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I sniffed around. Hawkfeather was nowhere. Did he decide to skip training? I didn't deserve another mousebrain! I glanced around a little, and didn't notice anything until a voice spoke. "Who are you?"
I looked to the direction of the voice. "I'm Darksong, your mentor." I meowed. The tom that spoke was a huge muscular tom with gray fur. I assumed it was Hawkfeather, with his hawklike eyes, that were pure blue with narrow black slits.
The tom widened his eyes. "Wh-what? Did something happen to Emberfrost?!" He seemed concerned.
I shook my head. Did he actually have feelings for that emotionless hunk of ice? "No, she just got tired of you." I responded.
Hawkfeather sighed. "Sorry, I was just worried that I wouldn't get trained anymore." He looked up at me. "Hey, um Emberfrost told me she would make me leader. Are you still gonna do that Darksong?" He mewed, sounding kitlike and innocent. Wow he needed some work.
I nodded. "Yeah, yeah sure. But you need some training first." I clawed a line in the ground, then stepped back about two foxlengths away. "Attack me from this line, and I'll try to improve you from there." This time I actually wanted him to attack, I knew he had good instinct.
Hawkfeather hesitated, then saw my non-testing face and leaped at me. He flew in the air for a moment, then positioned his massive paws to land on my shoulders. I tried to roll away, but he was way too heavy, and dropped on me quickly. Once he had me pinned, he let go and sat up. "Did I do good?" He asked.
I sat up. Did I really just got pinned by my apprentice? No, don't let him know i did! I hissed. "Never let your guard down!" I sprang at him swiftly, too quick for him to dodge. This time he was pinned. I smiled. "Lets work on you now." I meowed.
I worked on Hawkfeather until sunhigh for the clans. He was a good apprentice for the most part, besides being overly strong. I was back at the Dark Forest, now, resting. He made me hurt! But he was nice, a good friend. I looked forward to next training with him.
So do you se where this is going? Do ya? Please review if you d9! (That rhymes)