asked, wanting to know what happened to his friend during his absence, Naruto looked to be in deep thought for a while
"Maybe I should have prepared something beforehand," Naruto thought,
"Naruto-san? Your spacing out on us…" Moka said, looking concern for her friend
"R-right, well that I am...well okay I don't know how to start this but...I am not really from here…" Naruto started
"You mean like Countries? It's not that uncommon for Monsters to get sent here from different Nations, there aren't a whole lot of Monster school's out there like this one" Moka cut in, as she took a seat
"That's not really something the Chairman would concern himself with, Naruto-san" Mizore added, still working on a column for the Newspaper not even batting an eye to the Shinobi
"I might as well be blunt and get this over with," Naruto thought and with a small sigh he spoke
"Alright listen just hear me out okay" Naruto started, Silence filled the room as the blonde took a deep breath
"I am not from this world or dimension, the Headmaster wanted to confirm that with me where I am from Humans are separated into different classes, Civilians and Shinobis, I am a Shinobi, we can utilize an energy known was Chakra, to do all sorts of things like, walking on walls to even creating a giant fireball depending on our Chakra Natures...I guess you could say I am human but the Chairman decided to have me stay because I am not necessarily a Normal Human and he wants you guys to keep this a secret until he figures out what to classify me as" Naruto blunty explained and held his breath
"I'm starting to think that Gin-senpai made a mistake do you think he's sane?" Kurumu whispered to Mizore, who shrugged her shoulders and continued to work on the paper without a care in the world, Naruto heard this and glared at the Succubus again
"Oh come on! you live in a world of Monsters attending a School that teaches them how to blend in with Humans is it really that hard to believe!?" Naruto shouted at her, who gave him a sly smirk
"Just please believe me on this, I haven't lied to you before, have I? Besides the Chairman himself said it was okay to tell you guys about it" Naruto said, watching his friend's expression change as they realized he was serious.
Moka grew tense at the fact that Naruto was human, she wasn't sure what to think, all her life Humans had been nothing but terrible to her with the exception of Tsukune however Naruto was nice enough to her and if the Chairman deemed him not a threat, She figured it was okay then even still it was...surprising, at least Tsukune won't be alone here now, that made the situation a bit better
Mizore was a bit interested in Naruto now, it was surprising to hear that he was Human but in her mind, he was a boundary being more than anything maybe Mizore could get him to give her tips on the way she fights, just to get one over Two other girls as he was the best fighter in their little group. the Snow Woman was now lost in a fantasy where she single-handedly defeated both Inner Moka and Kurumu and finally took Tsukune for herself. Mizore made a mental note to make sure to talk to Naruto alone about this later and if she was going to get her way she would need to butter him up first, yes the Yuki-onna began scheming
Kurumu had her own experiences with Humans but they were not like Moka's, she had a big urge to tell other students about this but the Chairman himself want this to be a secret, Kurumu wasn't dumb she knew the man's power and if She said one word she would most likely be expelled and lose her destined one so She silently promised herself not to tell a soul for now
Tsukune already knew Naruto was Human for the most part but being from another world? That was something else to him, he really didn't know what to say to his blonde friend, the Human was snapped out of his thoughts when a Young Witch breezed by him, and bombarded the Shinobi with a stream of endless questions
"Naruto-san! how does this 'Chakra' work and do Yoki and this Chakra go hand and hand or are they completely different? What about customs? Do you have your own holidays? What's your home like and what would a Shinobi classify you as? The Small Witch asked as she latched on a surprised Naruto
"Alright, Jailbait that's enough," Kurumu said, grabbing Yukari by her collar and got her off Naruto, who cleared his throat
"Thanks...so one question at a time," Naruto said looking at his friends, Yukari managed to break out of Kurumu's grip and went up to Naruto
"S-So can you tell me, how Chakra exactly works?" Yukari asked, nearly not even able to contain herself, a different energy source was something that always fascinated her and Naruto was just full of mysteries
"Well I didn't pay attention as much in the academy as I liked to but I can try to give you the basic rundown, every living thing in my world has and needs Chakra to live, from what I understand it can vary from Person to Person as to how much Chakra they have, like I said before us Shinobis can utilize Chakra from things like enhanced speed and Strength to things like using Wind in a fight or summoning a crazy amount of clones, Chakra can also be very difficult to control if the Shinobi has a lot of it...um...let's see what else oh! Different Shinobi have specific Natures they can use, the basic being Fire, Wind, Water, Earth and Lighting I think the last thing I can tell you is that Chakra is invisible to the Naked Eye but there are exception" Naruto explained, he slightly smiled at the Young witch who tried to write everything down on a notebook
"Oh oh, What are the exceptions?" Yukari asked eagerly, explaining Doujutsus and Sensory Ninjas would make Naruto mentally exhausted, especially knowing Yukari's endless curiosity so he decided to cut her off for now
"It's too difficult to explain and I would be here all day, I could tell you some other time though…" Naruto said, making the Witch pout and distanced herself from the blonde muttering something Naruto couldn't understand, Tsukune spoke up
"You mention something about an academy, what's that like?" Tsukune asked, Naruto actually blinked for a few seconds and started to think about his days as a Student, like spending days pranking people with Kiba, Shikamaru, and Choji. The Uzumaki was actually starting to space out again before he composed himself
"It's different depending if you want to be a Civilian or Shinobi, Civilians really just learn trade and becoming Merchants, stuff like that but Shinobi schools are different, we learned there from a young age how to fight hand to hand with Taijutsu, Ninjutsu which weaponzies Shape and Nature transformations and finally Genjutsu, it's really just illusionary techniques and I can't tell you much about them because I'm not good at them" Naruto explained, Kurumu spoke right after wanting an answer to something that had been on her mind
"Are there any Monsters like us in your world?" The Busty girl asked as she wondered if there were little enclaves of Yokais in the blonde's World like in this one but this caused Naruto to think of Kyuubi and other Tailed Beast. There was no way in hell he was going to tell them that
"Not that I know of" Naruto lied, it was quick and blunt. Naruto was not good at lying despite it pretty much being apart of his job but in his mind it technically wasn't a complete lie The Tailed beast weren't technically demons as far as he knew, and summoning Animals were far from that, plus, he doubted there were bunch of demon Foxes running around in this world
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Somewhere underground in the Academy
"Achoo" a tall blonde man sneezed, wiping his nose, he turned his attention to a student in a prison
"Please Kuyō-sama, I don't know anything, I am sorry that my friend insulted you but please, PLEASE, just let me go!" the Student shouted, afraid as to what was to come, the terrified Student backed himself up to the back of the cell as Kuyō banged on the Iron bars.
"Oh, will you shut up?! I'll deal with you later and next time reconsider my offer...It'll be much easier and a lot less messy for the both of us" Kuyō said, leaving the whimpering Student alone in his cell
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...still, Naruto was hoping the Newspaper Club bought it and to his relief, they did.
"How did you exactly get here?" Moka asked, still slightly nervous at the fact Naruto was Human, the Shinobi was curious about her sudden attitude change but said nothing and he didn't see the harm in them knowing how he got here
"Well, the short story is that I just messed with a high-level Fuinjutsu and ended up here. I have to ask, is dimension hopping common here?" Naruto asked, Yukari perked up at this and spoke
"It's not common at all but it's really not impossible, it's just really, really rare among even the strongest Monsters, there are very few recorded cases of it and the ones we do have are very vague" Yukari explained, Naruto nodded that sort of made sense but it did make Naruto wonder how Strong was Mikogami? The man stated he could easily pinpoint the Elemental Nations without much of a problem. Mizore noticed Naruto getting lost in his own thoughts and decided to ask her question.
"So Where in your world are you exactly from and what's it like?" Mizore asked, her attention completely on her partner now, Naruto hummed for a bit trying to compare the two places in his head
"It's far more rural than this world, that's for sure, we're split up into Five great Villages with a bunch of minor ones scattered throughout the land, the Five important Villages would be Konoha in the land of Fire, Kiri in the land of Water, Suna in the Land of Wind, Iwa in the land of Earth, and Kumo in the Land of Lighting. We've only really had the Village system for a couple of Generations nothing like the stuff here, Shinobis have been around for far longer but that's really a different story" Naruto explained, trying to keep his explanation short as he didn't know all of the History of the Shinobi world
"Man, you should have been to places in your world" Kurumu mused, looking at the Shinobi in front of her
"Part of the job, I have some crazy stories I could tell you guys one day but that's for another day," Naruto said, Moka stole a glance at the clock there was the session was pretty much over
"Time really does fly by sometimes…" Moka whispered to herself before turning over to her friends
"I guess it's time to pack up," she said cheerfully, as the rest soon left the Room, Naruto and Tsukune were the last ones in the room.
"They took it surprisingly well, are you sure you never want to tell them?" asked Naruto as grabbed his backpack, Tsukune slouched at the question
"In their eyes, your not Human, I know how that sounds but think about it, look at the way they were uncomfortable until they remembered your not from here and had a different type of energy...it's not the same Naruto-san" Tsukune explained in a Sad tone, Naruto placed a hand on the Human's Shoulder
"That's true but Moka was more than accepting of you, I am sure the rest will be just as Accepting to you as they were to me," Naruto said, Tsukune shook his head, still adamant about keeping his humanity a secret
"That may be true but you know the penalty for being Human here, Naruto-san" Tsukune pointed out and Naruto sighed
"Right, We should head home," Naruto said, he wasn't going to convince Tsukune anytime soon and to him, it really wasn't in his place to push the subject further.
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Naruto opened the door to his dorm and threw the Storage scroll on his bed, he was concerned about what happened back home during his absence, finally his questions were going to be answered as he focused some Chakra in the Storage scrolls that Mikogami had just given him
Two scrolls appeared on his bed one labeled Jiraiya and the other was labeled Tsunade, Naruto let out a deep sigh as he didn't know what to start with but after a few seconds he picked up the one from Tsunade, Naruto assumed She being the Hokage would be the one to inform him of what has happened since his disappearance.
It almost seemed unreal to him, Naruto messed with a seal from his Mother that he knew nothing about and ended up in another world with a School for Monsters he spend a month and a half hiding from Mikogami and laying low only for the man to find him, through a Newspaper Club, with a Human, a Vampire with an Inner-self, a Perverted Succubus and Werewolf, a Child genius witch and a Stalker Yuki-onna as their members and to top it all off Mikogami offered him a way home.
Naruto's luck was truly a blessing and a curse, with a deep breath, the Shinobi opened the Scroll and laid his eyes on the contents of the letter
"I swear when you get back here I will beat some sense into you damn Idiot! What the hell were you thinking?! Using a time/space seal like that!? You have no idea how lucky you are to even be alive right now!? Oh if Kushina was alive she would skin you and hang your ass on her fireplace, I'll think of a proper punishment for you when you get back for now, Maybe I'll have you fill in for Iruka at the academy or make you go through a month of D-rank missions? I am going to have fun with that but what's done is done it's time to fill you in on what has happened since you left, I guess the best place to start would be what happened in Suna, Akatsuki invaded and took Gaara, I sent Team Kakashi with some replacements and Team Gai, they didn't make it in time but a Suna elder by the name of Chiyo used a Jutsu that managed to revive him even without his tailed beast, Gaara is still a powerful Shinobi, there was also The Tenchi bridge mission, you see one of the Akatsuki members before his death told Sakura about his future meeting with Orochimaru as he thought he had a Spy in their ranks, we used this piece of information to set an ambush for the snake and retrieve Sasuke but sadly the Mission failed with a few casualties, Sakura remained unharmed for the most part but from her own words Sasuke still refused to come home until Itachi was dead, we also heard that he managed to kill Orochimaru himself and Jiraiya's spies confirmed this a few days after the suppose battle but in more recent news Sasuke Uchiha has killed his older brother Itachi two weeks ago,he hasn't returned to the Leaf however Sakura still remains optimistic and I am sure you will too other than that we haven't heard anything about him not even Jiraiya's spy network has caught a glimpse of him...
Naruto took this all in, Sasuke killed Orochimaru and his brother but doesn't that mean he should be returning to Konoha? Naruto was happy his friend's quest for revenge was finally over but the Uchiha should have been in Konoha or at the very least shown that he was coming back but that could still change however Naruto knew one thing his old friend was one hell of a wild card with a deep breath at least, there was a small chance he would return now, Naruto read the rest of the letter
There are a few other things that happened between then and now but I guess the next biggest thing would more news on Akatsuki and…I am also sorry to inform you of Asuma's death, it was two Akatsuki members who killed him, they were called the immortal duo in the bingo books, because of the fact they couldn't be killed through normal means however your friend Shikamaru, more or less killed one of their members known as Hidan, he was buried in an unspecified location even I have no clue where he is or the details of the battle and if you want my opinion the fewer people that know where he is, the better. As for the second member Team Kakashi had a run in with him. the Second one is known as Kakuzu, he fought my grandfather and lived so he is not someone to take lightly again the bastard managed to escape and we lost a few Shinobis in the process, we haven't made much contact with Akatsuki since then however we know most of the Jinchuurikis have been captured with the exception of you and the Eight tails in Kumo, that's why I want you to stay with Mikogami at least until this whole thing blows over, look my advice? Just stick to the creep and your friends, I am sure they'll help you out and you know what? Enjoy yourself brat, you're only young for so long and think of this place as a way to get away from it all, knowing you I doubt you'll see it that way but who knows, Jiraiya and I might visit soon I am not exactly sure when but Mikogami should inform you when we'll arrive and if your wondering about your friends only Sakura and Shikamaru know where you are and even they don't know all of the details as for everyone else, they're under the impression your with Jiraiya's toads sorry it has to be that way but you know what would happen if word got out anyway take care kid, We'll visit soon - Tsunade Senju"
The first thing that hit Naruto's mind was Asuma's death, sure Naruto didn't know the man as much as he would have liked to but Asuma was still the Son of the Third Hokage, the old man that helped him out when he was a kid and he was the Sensei of Shikamaru, Ino, and Choji. the Uzumaki gave a sad sigh, he could only imagine what Konohamaru was going through, losing both his Grandfather and his Uncle in action, Naruto made a mental note to send the kid something from here when he had the chance.
Naruto set the letter down there was the fact Kyuubi was right, only he and the Eight tails remained and does that mean the Fox was also right when it came to Akatsuki's plans to revive the Juubi? The Shinobi was a bit shaken at the idea of the Kyuubi being right, the Ten-tails was something that the Fox spoke with fear in it's voice for such a proud being to be afraid of something like that it was downright terrifying for Naruto, he didn't like it, he really didn't but Naruto decided at least for now that staying away from the Elemental Nations was for the best.
At the very least, he had a connection back to Konoha and that was more than he could ask for, turning over to Jiraiya's scroll, Naruto decided it was time to take a look at the pervert's scroll to his surprise, three scrolls popped out as Naruto activated the Storage seal and one letter
"Naruto, no I am not going to scold you, I know that may come as a surprise but I am sure Tsunade will give you plenty of punishment when you get back, sorry brat I still have a spy network to take care of and I am heading out soon but I have some Scrolls I wanted to leave with you these were a few things I simply never got around to teaching you, I decided to spend my own money to resupply you with Kunais and Shurikens just in case, there should also be some Chakra suppressing seals now this is important so listen up, Monsters use an energy source called Yoki it draws from the spiritual side of things as opposed to Chakra that takes from both Spiritual and Physical sources, these should work fine on Yokai but I can't guarantee it. Fuinjutsu is messy and is not always accurate, I am sure you know that first-hand now which is why I left some of my notes on Fuinjutsu and some supplies for you to work with. Mikogami actually has a good grasp on Fuinjutsu so if you're stuck somewhere don't hesitate to ask him I am, sure he would appreciate having someone as useful as you around now. I've also heard from my old friend that you've been slacking off on Training? Well that's going to change, while your training with the toads will have to take a backseat for a few years that doesn't mean I won't have you working on other things, most of your arsenal is fine but you do have a lack of variety that said I won't just hand you a million Jutsu no, I want you to hone and perfect the Wind jutsus you have now, I know you and I were working on finally adding Wind Chakra to the Rasengan but I highly recommend you don't at the moment, if something went wrong and you lost an arm, Tsunade would be out for blood...your blood anyway once you have those down, I have somethings I left with Mikogami that will help you later down the line, things like Chakra paper for that second Chakra Nature, extra storage seals, ink for Fuinjutsu etc. I left them with him and no,t you due to the fact he'll have place for you to train in peace out of sight from Normal students now the last things have nothing to do with training and are just some decorations I managed to get, so you could make your dorm feel a bit like home, I am sure you'll enjoy them, I got to head out soon kid, if you're curious about any news in the Village just ask Mikogami, he'll fill you in on anything and will be where you'll get letters from Tsunade, See ya soon brat - Jiraiya"
Naruto finished reading The Toad Sage's scroll and focus Chakra on the last one, Naruto was surprised to see a bunch of smaller storage scrolls and a small note. The Uzumaki picked up the note and immediately recognized Jiraiya's handwriting.
"This is most of the stuff that you left back at our hotel and some stuff in your apartment, Obviously I didn't take everything but these things should make your dorm feel more like home and I snuck in some of my books in there, you should learn how to appreciate my works of art and who knows maybe when I pass on you'll be my successor" - The Great Toad Sage, Jiraiya
Naruto crumpled up the note and looked at the last two scrolls, the blonde was definitely going to give Gin the books, maybe he could use it to bribe the Werewolf if he needed too but one thing was for sure, Naruto was at least going to read through them once before handing them to Gin.
Putting the Dirty books aside, the next and last scroll definitely had something caught Naruto's attention in front of him was a small pile of the Black and Orange jumpsuit, neatly folded on his bed that Naruto had gotten during his training trip with Jiraiya, he did have the one that came with his fall into this world but that one...well it was torn beyond repair.
Still, at least he had something to put on when he wasn't in School now from what Gin told him the Newspaper Club does have a few field trips in the Human world planned for the Future, so that was one less thing to worry about. there was also Tsunade's necklace sitting on top of the pile with another note.
"You left a Necklace from the Legendary First Hokage, that is worth mountains of Gold on a desk in an Inn that was in the middle of Nowhere, never change Naruto, and your lucky I didn't tell Tsunade about this, don't be so careless next time" - Jiraiya
Naruto felt a Shiver run down his spine, if Tsunade had found out he had nearly lost her family heirloom, She would hang him from the Kage tower but thankfully Jiraiya showed mercy to him and let him off with a warning. Not wanting to lose the Jewel again, Naruto left it on his Nightstand so he could put it on tomorrow.
It took most of the day to finish his homework as Naruto still struggled with the Subjects given to him but when Night came, the Shinobi went to sleep.
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Naruto grunted as he opened his eyes, it was still dark out but something had woken him up, sitting up on his bed Naruto rubbed his eyes and paused until he heard the noise again, it was pebbles hitting his windows.
Looking out his window, the First thing Naruto saw was Mizore standing outside, it was definitely creepy as if she had been there all night, looking over to his clock, Naruto saw it was midnight, the Shinobi turned his attention back to the Snow woman who motioned for him to come out.
Naruto groaned in frustration but he was curious as to what she wanted at this hour in the morning, putting on some clothes, he went downstairs to meet her. Mizore sat at a bench and as Naruto approached her
"This really couldn't wait till later?" Naruto asked Mizore shook her head
"No I wanted to make sure no one else found out about this," Mizore said, not even making eye contact with Naruto
"Alright, let's hear it what exactly do you want so bad that you snuck into the guy's dorm and woke me up this late" Naruto asked as he rubbed his exhausted eyes
"I want you to train me," Mizore said, Naruto blinked for a few seconds in confusion
"I am sorry I don't think I heard you right," Naruto said, the Snow woman played with her sucker
"I said I want you to train me" she repeated with the same emotionless eyes she had greeted him with when he got here
"First of all, why?" Naruto asked, Mizore immediately looked down at her feet
"Well, when I first joined Gin-senpai told me about the dangers that we could be facing in the Future at first I thought nothing of it but after watching Moka, the one that beat me without a problem, lose to you, it felt like I was almost nothing to you and Moka in terms of power, Fighting was never my strong suit but I want to be at least strong enough to protect Tsukune when you two aren't there" Mizore spoke softly
Naruto stayed silent he could understand where she was coming from with this but these were people he had known for a week at best and he felt as if she wasn't telling him everything
"Your hiding something" Naruto stated, Mizore's emotionless look briefly changed into one of surprise,
"I want to beat Moka in a fight and win over Tsukune, I think he likes strong girls" Mizore confessed, she should have known better than to try and deceive a Shinobi
"So that's what this was about," Naruto thought, he got up from his seat and looked away from her
"Listen I don't even know if it's possible to train you I mean I use Chakra and you use Yok-" Naruto's words died in his throat as Mizore flash some photos in front of him, they were of him sleeping with a stuffed frog and his nightcap that he had just received from Jiraiya, Naruto now realized Tsukune was right he didn't know how far the Snow-fairy was willing to go just to get what she wanted
"Imagine if these got out, Naruto Uzumaki the Student who single-handedly defeated the S-rank Vampire Moka and her allies, sleeps with a toy frog and a nightcap like a child, it'd make headlines for weeks" Mizore said as Naruto's face turned into one of horror, he wasn't too big on popularity here at Yokai but he would never hear the end of it for two years
"I have other copies so don't try anything stupid" She pointed out as Mizore put the photos away.
"Am I seriously being blackmailed by a schoolgirl?!" Naruto mentally yelled and swore he even heard the Fox laughing in the back of his mind. the Uzumaki gulped at the ramifications this would have if he didn't do something
"H-How did you even get these?!" Naruto shouted Mizore gave him an icy glare
"Keep your voice down, it's still very late and as for how I got them...that's none of your business but I've been getting into places I shouldn't be in since I was ten besides, I didn't break in, I just took some photos from your window, this was all I got so you should be safe" Mizore answered this made Naruto slightly less nervous but it was still very creepy, Mizore saw the state he was in and spoke again
"I'll sweeten the deal for you, I'll buy you a bowl of Ramen everytime we train," She said, Naruto's eyes brighten up at this
"Make it two," Naruto said with hardened eyes causing Mizore to smirk, her gamble paid off
"Done," the Snow-fairy said as she held out her hand, Naruto sighed and shook her hand
"I am really not a good teacher at all, the best I can do is point out the flaws in the way you fight and give you tips on how to patch them up," Naruto said, Mizore nodded
"That's fine, I don't expect you to teach me anything with Your kind of energy but any little advantage helps," the Snow woman said, as she got up from her seat
"I hope you're not gonna give up when it gets hard," Naruto said with his arms folded, Mizore felt a bit insulted at this
"Are you underestimating me, Naruto-san?" she asked, Naruto slightly smiled at the girl
"No I just want to know if my New Student isn't going to bail on me when it gets difficult" Naruto said, he wasn't fully comfortable with being a Teacher to someone that wasn't Konohamaru but if what Mizore said was true and she wanted nothing but to protect Tsukune it would make his job far easier
"Want me to walk you to your dorm? It's a bit late to be walking around and all" Naruto offered, the Snow woman shook her head
"I can take care of myself, Naruto-san...goodnight and remember this is only between us" Mizore said, walking away from him Naruto watched the Retreating Yuki-onna and was still trying to process what just happened
"This day really was just full of surprises" he thought as Mizore disappeared from his sight, the Shinobi tried to downplay the blackmail in his mind and get some sleep but it was really just so creepy and embarrassing how Mizore could simply sneak up on him like that, still maybe it wouldn't be so bad
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End
Alright before the Flamers show up and I am burnt with fires from the ninth layer of hell just hear me out alright, this is gonna be a long one, like I said I re-wrote this Chapter five or six times, during that time, I was doing other things that I'd like to share here
I made an outline of everything I want to do in this fanfic and separate it into Chapters which ended in Sixty Chapters so that's the general amount you'll see here, I was also working on practicing my writing when it came to action scenes and just in general, it's still pretty bad so if anyone has tips on that don't be afraid to chime in and I'll rewrite some scenes as for why this took so long? Two reason, one I got lazy and two I sorta of became a perfectionist with this hence the five rewrites, three that sorta of lead to Writer's block, I actually cut a lot from this Chapter that I want to use in the next Chapter because it'll flow better there than it would here, I know I said I am not confident about this Chapter and that's still true but I don't want to leave you guys hanging for so long or I'll get that problem where it's harder to update, the longer your on leave but I am rambling now for the reviews
There was a guest dude that gave me three reviews for the three different Chapters that I did like going through despite the amount of anxiety reading reviews gives me.
I can definitely see where you're coming from when you said it was more of an OC Naruto and honestly I don't know how I can change that really, I mean if you have an idea like I said send them to me, but the way I write up Naruto is pretty much Watching all of his antics in the OVAs and his Fights, put him in a scenario and just write what this Naruto would do, of course, it's going to be different because that whole thing I said in the beginning where Jiraiya hammered him out to be a better Shinobi, but he should be going back to Normal every now and then
that paranoia thing you mentioned should be gone now because he's more conformable with Mikogami, I might still bring it back for the Kyuubi thing in the future but yeah, for the last thing that whole Barrier Idea you had is actually really smart, so I might just go with that
Right now for that guy who didn't want Moka in the harem, Don't get me wrong man I really think Moka's pretty overrated too I mean like Fifty-six percent of all fanfics in this Crossover have that paring and for the same reason so I might take you up on that offer for swapping her out for Kurumu that said, if I am doing that I'll keep them to have more of a friendship over strength, no promises through and that's in the far future like in Chapter 32, at best, I think that's all of the reviews if I missed any sorry
Now for the thing everyone is going to burn me alive for, following the anime instead of the Manga, listen I want to be more Comfortable and have more information about the Manga the same way I do with Naruto, I did finish it don't get me wrong but with Naruto just to write this fanfic I had to read most of the Manga again, look up informational videos for different techniques stuff like that and I am going to keep certain elements from the manga here, I just don't think I can pull off the Fairy tale, Alucard, and Akasha thing while trying to do a different Shinobi world war honestly with my current writing skills it'll just fall apart
The Future fanfic is going to be far more legenthly than this one, easily 110 chapters and I want to be sure I have everything right so it's more enjoyable for you guys how I twist the story, that also means I going to have to reread the Manga at least two more times before I start that fanfic, so that might be time-consuming I want to have everything down to the bone by then, also Tsukune is actually more enjoyable in the manga that's it a crime what happened to him in the anime oh and Moka's sisters will still be here so don't be worried about that if you want Kahlua or Akua or even Kokoa just tell me and I'll tally it out but the way they'll appear is going to be different so sorry
I am already throwing around ideas for that future fanfic so if you want a certain thing to play out differently just write in, I know I can't please everyone so again sorry about that now back to this fanfic
Right so the big thing here is that Naruto is training Mizore now hear me out, man, she isn't going to pull off a Rasengan or any of that stuff no, that happened because one it helps Naruto learn more about Yokai and how they work or fight, two it's a good way to push them closer together without forcing it I think, three it buffs Mizore to be just behind Current Inner Moka by the time they are done which will help with Future enemies like Anti-thesis which will still happen here so that's my excuse anyway
Now there are going to be Chapters that just completely focus on School life and Chapters that mostly focus on Konoha, I won't give the elemental nations their own Chapters until the war starts, as for fighting scenes, I'll do my best on them I don't think I am that good at them honestly but I'll try, oh another thing once I am done with this fanfic I am going to delete these notes at the end anyway, sorry about the long wait next Chapter should not take this long, thanks for understanding lads, I'll heavily edit out my grammar mistakes here in post and I might even get a beta reader at some point who knows, imo this Chapter feels a bit weak sorry about that
Again promise it won't take this long and sorry for the long note at the end I just wanted to get some stuff clear, I am gonna go start the next one right away see ya
ps. the titles for Chapters I make are really off-putting huh?