KATE'S NOTES
Hey everyone!
As always, thank you so much for following/reviewing/favoriting my stories. Sorry I haven't written anything in so long. I just haven't had time, or not in the mood, or my ideas aren't great... I might write one-shots or short stories sometimes, but I don't know when... I was thinking of writing 1 or 2 short stories recently but then I changed my mind again. lol. maybe if i keep them really short one-shots, i will be able to actually write them. Please do follow or favorite me as an author (I forgot which one it is. lol.), not just do that for some of my stories, so that you will be notified if I post up a new story! Thanks!
I still get favorites or follows sometimes for this or other stories I wrote. And each time I feel bad that I've left this story unfinished. So... I finally decided to just let you all know what I was planning on writing. I'm 99% sure I won't be able to continue writing this story because I just don't have the patience to put so much time and effort into writing the rest of this story, which I'm guessing would take at least 10 more long chapters. Even though I can't finish writing, at least I want you all to know what would have happened. Just wanted to give you guys and my stories some closure. Also, for me too, I am happier knowing how my story would have ended.
Before I do that, though, just wanted all of you American Fallen fans to know that the Fallen movie is finallyyyy going to be released this August in the United States, according to Lauren Kate! yesssssss. thoughthey've delayed it many times, but it's been released in many other countries, so hopefully this time they won't delay it again.
So, below are 3 versions of the story. I change my mind a lot about what I want to happen in the story. These are the 3 main versions that I thought of. The 2nd half of Version 3, i just made up really quickly today, so sorry if the story really sucks or doesn't make much sense. lol. =P Also, I apologize in advance for any typos, because I just want to get this done and don't have time to check for typos.
ANYONE WHO WANTS TO USE THESE NOTES TO WRITE A FANFICTION, GO AHEAD! BUT PLEASE GIVE ME SOME CREDIT. SAY THAT YOU GOT THE IDEA FROM ME ORIGINALLY, OR SOMETHING. you have my permission. because i feel like it's a waste that i came up with these ideas, but never use it.
Oh, wait. I want you to know that this story was inspired by the Buffy/Spike relationship at first. Lol. I really liked their love/hate relationship (though i know their's was very messed up in certain ways), and I really like forbidden/problematic relationships. So, Cam was supposed to really hate her but also still like her a lot. And they would argue a lot or seem to hate each other, but with this constant undercurrent of intense attraction. lots of sexual tension, etc. but i ended up making cam just kind of cold towards her and not outright hate her. lol. so that didn't really work out.
but i still wanted to include this scene where one of them is dreaming and they are racing on the college's track field at night. cam wins and they argue back and forth. luce follows him into the empty men's locker room, saying she wants to race again, best 2 out of 3, blah blah blah. they get really close to each other's faces, arguing, then cam grabs her and pushes her against the lockers. he kisses her and suddenly they're making out like crazy. they quickly get naked enough from the waist down so that he can bang her (literally) against the lockers. so, yeah... just really hot, rough hate sex. lol. inspired by that buffy/spike scene where they finally had sex and the whole place collapsed around them. hahaha.
VERSION 1:
-cam's clue before Luce's bday party:
"Abashed the devil stood and felt how awful goodness is and saw Virtue in her shape how lovely: and pined his loss." -John Milton, Paradise lost
Lucifer appears as a gold-colored snake at the party and there are a bunch of other snakes (demons) that show up, scaring everyone.
(BY THE WAY, IF YOU ARE A FAN OF LUCIFER, CHECK OUT PARADISE LOST QUOTES OR JUST LOOK UP EXPLANATIONS ABOUT IT... INTERESTING STUFF! lucifer has so many great speeches and everything is beautifully written.)
-there's supposed to be a scene where cam and luce dance, then go in a room to get some privacy to talk and he's warning her about how she's in danger. and the room has a fireplace. and that makes luce remember her dream. she asks if that was from a past life and cam admits that it really happened and they used to be lovers.
-lucifer framed their two angel friends (the bar fight). they were not even there, it was 2 demons who shape-shifted and appeared as them. this was to make sure cam had to protect luce, so that they had to be together a lot and might result in an affair.
-God and a lot of other angels are busy fighting against some aliens (i know, this is a weird idea. lol... i might have not used it...)
-Cam has black wings. Because after the end of Rapture, Lucifer hated him for helping ruin his plans, so he turned his wings black. roland's wings are black, too.
-Lucifer was never serious about killing Luce. He just wanted Cam to be close to her, hoping that she would cheat on Daniel and destroy their relationship. He also doesn't like Cam, but he hates Daniel more, so he'd rather Luce be with Cam.
-Luce and Daniel go to a park overlooking the sea. they have a romantic midnight picnic (kinda like a tea party). and then they have sex for the first time in a tent. a comfortable, big tent, though... )
-lucifer attacks luce sometimes and cam saves her each time. Luce does have an affair with Cam. lucifer tells daniel. Daniel is heartbroken but realizes love isn't everything and he'll find someone better than Luce. Focuses on his studies and soccer. Luce and Cam stay together.
-Cam's past: He was like the angel of death, taking souls of bad/evil people to hell. roland and others who work for lucifer all did this and they hate it. but not all the time. it's like jury duty, where you only have to do it sometimes, depending if you're unlucky and get chosen. if you are, though, you have to do it for around 3 years. Cam has lived so long, so he's probably had to do it a lot.
-Why Cam has a grudge against Luce: In that one past life that she had an affair with him... Later on, Daniel found out about the affair and he and Cam were fighting. Things were getting pretty dangerous and Cam started to choke Daniel. She begged Cam to let him go but he wouldn't listen. Luce grabbed a knife from a table and stabs Cam in the back. Cam collapses and Luce said she's sorry, but she realized that she never truly loved Cam. Daniel is the only person she ever loved and she regrets her affair with Cam. Cam is very hurt because she never really loved him AND she "killed" him to save Daniel. After that life, he still sometimes flirts with Luce, but mostly just to make Daniel angry. He doesn't believe it's possible for her to really love him.
-Nick character: He's supposed to also like Luce now, because he discovers that he's bi. lol. the guy he brings to the party is just pretending to be his boyfriend to see if Luce gets jealous because she still likes him. he was also maybe supposed to teach her some martial arts. but then later i thought i'd probably just eliminate that character because he's not necessary to the story. i originally had this idea about nick and luce having sex after she confessed to him back then because he felt sorry for her and also wanted to know if he was really gay (and daniel being upset later on when he found out she lied about that). but then i decided not to do that. also had this idea of lucifer possessing nick sometimes and being creepy and flirty with luce, but i decided that was stupid, too. lol.
-aubrey character: no idea what to do with her, really. lol. might have eliminated her somehow...
VERSION 2:
Lucifer kidnaps cam, luce, daniel and brings them to an island where he plays mind games and humiliates them in different ways. kind of like a reality show (but his demon minions are watching), where they have almost no privacy, living in this luxury, modern mansion, and he tries to turn them against each other. he also tries to get luce to cheat on daniel with cam (forces them to act in a play where they are a couple and have to kissing, sex scenes, etc), but when she doesn't, he still tricks/traps them into doing certain stuff that causes daniel to think they are having an affair.
(NOT SURE HOW THIS WOULD END... probably lucifer realizes daniel and luce can't be broken up and he admits he was wrong and let them go?)
VERSION 3:
(some ideas from version 1 remains true in version 3)
-bella thorne/tyler posey: i was thinking of picturing luce as bella and cam as tyler. hmm... but then changed my mind later
-Lucifer is not the bad guy. his ex-girlfriend demon who got jealous because she thinks he still likes Luce made it seem like he wanted to kill her. Lucifer has gotten over Luce, but his ex doesn't believe him.
-at the beach house, there's suddenly a big storm and a huge tornado forms over the ocean. cam wakes up daniel and luce and tells them they have to leave NOW. but they are not fast enough and they all get sucked up into the tornado. cam lets out his wings and tries to grab daniel and luce and save them, but the tornado is too powerful. then, Lucifer suddenly appears and gold light surrounds each of them. then they disappear and reappear in the sky, above an island. they all fall, but cam manages to grab them all, including lucifer (who seems injured and can't fly) and fly them to the ground safely.
-this is the secret island belonging to lucifer's current demon girlfriend, who can protect them from his ex, for a short time.
-lucifer will need some time to recover from his injuries that he got from fighting his ex, trying to stop her from creating the tornado. one wing is badly injured, i guess...
-cam and lucifer explain to daniel and luce their past, as angels, basically everything that happened.
-lucifer gives them some special weapons that can be used against powerful demons like his ex and says cam has to train daniel and luce to use them, maybe within a month, so they can leave the island before she finds them here and attacks them. they need to get roland to help them too. other angels all busy or unwilling to help them or something...
-but she has a lot of demon minions, so the chance of them surviving is low
-luce and cam have feelings for each other, but she doesn't cheat on daniel. a lot of cute/romantic/flirty cam/luce moments... cam forgives her for "killing" him in the past. lots of sweet daniel/luce moments too, but i think there would be more of cam/luce.
-everyone, including recovered lucifer go to fight his ex. the ex kills luce pretty quickly despite how the others try to protect her. luce's soul/ghost goes to heaven (she can't go back down to earth to visit daniel and can't communicate with him in anyway). cam, lucifer are injured but ok. the ex teleports away. daniel tries to commit suicide to join luce, but cam stops him. he says his family, friends would be really sad if he died. so, daniel sadly goes back to college and eventually falls in love with some girl, becomes a professional soccer player, gets married, has kids, etc. luce watches all this from heaven and is happy for him. lucifer is forgiven by God for trying to save luce and allowed back into heaven. cam and roland can come too. all their wings are white again. they and luce live happily as friends in heaven. cam and luce become a couple and lucifer and roland each find someone to love, too. oh, God punishes the ex that killed luce by turning her into a fly and she soon dies. because flies only live for 28 days. but i guess cam can't really touch her because she's a ghost/soul now. not sure. hmm. at least they get to spend time together and stuff... maybe cam can sometimes get his soul out of his body for a short time so he and luce can kiss and stuff... lol.
after around 60 years, daniel dies from cancer. he shows up in heaven and looks for luce, but she's still with cam (so they've been together 60 years). that's ok, though, since daniel still misses his wife and kids. daniel will wait for his wife to die and join him in heaven. everyone is together and happy. THE END.