Part 5
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Promises chapter 3
This chapter has been on my mind for a year now and I've been so busy with college that I almost forgot about it. After reading, I'm In Love With? By TheAnimeZankYou gave me idea of how I should write this chapter. If people have read it before, I'm sorry if it sounds alike. I'm not trying to copy anyone's storyline; it just came to me. I hope you like it. This chapter might sound like it's only Karin talking, but it's not. You will see what I mean once you read the chapter. I hope you like it.
I've decided to remove Yuki, I prefer to use Momo, she seems more fitting for this story instead. I'm changing the story line completely. Sorry if some of you readers have been reading this story since the beginning but I'm changing a few things.
The song for this chapter will be I Bet by Ciara. I hope the song doesn't upset people and doesn't confuse people too. The song fits perfectly, I hope you enjoy this.
Bold – zanpakutōs speaking
Italics – talking to themselves
The Unbelievable Pain and Love
I can't explain my feeling about him. Why did he choose her instead of me? He promised me that he would stay with me, but no he chose that stupid damn Momo Hinamori! What did I ever do to deserve this?!
"I bet you start loving me
Soon as I start loving someone else
Somebody better than you
I bet you start needing me"
That Momo is so snobby and doesn't even know how to protect herself, without Toshiro protecting her. She is nothing, but a damn weakling! Didn't she get stabbed by her damn captain who did nothing, but used her and tricked everyone? I fucking hate her! I want her to be killed by a damn hallow! I don't care if that is cruel. I can't believe he kissed?! Like what the hell was he thinking?! Let's see what will happen if I said yes to Kenji for dating him and see if Toshiro will even care.
I still don't understand why he kissed her. I can take care of myself without anyone taking care of me. I was able to obtain my zanpakutō within three days, just like Ichi did. Kaen Hien MaiKa is defiantly my kind of zanpakutō and she can beat the crap out of Toshiro.
In the Seireitei
I bet right now Karin is making Ichigo and her father go through hell and I'm the one to blame. I should of never broke her heart, but I was a jerk and I don't deserve her. I know what I did was wrong, but I was drunk. Maybe it would have saved us this pain if I just told her that I was drunk that night. But no, I wasn't thinking and I was scared of her. I shouldn't of been scared of her, I am a captain of the 10th squad and part of the 13 Gotei, so I shouldn't of been scared. Well maybe because of how angry she looked.
Sorry if I use some of the characters nick names and spelled them wrong. Also I'm not good with Japanese. So my follower would already know that, but for my new readers/followers I never use Japanese manners and I never will. Sorry if some the lyrics don't belong in certain parts of the story. Another thing is that I decided to change Karin's zanpakutō's name, sorry for people who like Karin's old zanpakutō's name. But here is her new name is, Kaen Hien Seika - Magnificent eternal sacred flame, I know its long but these three names sounded cool to me. They all mean fire. Kaen means magnificent flame, Hien means eternal flame, and Seika means sacred flame. If people don't like the name oh well.