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Chapter one
Diego's sister had taken Manny, Sid and himself to Valley National park for the week. Manny and Sid where having fun but Diego knew better then to think that his sister had just taken them to a Valley National park just to have fun, she had a plan, he just didn't know what it was, but he wasn't going to worry about that. Diego was walking with Manny towards a make shift daycare being run by Sid, Diego was slower than usual because of his knee brace. Diego stared at the strange site in front of him, Sid was running around trying to control the younger kids around him.
"Sid, what are you doing?" Manny asked his small friend.
"I opened a daycare." Sid said with excitement.
"Sid, your not qualified to take care of kids." Diego told his slightly idiotic friend.
"And you don't even know how to take care of yourself." Manny agreed.
"May I remind you two that I'm the one that started this heard." Sid said before walking away.
"Hey, lets play pin the tail on the giant." On of the kids said followed by cheers.
"Sid, get the fuck back here!" Manny and Diego yelled.
A couple of miles away Sid was mumbling to himself.
"You know what, I'm going to go down the tallest and most dangers slid here." Sid said to himself then walked towards the place he was talking about.
Back at Sid's made up day care Manny had just finished telling the kids a story and once he was done they started asking a lot of annoying question until Manny broke.
"Because thats just how it is, one big happy family. The. end." Manny said angrily.
"Then wheres your big happy family?" A little girl asked.
Diego saw that the question was hitting a soft spot for Manny so he stepped in,"And then a saber came and ate all the little kids."
This is when all the kids screamed and ran away.
"You ok man," Diego asked his friend.
"Ya, you need help up?" Manny asked.
"Ya, it is impossible to get up with this knee brace on." Diego said, afterwords being pulled up by Manny.
"Hey, some idiot is going down the falls." A guy told them.
"Please tell me thats not who I think it is." Manny pleaded.
"What do you think." Diego said sarcastically.
They then ran towards where Sid was going to jump.
Right at the falls a lot of people where standing around and shouting. Sid him self was counting to when he was going to jump, but was taking forever.
"Jump! Jump! Jump!" Diego yelled with the group.
Manny gave Diego a glair that would scare a demon.
"What, it's catchy," Diego said in defense.
"Sid, come down!" Manny yelled at his small friend.
"Manny, you and I both know that we are going to half to go up there and drag him back hear." Diego said to him.
"If Sid lives, remind me to kill him." Manny told Diego before climbing up the ladder.
When Sid was about to jump down the slide Manny came up and blocked his way.
"Get out of my way Manny," Sid yelled at his large friend,"I'm going to jump down this slide, then you two are going to have to show me some respect."
"If you jump, the only respect you'll get is respect for the dead." Manny rudely said to Sid.
"Will you two stop yelling and come and look at this." Diego said to both of them.
Diego was looking at the wall of the dame and was looking at a large crack in it.
"What is it?" Manny asked.
"The dame," Diego said then pointed at the crack,"It's going to brake."
"Your right, this in tire valley is going to be under water in a couple of days." Manny said.
"Can't we just leave through the car tunnels like we got here?" Sid asked.
"No, remember those trimmers the other day. They filled up the tunnels and wont be cleared until next week." Diego explained.
"Wait, aren't there a bunch of boats on the other side of the valley? They can probably fit every body in the valley." Manny remembered.
"Oh ya, you're right. And I thought I was the only smart one in the group." Diego said sarcastically.
"Come on we need to go tell everybody." Manny said.
They started to go walking to the stares that led to the ground when Manny slipped sending the three boys down the dangerous slide.