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Thought
(I recommend playing this after Sans says "you dirty traitors"
youtubeDOTcom/watch?v=Ykd6j9I2hhA&lc=z133sfnizvugwvpoo04cfnfrfkj3uddzocs (Or just look up Dunkage if you can't be bothered typing that in [I know I can't]) and thanks to DropLikeAnECake for letting me use Dunkage.)
The murderers awoke at their last save point. Dreading what would happen next. They crept cautiously into the Judgement Hall, slowly sneaking forward.
Suddenly, the floor broke open and they fell into a pit of bones.
"WANNA TRY AGAIN? NO? TOO BAD, CAUSE YOU'RE GOING AGAIN ANYWAY." Sans' voice boomed out and the world reset again.
They ran in this time, dodging his first attacks before a wall of Blasters incinerated the trio.
"TOO SLOW FREAKS." Another Reset.
Sans attempted to engage them in direct combat, but they ran past him.
"WHERE DO YOU THINK YOU ARE GOING?" His voice boomed as he broke through the doorway and charged after them.
The spirits floated quietly beside Sans as he smashed through the throne room, cornering the sadists by the barrier.
"NOWHERE LEFT TO RUN! HEH HEH." He chuckled as he charged another beam.
When released, they died again and he reset. Again.
they sure are taking their time. Sans thought. This was the 20th time he'd reset. He had been waiting for over three hours now, and was just about to get up and go after them, when a loud, spiteful giggle echoed throughout the hall.
"Saaaaaaaanssss! Oh Sansy? Where are youuuuu." The demon's voice rang out. Sans blinked, then grimaced, before finally grinning.
they found alphys' DT stocks. heh, it was getting boring anyway. Sans concluded. His eye sockets turned black and the spirits gasped as an adult sized Chara walked through the doorway. But they had changed more than in size.
Their hands had turned into claws, and they had grown horns. They had stolen a suit of guard armour and a cape of weeds billowed out behind them. Their abyssal black eyes leaked a foul ooze. Their skin was dull, lifeless and nearly transparent. Their veins showed through the skin, seemingly filled with a black substance. They had strapped their knife to their waist and were carrying Gerson's hammer. He could sense the extra souls they had absorbed. Their Soul and Inventory reeked of pure Determination and their entire being radiated negative emotions. They really had gone all out huh?
Sans shook his head, before stretching, and pulling his magic back into his body, shrinking down to the size of Papyrus. He would need all the magic he could get for the fight, no use wasting it on size.
size doesn't matter anyway. He thought, before darkening his eye sockets.
"So then. It really has come to this. An unstoppable force meets an immovable object. Heh heh heh. You really do hate us all, D.O.N'T..Y.O.U..C.H.A.R.A?" Sans said, his voice now sounding more like his own, but with a loud echo. Chara flinched when he used their name.
"How do you...?" The shocked Demon tried to ask how he knew, but Sans interrupted them.
"It's not important Demon. What is important, is saving this universe. From you. You used to be the hope of the Underground. Now you want to kill us? Us!? The ones who took you in and cared for you?! THE THE ONES WHO LOVED AND CARED FOR YOU LIKE YOU WERE OUR OWN!? Heh heh heh. I guess this was bound to happen anyway. Can never trust a human, R.I.G.H.T..F.R.I.S.K? Welp, let's get this over and done with. I want to see my friends again, and you need to die, painfully." Sans sighed and looked down at the tiled floor. Before looking up with a semi-crazed grin.
"Let's just get to the point...Y.O.U..D.I.R.T.Y..T.R.A.I.T.O.R.S!"
Chara had no time to talk as Sans immediately shattered the battlefield again, the void surrounding the fighters. He summoned the Blasters, and let them have at it. The Demon dodged almost all of his attacks. The few that hit glanced off of their armour. Sans shrugged, and dodged behind them as they swung the war hammer at him. It seemed only the body had been changed, they were still very naive. He summoned a bone club, and as they turned around swung as hard as he could at their head. A loud snapping noise echoed throughout the void as the bone club broke. The hit did work though, as they were sent flying backwards like they were a baseball...and he had just hit them with a bat...
"Home run. Heh heh heh." He chuckled, before summoning a sturdier club and teleporting to where Chara would land. He waited until they were just in front of him to swing the bone at their head. The attack and the following landing stunned them long enough for him to charge a blast. Chara just managed to get up and block the attack with their right arm. The blast ate through their armour and Sans chuckled darkly as Chara shrieked and threw themselves to the ground. The powerful blast and hot metal quickly destroying their right arm.
They stumbled to their feet in pain, before taking a vial of DT from their inventory and drinking it. Their destroyed arm slowly being replaced by a shadowed copy as they dodged Sans' bone attacks. With their arm healed, Chara screamed in rage before charging towards Sans, swinging the hammer. Sans did not back off, instead, made to parry, punishing the Demon's lack of skill. He then threw the club at them, knocking them away, before summoning a halberd made of bone. He hefted it in his hands and waited for them to get closer before attacking. Stabbing and piercing their armour. He pulled back, readying a big swing as Chara brought the hammer up to block, before slashing through their weakened side armour and cutting into their intestines. He grimaced as the black liquid flowed out of the screaming Demon, before using a swarm of bones to shove Chara away. Said Demon drank another vial of DT to heal, the holes in their side being replaced like their arm.
"You giving up yet?" Sans asked in a teasing voice.
"JUST SHUT UP SANS!" Chara yelled, before swinging the hammer full force at his leg.
"No? M.E..N.E.I.T.H.E.R" He said as he dodged the attack. He shot his hand up and a wave of bones swarmed the Demon, who lost an eye
"C'mon now, don't you think it's time to stop? Do you really believe you haven't gone far enough? Do you truly wish to kill us all? C'mon. GIVE UP! Don't make this harder than it needs to be." Sans said, as the Demon's eye was replaced by a glowing red orb with a black pupil.
"NOT A CHANCE COMEDIAN!" Chara yelled, before swinging at his head. Sans shrugged, dodging to the side and using blue magic to smash them into a pillar, before collapsing it on them. They struggled under the pillar before bursting out of it.
"Wow, you really must want to end this world huh? That's too bad. I CANNOT LET THAT HAPPEN!" Sans said, as the Demon charged at him. He dodged their attack and went back into close quarters.
"Even you must realise you've gone too far now. If you can't see that, well... A..D.E.M.O.N..L.I.K.E..Y.O.U..C.A.N.N.O.T..B.E..A.L.L.O.W.E.D..T.O..E.X.I.S.T!...Y.O.U..S.H.A.L.L..B.U.R.N..I.N..H.E.L.L..F.O.R..E.T.E.R.N.I.T.Y!" Sans yelled as he pulled the halberd back. With one large slice to their exposed side he cut the screaming Demon in half. They writhed in pain and shock for a while, before falling limp. But…
They refused. Their soul, on the verge of shattering, reformed. Their body re-connected itself. Pulling the body back together with tendrils of darkness. Their eyes snapped open as they leapt to their feet, grinning wider than the cheshire cat.
"You can't kill me Sans! I'm full of Determination!" They cackled, before swinging the dense hammer straight at a shocked Sans. Sans came to his senses just before the hammer hit. The Demon felt the hammer hit hard and break clean through bone. The sickening crack that echoed throughout the Hall was like music to their ears. They stepped back, giggling madly as a cloud of dust filled their vision...
Hey there, sorry about the cliffhanger but I'm afraid I'm taking a break for a few months to plan out the rest of the story. Plus, i'm starting year 12 so maybe the break will be longer than a few months.
Anyway, I hope you like the story so far and thank you for the kind and enthusiastic comments.