Disclaimer: I do not own one piece. If I did I would be rich and not poor.
Hey here is chapter 5 and the longest one I have written.
I am going to point out that luffy is going to claim something from every person he beats in a fight. Whether as trophies or as something to use or even sell. I might even make it a crew mait. Here are the items so far
The gomu gomu fruit
The weapons from helmeppos room
People have told me that doing multiple ocs makes some stories bad and i have seen the stories so let me clarify I am only doing 4 oc characters in this fic three female and one male. And their backgrounds won't be complicated all that much all 4 of them will have a devil fruit. With the exception of one they will have a legendary zoan fruit and the last will have a paramecia fruit(not gomu gomu). And I will tell you those four fruits now.
Legendary zoan inu-inu no mi model: raijuu (lightning wolf)
Legendary zoan Inu-inu no mi model: hell hound
Legendary-zoan Inu-inu no mi model: kitsune
Saizu-saizu no mi( size size fruit) paramecia
Fruits i may use but don't have any one for them is:
Kaze-kaze no mi(wind wind fruit) paramecia
Uta-uta no mi(tune tune fruit) paramecia
Kinzou-kinzou no mi ( metal metal fruit) paramecia/ logia?
And this fruit will be eaten by someones swords. It is somewhat of a bleach crossover.
Ora-ora no mi( aura aura fruit) paramecia.
If anyone has any devil fruit ideas they want me to use if I can work it in I will.
And on the final note the poll winner is decided, and the winner of the thunder bird poll is…
NAMI! With 14 votes out of 19. Sad that only 19 people voted but expected since this is a new story.
That about covers it. So onto the story
Previously on luffy's thunder legion:
The crew of four were now on there small ship with more supplies and three barrels of weapons, leaving the port of shells town.
" oi guys check that out" zoro points back to port.
They turn to see coby and the marines of the baser saluting them as they left.
" marines saluting pirates, now I've seen it all" zoro jokes
"In the port"
The marine lieutenant informs coby that they know of his past and that he better work hard.
" YES,SIR" coby hollers at the top of his lungs with joy. He was on his way towards his dream.
The lieutenant smiles and then orders his men.
" soldiers for saluting a pirate no food for a week, understood."
" YES, SIR" they chant
Now:
Chapter 5: the clown, the cat and the liar
A week has passed since zoro joined the crew and to say he was interesting was an understatement.
Zoro had no idea where he was going or even where his island was, infact he had the sense of direction of luffy when he was 9. It was interesting group that's for sure.
A lightning man who loved to eat meat and sleep, a swordsmen who drank too much and slept all day, a smooth women obsessed with being the most beautiful women in all the seas. And a girl who liked explosives and pranks. It was like it was the start of a joke with no punch line.
Luffy was lying on the deck of the boat being hungry, alvida and leona said he couldn't eat any more until dinner. He stares into the sky and sees a big bird and has an idea. he zaps himself up to the bird intending to catch it and cook it. Only to end up stuck in its beak.
" Hellllp guys, I'm stuck, the dumb bird won't let me go" luffy yelled down to the group.( I had to I love that scene, it is the last one of luffys stupidity)
" IDIOT" they shouted as they grabbed the oars and started to row as fast and hard as they could to get to the bird.
"Helllllp us please, we're drowning" the group heard they look forward in front of them and see three men drowning in the water.
" were not stopping so you have to grab onto us." zoro yells out to the three.
"What" they say but quickly grab onto the boat and pull themselves aboard the ship. They pant trying to catch their breath and relax after they were able to breath they shot up and yelled.
" that was dangerous, you morons" they shouted at the top of their lungs with shark teeth. After the yelling the three men pulled out knives and swords and pointed them at the three pirates.
" okay now hand over all your valuables, were commandeering this ship in the name of the great captain buggy." the lead pirate said. The group of three stared at the pirates.
(Time skip: three minutes)
"We're sorry we had no idea who you were, if we knew you were zoro the pirate hunter we would have never tried anything" the lead pirate said rowing the boat with his two crewmates, all with bumps on there heads.
What ever, because of you we lost site of our friend, so how did you end up in the sea anyway" zoro asks.
" it was this evil witch that tricked us out of our ship and treasure." the second pirate said.
(flash back)
The three buggy pirates were heading back to the island they were using as a base when they saw a dinghy floating. Curious they go to it to see what is in it. They peer over and see a beautiful young women lying in the boat.
The woman had shoulder length orange hair, smooth lightly tanned skin, a tight wet blue and white shirt that framed her perfectly, a tan miniskirt that barely reached the beginning of her thighs.
Huh.. huh. Oh hey i need help… I am out of food and …. water .. the only thing I have is treasure and if you help i will give it to you." the women pants out fluttering her eyes.
The pirates hearing the word treasure got excited at the prospect and quickly hop onto the woman's boat.
"Sure we'll help you just show us the treasure first okay" the lead pirate says
"Sure it is in there in the chest, take as much as you like" the women says.
The pirates hearing this rush into the sleeping quarter and find three chests of treasure. They open the first one to see it empty. Then the second and third, both were empty.
" there boys you can keep the chests and the boat and I will keep yours. Kay" the woman said with her tongue sticking out and kicked the dingy away from her and the now stolen ship.
" crap turn the ship around" the lead clown pirate yelled
"We can't the rudder is busted. She must of broken it." the second clown pirate said.
"And that's not all boys" the women shouted out across to them. The pirates look at her in wonder. The woman held up her fingers counting down from 5.
4….
3…
2..
1.
A giant cloud formed above them and a lightning bolt struck them. Then to add insult to injury a giant whirlpool formed under them and sucked the boat in.
(end flashback)
"It was like she created the whirlpool with powers" the clown pirates said with fear in their voices.
The group of three hearing this thought it was a devil fruit power she had but that didn't explain how she as able to create a thunderstorm, not to mention that the girls had never heard of a devil fruit that let you control the weather or control water.( A/N. keep this in mind as it will come up again) zoro's only thought was that whoever this woman was she had the ability to predict the weather.
(With luffy) orange island, above
"Dammit stupid bird let me go. I will shock you and make chicken out of you" luffy said as he struggled to get the bird to let go.
Luffy's struggling annoyed the bird to no end decided that the man was not worth the trouble to eat and let go of luffy.
Luffy started plummeting to earth down onto a small village.
(down below) orange island
" get back here you thief, just give us that map and this won't end bad for you" one of the clown pirates yelled out .
The thief they were chasing was the women from before with the other pirates. She ww at a loss of breath as she continued to run. The girl turned to look back. This causes her not to see the rock in front of her and to trip and fall to the floor. The pirates seeing this think that she was for them, a certain straw hat wearing captain fell out of the sky and landed in the middle of them. They all waited a moment to see what it was. When they saw a man walk out of the smoke. There reaction differed variously from the two groups. The group involving the thief was thinking how good looking the man was in a rugged way. While the clown pirate group looked at luffy and felt insecure about their looks and muscle mass compared to him. Which led to them sulking. ( A/N you would sulk to if you were standing in front of goku if you don't equal up in body build)
( It's not fair, how does a guy look that good.) the clown pirates thought. While that thought went through their heads, nami had a devious idea.
" hey babe can you take care of these bozos for me while I get the map out of here, thanks" the women said and walks up to luffy and kisses him on the cheek then runs off somewhere, thinking why she had said that and kissed his cheek.
Luffy was thinking something similar to the women, he was so deep in thought that he didn't even notice the three clown pirates charging him intending to skewer the young pirate with their swords. The three clown pirates swung down on luffy trying to slice him into pieces.
Clang
Without looking up luffy draws his second sword and blocks the clowns swords. His thoughts still on the women and the kiss. He is broken from his thoughts hearing the sound of panting and grunting. He looks and see the men who were chasing the women trying to kill him, while he had out his second sword tenshi( son of heaven) not even being able to get past the pure white sword.
" you guys should stop cause this will not end well for you" luffy says as if he was talking about the current weather. The clown pirates hearing this are infuriated at being looked down on.
" die now" the three shout and charge him. Luffy seeing this just sighed.
" they never learn." luffy muttered before doing three quick swipes at the men with the back of tenshi.
The men fell over moaning pain and conscious. Luffy stared at them and then sighed.
" why do the never learn." luffy thought and sheaths tenshi. As he walks away a shadow over took him. He looks up and sees the women from before sitting there on the edge of a house's roof swinging her legs. From where luffy was standing he had a perfect view of what was under her skirt.
(black) luffy thought as he started blushing. The women saw this and blushed as well thinking he thought she was beautiful.
" your pretty strong,how about we team up handsome." the women said. Luffy intrigued introduces himself to the orange haired beauty.
" my name is monkey D. luffy what is yours." luffy asks the women. The women smiles causing luffy to blush more.
" my name is nami. And you didn't answer my question" the now named nami reminds luffy.
Luffy was about to respond before the cause of his original incident made itself known.
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
His stomach just let out a loud growl and luffy felt a little embarrassed. Nami laughed at his stomach making him feel a little better.
" come on we can talk over food, say a little lunch date." nami flirted and after she was kicking herself.
(What am I going, I just met the guy and I am practically eye fucking him, even if he pretty cute with that slightly boyish yet rugged face and that body is good on the eyes.) nami thought and started to blush from the ideas going through her head.
Nami led luffy to one of the houses in the area, when they entered luffy saw that it as a nice cozy little building.
"So this is your home huh, it's nice not really my style but hey whatever works" luffy said as he looked around and saw it was a little messy with maps laid out all over and on the floor where her unmentionables. Luffy turned and looked away from nami's underwear lying about.( A/N I know what some of you are thinking nami is not a messy person. I just felt like it was a good scene to get them to be embarrassed and I realize I am focusing a lot on developing their relationship to fast, don't worry.)
Nami seeing what made luffy blush quickly moved to clean up her unmentionables hide them away.
(my god how could I be so stupid about that, he must think I'm a messy person.) nami thought to herself to embaresed to look at luffy.
"So you wanted me and you to work together, what was it you had in mind nami." luffy asks
Nami was broken from her embarrassment and began to explain what she does.
"I am a thief who steals from pirates, it gets dangerous and I am not that strong but with you i could steal from the strongest pirates in these seas." nami said as her eyes turned into belli.
"How do you do that with your eyes" luffy asked nami. Nami turned to luffy and looked confused.
"Do what?" nami asked actually curious as to what he meant.
"Never mind, i only have one question on your proposition." luffy said. Nami was curious and asked what.
"Will you steal from my crew?" luffy asked.
Nami was confused at what he meant and luffy saw this and elaborated.
"I am a pirate, and have no problem teaming up with you but I need to know you won't steal from me and my crew can you do that ." luffy asked and nami didn't respond or do much of anything.
Nami was in shock the guy she had been thinking about teaming up with and maybe going out on a date with is a pirate. How could she not tell he was a pirate, no normal person is that strong she should have known.
Unaware of nami's thought process luffy was beginning to worry about her. Luffy walks over and places a hand on nami's shoulder.
"Oi, oi are you alright. Nami, hey nami can you hear me." luffy asked. It barley to nami a second to break from her stupor and to smack luffy's hand away from her.
"Don't you touch me you filthy pirate, if I knew you were a I would have never even made the notion of us teaming up, all pirates are the same you aim to cause pain and destruction wherever you go and I will not be associated with that." nami rants and when she looks at luffy he was not even paying attention to nami he was just doing maintenance on his straw hat.
" LISTEN WHEN PEOPLE ARE TALKING, YOU IDIOT" nami yells at luffy and smacks the hat out of his hand.
Luffy did something she didn't expect of him he grabbed her hand and gripped it tight, not enough to really hurt but enough to make it uncomfortable.
"Don't touch my treasure ever, that is my only rule and I expect you to respect it you understand. " luffy said, his voice a little icy. Nami only nodded her head.
After seeing nami nod luffy became happy and cheery again. He went to and picked up his hat and then sat back down and took some food.
Nami just sighed and sat back down.
"So what is so important about that hat that you would call it your treasure, does it have a treasure map inside it" nami asked and if there was she was already planning to steal it. What she didn't expect was that luffy laughed at the notion that there was a treasure map.
"No, it is my treasure because it was given to me by a pirate that showed me what being a pirate was about. You think that those that pillage villages and rape the men and women are pirates no they are scum. Real pirates are the ones who live their lives full of freedom. Sure me and my crew will probably steal and attack cargo ships but we won't kill any innocent people. The life of pirates should be full of adventure and freedom not blood and carnage only the true pirates understand that." nami was shocked over what the straw hat pirate had said and was unknowingly blushing.
Nami broke out of her thoughts and shook her head clear and then glared at luffy .
"Yeah right a pirate who doesn't like to kill and destroy I'll believe it when I see it." nami said but then got curious.
"So how many people do you have on your crew, anyway?" nami asked.
"I have three crew mates so far. There's alvida and leona and then zoro who joined our crew just a couple days ago. And with you being my navigator I have 4" luffy said.
Well thats nice are they all like-, WAIT who said I would join your crew, now that I know you're a pirate I don't want anything to do with you." nami yelled. Luffy just smiled at nami and replied with no form of shame.
"Too late you are apart of my crew, as the captain I have spoken"
Nami slammed her head on the table and sweat dropped. She was about to yell at luffy and tell him off but then she had a devious idea.
"Alright I'll join your crew if you help me steal something from the pirates using this town as a base. Deal" Nami asks with an innocent smile on her face. It didn't fool luffy a bit. But he was also bored and following her along would be a source of entertainment.
"Sure, we have a deal, so do you have an idea to get us in or do you want me to destroy the place they are in." luffy asks
Nami grins and start to tell luffy her plan.
(with zoro, alvida and leona)
Zoro and the girls had just arrived at the island and tied up the idiot trio of the buggy pirates. They were anchored right next to the Big Top. the girls looked at it and thought one thing but leona couldn't keep it in just her head.
"Wow with this many cannons whoever owns the ship must be compensating for something." leona laughed at her joke.
"Sister you must learn to keep things in your head" alvida sighed but had a smirk on her face.
'Whatever lets just go find our idiot captain" zoro said. The girls just smacked him for calling luffy an idiot.
"So where should we start looking for him, anyway i mean this town is not that big but it could take us awhile to find him." zoro asks. As the girls were about to respond they see cannon fire come from what could only be the roof of the bar. The cannon ball struck a house and then exploded and took out all the houses in front of its way and went out to sea.
The group of three are shocked at the power of the cannon ball. Alvida turns and looks at the two.
"I guess we go in the direction of the cannon balls origin." alvida said. The others just nod their heads and walk in the direction mentioned.
(with name and luffy) earlier
Luffy and nami were walking towards the bar where the buggy pirates were, luffy as tied up with nami holding the end of the rope.
"Okay you know the plan right, luffy" nami asked. Luffy just rolled his eye knowing that nami was planning on leaving him with the pirates.
"Yeah, yeah I know you are going to pretend that you betrayed me and joined their crew and what not. Then you get them drunk and you steal the map and free me and then we take off with the pirates none the wiser. Right." luffy said knowing there as one lie in that statement, she wasn't going to free him. And he was prepared for that, he was just going to phase out of the holding cell or pretend to be dead if they tried to kill him.
"Good and if you're a good boy i'll give you a kiss" nami said in a condescending and playful voice. Like she was talking to a dog.
Luffy just stayed quiet as the guards noticed them.
"Oi that's the thief from before, what is she doing back here." one of the grunts said.
He went to stop nami. But she stopped in front of him and gave him the map to the grand line.
"I wish to speak with your captain please" nami said.
(Nami,luffy with buggy)
Nami had just finished explaining that she was tired of working for luffy because he was an idiot. Buggy thought for a minute before looking over at luffy, who was in a cage.
" he does seem very stupid to me, especially with that face of his." buggy said while rubbing his chin. The crew broke out laughing thinking it as a joke.
"If I look stupid, then you must be retarded red nose" luffy said trying to piss off worked.
" what was that you asshole i could kill you right now but i want to make it nice and flashy" buggy started yelling at luffy. Luffy just smiled at his handiwork.
"Boss, how about the new recruit send her old boss off in a flashy way right now" a clown grunt said.
"Not a bad idea, prepare the buggy ball" buggy yelled out and the crew started cheering like their captain announced a wedding.
"What's a buggy ball, captain" nami asked.
"It is my key to flashily conquering the grand line and becoming pirate king, a custom cannonball designed flashily by my flashy self." buggy said.
Nami looks to see the men rolling out a cannon and another carrying a cannon ball that as red and had buggies mark on it.
"Let's give a small demonstration of the ultimate weapons power" buggy said
"Aim for that building their we looted everything in that direction" one of the men said. The men working the cannon did so.
"Aim, FIRE" buggy shouted.
What happened shocked luffy and nami. When the cannon went off they expected it to go through the building and another one. What they didn't expect was to see a giant explosion right of the gecko and for the cannon ball to go all the way past the port.
The buggy pirates broke out laughing as if someone told the funniest joke in the world.
"You see that strawhat does this make you fear me cause i have this power. Buggy bragged.
"No. it makes me fear you will shoot your self up the ass and like because of how much penetrating power it has. This infuriated buggy to no end.
( this little punk, he thinks he can tell me off like that and get away with it) buggy thought.
"Point the cannon at this little shit and load one of the big ones, I want nothing left of him" buggy said and then looked at nami.
"You will have the honor of blowing him up, considerate initiation" buggy smiled cruelly at that.
Nami was only repeating one sentence in her head.
OH SHIT.
Author's notes.
I always wanted to do a cliff hanger even if it really isn't one. Sorry for taking so long to update once agaIn I will try to get a chapter out every week from now on but who knows, i kind of just sit at my computer and type whatever comes to mind and then proof read it and then add or remove shit. Well as I said above, nami won the last poll I did so she gets the first mythical zoan fruit.
Now on to the matter I have had only two oc characters sent to me. By the way nam like the characters but not what I was looking for in the ocs but I might still use them in my story. Please send in oc ideas even one from a person will do it is no guarantee that if you send in two i am going to use both it is who i like that fits my idea.
So I am done with that long thing. So you know what to do pm me, review and even flame if you like I need the criticism.
Signed your master,
Hallowmask123