okay this is kinda hard for me to write, but as of right now "the gift" is on hiatus. One reason is life has gotten in the way and the outline was deleted. During the replanning I want to take it another way than I had originally planned. I have read the constructive criticism I've gotten and I want to thank you all, for the support (not only because I wrote it but the support I got to better me as a writer) and love I have gotten from this. this story was the first thing I've written in almost 10 years. it was hard getting on the screen how I wanted it.
I had a talk with someone dear to me tell me that I should draw on my struggles as a single mom and the wish that the father was there for their child. that they couldn't feel something that they knew I was trying to portray. they also helped me map out how the story I wanted to write.
with that being said the story will start back in a few months. I'm planning on rewriting what I have already up plus the chapter this story isn't coming to an end and I know it's selfish to ask everyone who has liked and followed this story to wait. but I hope with this that I can come back a stronger writer and a better story for everyone.
if anyone reading this has anymore constructive criticism, please tell me. it is the only way I can become stronger as a story teller. writing reports for school is easy but building a believable world isn't.
thank you all!
T.S
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