Hello everybody, this won't be a full chapter because for Christmas our entire family heads up into the mountains and no electronics are allowed. So far I have received great reviews but I need to clear something's up. One Kevin IS NOT FREAKING Kevin Spacey but based on my friend who's name is Kevin. He is that kind of guy who is an ass but people kind of like except when he's pissing them off.
Achilles, your welcome. If you have any ideas PM if you have an account.
Ok for RandomReader, I agree I could have made the start better, but as for the science behind mass accelerator weapons actually you didn't do your research. A M.A(mass accelerator) generates heat due to the many added features like ammo shavers, auto aim correctors, and such as stated in the Mass Effect would you use full auto anyway, it's a waste of ammo.
Now the Atlas weapons use chemical propellant which does generate heat but not as much as a M.A rifle. Although I never said that they could fire constantly. As for cooling the only current day weapon that needs actual cooling are machine gun style weapons. Atlas only uses the M.A style for the mass lessening of the bullet but it still uses chemical propellant. The guns would have the same recoil as a regular current day rifle like the guns in Mass Effect do.
As for my lack of scientific knowledge all that kinetic energy goes to waste with a sand grain sized round that in actual reality would go straight through flesh and leave a tiny whole in your body unless it hit a bone. As for hitting armor unless it was seriously pathetic it would more likely spark and ricochet. So a regular bullet would still do more real damage.
Also a rail gun uses magnetic properties to function while Mass Effect weapons really just creat a corridor of massless space for the bullet to fire through like the mass relays.
As for the carrier Kevin doesn't want to rely on element Zero tech due to the Reapers monopoly on the knowledge of how the tech works. It's advantages are that it doesn't worry about heat like normal ships do since it doesn't use ezzo to fire its weapons. Also the smooth bore cannon is directly from the Advanced Warfare wiki. Now how about next time you want to just complain you actually sign in so I can just PM you and not waste my readers time with your whining. If you don't like it don't fucking read my story.
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The fighting lasted nearly 13 hours after the initial shot and waged across New Baghdad as both sides tried to achieve victory. It wasn't until the Migrant Fleet had arrived in the system along with a few of Atlas's destroyers that had been on missions and assignments that the tide turned towards Atlas's side. It was lucky that the Fleet had come due to a deal made between Atlas and the Admiralty Board that Atlas could hire Quarian engineers directly from the Fleet and Atlas would pay them in raw materials.
After the last of the pirates had been dealt with and the dead recovered Kevin stood in the emergency boardroom to plan the their next move. Caemus looked for damage reports and causality lists. "We have over 2.5 million credits worth of damage and 35% of our man power is dead, that's 2500 men, Kevin. What's our plan here?"
Kevin looked over the city and sighed, "Rebuild while we can and gather our strength. Building better defenses is our top priority but we must find who sent those Mercs against us."
"Are you thinking it was the Council?"
Kevin shook his head, "they would have used the actual Turian Fleets instead and we would have lost. We don't have the numbers or fire power to face them yet."
Kevin look at a report, "Get me the Ghost Squad, we need intel and I know just the place."
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Omega
Kevin arrived at Omega on an Atlas business shuttle which was just an Asari pleasure yacht that had been armored better. Stepping out with two Atlas Heavy Troopers armed with AE4 Energy Assault Rifles Kevin smelled the air and nearly gagged, the smell of unwashed bodies, burning flesh and sewage made the air the most horrible smell ever.
Kevin strode forward and used the map on his omni-tool to find the fastest path to Afterlife. Reaching the door with a few broken arms from people bothering him and getting put down by his guards he walked past the line and handed 200 credits to the rather bored Krogan standing guard. "I believe I am on the approved list, wouldn't you say?" Kevin handed him a business card as well. "If this ever gets boring." The Krogan grinned and waved him inside. The room was loud and very crowded but Kevin just shouldered his way through towards the raised area where Aria was sitting. Allowing the guard to scan him Kevin walked up and stood before Aria.
"Well isn't this a surprise. The great Kevin Irons coming to Omega. What can I do for you today?" Aria smirked at him.
Kevin smiled lightly ignoring the light insult, "Well, you can tell everything you know about the Mercs who attacked us three days ago for starters."
"Why would I do that? You don't exactly expect me to do anything for free, now do you?"
Kevin gave a feral grin as he leaned forward, "Actually, yes I do. Unlike you I am not an egotistical fool that thinks she's untouchable. I have the firepower to take this station from you. You rule through fear but don't actually have the strength to back it up. So I can either rip this station apart for my answers or you can tell me and I will be on my way."
Aria glared at him and hissed, "You are surrounded by my people, do you honestly expect me to take that lying down? Omega has only one rule. Don't Fuck With Me!"
As she spoke Grizz reached forward to grab him when Kevin spun and grabbed his arm with his right arm as a telescopic baton came down from his left sleeve arcing with electricity as he forcibly spun Grizz and tazed him and shoved him. As this happened the Atlas troopers pulled their rifles out and pointed them at the other guards. Aria sat through all of this as if it didn't bother her in the slightest. Kevin took a moment to straighten his suit and turned back to her.
"I hope we can settle this like civilized people, Aria. I have no need to take your station and you want to remain in control of it. Just send me the information please and we stay friends, trust me Aria you will want me as a friend later in life. Let me know your answer when you decide bit do know you have a hour to choose."
As he walked away Aria growled and called after him, "Fine. The person your looking for is one of the local Eclipse leaders. I don't know which they kept their identity a secret."
Kevin walked over to her and smiled at her, "Thank you, Also a warning. In a few years a Paul Johnson will start working for you. Old enemies of his will come after him and your daughter," at this Aria stiffens slightly, "will be killed in the crossfire if she isn't warned."
He turned and walked out of the club with his two troopers behind him. Outside the Turian on his left asked, "What now, Sir?"
Kevin grinned, "Retaliation."
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There is the new mini chapter. Kevin meets Aria T'Loak. Please review this and if possible sign in please. Makes it easier to answer reviews. Also I have five openings for OCs in Ghost Squad, they will be like an advanced version of the Ghosts in COD: Ghosts.
