I have gotten 5 comments, all of them complements on the story, or praise for Lea. I've gotten no suggestions as of yet, and that is actually kind of depressing, considering I ask you guys for comments and suggestions every chapter.
The thing is I don't know what you guys want me to write, which is why I ask for suggestions in the first place.
Did Clementine's parents not go to Savanna but somewhere even farther away like L.A. or even another country? How would they go about going to another country if they where?
Is Clementine going to be taught by Molly how to fight?
Will Kenny die? By the bite or bullet if he does?
Will Katjaa be bitten in Duck's place, will Lily?
Is Lea and Clementine going to run into some of the season 2 cast long before that 3 year gape happens in the time line?
What's gonna happen at St. John's dairy farm?
What happens to Christa's baby? Will it vanish (die) like it did in the game? Will Christa die in childbirth instead of her baby, leaving the baby motherless in an apocalypse?
Will there be romance between Ace and Lea (I hope not)? Will Ace split off from the group and possibly not be seen until a squeal?
And where does Sarah fit into all of this?
These are questions that still need answering in the time line. Can someone at least answer the top question before next Monday, because where exactly Clementine's parents went will be discussed in chapter 4 so I need to know by next week.
Clementine heard them, the monsters, behind the fence moaning again. She didn't hear any screaming so she didn't think they caught anyone.
It had been 4 days already, and to be frank she was getting sick of being stuck in this itty bitty tree house, she was also running low on snacks to eat while she waited for her parents to get home had already eaten all of the Oreos though so that was kind of sad, but she still had her chewy chocolate chips so it wasn't too bad.
Then she heard it, Wheim-cla-bhm it was a strange squeaky thumping noise that the fence made when ever someone tried to climb it. But if it wasn't her (look mom I'm a cat) who was climbing the fence? Surely not those stupid teenagers that liked to cover the house in paint, eggs and toilet paper, and fill her tree house with dead fish to make it stink for weeks. She was positive she saw those idiots get eaten by the monsters on day 2?
She heard voices, a man and a woman. What where they doing here, everyone had abandoned this whole block by day 3's sun rise. So it couldn't be people living on this street, most likely people from the highway, they had started jumping over the lower fences of the neighbor's yard pretty often these last few days. A last effort to get away from the monsters, but they never got very far, already bit, or the monsters just pile up at the neighbor's short fence and leak over.
It was times like this when she was glad that her fence was almost stupidly tall (7 1/2 feet), and not those stubby white picket ones.
It was almost always quiet now, everyone left or got chomped, so there was no talking to be heard. No obnoxious parties to call the police on for loud disruptions, no noisy 3 year olds (did three year olds even exists any more?) demanding ice cream, no human sound.
She had saw one, a kid get bit, he was blonde, he came through the front gate and shut it behind him before he could be chased, smart thing to do, but he was already bit. That was on the first day, he had gotten really pail and weak on the second, then on the third he just dropped, dead with no sign of coming back. So Clementine had shoved him back out of the gate. She could see him from here, in her tree house, and there he was, still as death should be.
His body had felt really hot even though it was dead, his head had felt like it was on fire. Clementine is pretty sure that he didn't come back because his brain had boiled in his scull, it was a trend (YES, I used it correctly!) she noticed, that if the brain wasn't smashed in or had a hole in it, they came back.
So if you guys can help me out with these questions I would be so happy. So please answer the questions above, and feel free to give suggestions.
