Hi everyone, sorry for having been absent for so long. This is largely part due to one thing, and that is that's i am a Missionary with a non-profit Christian Organization and haven't really had the time to write he next chapter. However, upon rereading this story I realized a few things:
1) I had intended for there to be no magic whatsoever ... and I basically gave Kirito magic -.-"
2) I've made too many OC's and can't develop them all
3) I gave a lot of over description (which you all pointed out to me; thank you btw!) of equipment and things, but not enough thought went into the actual background world itself.
As such I will be doing a complete Reboot and remake of the story.
Here are to answer few of the questions I know are going to come up.
1) When will it be out? - I have no idea, I will write when I can but working with Youth With A Mission, I do have other much more serious commitments and will not Ben putting all my effort into this story.
2) Will it still be a Kirito-Argo story - Yes, completely.
3) Which OC's will I be keeping? - General Arashi and Ko will be transferred over to the new rebooted version of Seven Kingdoms Online. The story also will have a Ko-Yuuki pairing too.
4) Why do I write with so much description? - Because I studied Literature during high school and did a first year uni course on Literature text from the Victorian Era and enjoy them very much. The writing style I utilize is a mix of modern and Victorian writing. Every description, every word, every color, is a symbol and has a meaning behind it (as in I take time to sit down and think about how to symbolically represent something through subtle mean stuff that most people will not get).
Whilst I do admit and agree that's I did go overboard with some description, a lot of the world description has one purpose. That is f you take time to read every word and vividly imagine it within your mind, you will be able to actually place yourself in the place of the character. Whether or not you choose to engage the story a the that level is, and should, be up to you. But this writing style WILL NOT BE CHANGING. I do not write to please an audience, i write because it is enjoyable. I enjoy getting reviews, but that's is not, and never will be, my primary focus or goal.
4) What will this new rebooted version be on? - Same premises as this current form, but no magical bull crap for anyone and a more fleshed out background for consistency.
5) Will it still be an OP Kirito story? - Yes, very much a yes.
Thank you all who have been reading this story, I'm sorry that I have to bring it down, but I realized that it wasn't going in a direction that I had intended for it. God bless and have a great day!
