Chapter 5: Guys, We're not in Kansas anymore!
Well… I finally did it, I have updated this story. If any has notice my other updated, Invicta, and has yet read it I suggest you do ONLY if you want to read a Gladiator (the movie) Fanfic mixed with WoW, World of Warcraft. If you have no interest then don't read it, I won't force you too.
Now as I said before it might take a week to month for next update but I am in spring break so I will have a chance in writing more, hopefully.
One last quick thing before you read, if you haven't already, I really, REALLY, feel that I messed up on this chapter, BADLY, I don't know why. Its one of the reasons why I took so long updating. This chapter just feels like a "Fail Chapter" or something like that. Please if it sounds or 'feels' weird can make note of it as you go along and tell me what it is so I do not do it again. It really f'ed up my groove.
Disclaimer: I do not own Fallout or ATLA, only my OC's.
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"I missed" Deadshot thought in irritation as he got up from the floor, soaking wet, and calmly aimed his rifle towards the downed tribal. Her hand was over a large laser based wound on her shoulder, a wound he had caused. Jackal turned to him with a small grin on his face, something Deadshot could tell he had even with the helmet on. His eye twitched in irritation because of it..
"I thought you never missed?" Jackal commented getting a growl out of the expert marksman.
"How do you know I wasn't aiming for her shoulder?" Deadshot said in an attempt to keep his reputation intact. Jackal chuckled as he aimed his shotgun down to Katara.
"Simple," he said," I could tell you were pissed and I know you wouldn't be mad about being a little wet" he said with another chuckle. With a growl Deadshot looked at Katara in calm anger, his fingers tugging at the trigger. Katara eyes grew wide with fear.
"Hold your fire!" the LC's order stiffened both soldiers," Elizabeth check on Katara." Jose continued as Elizabeth holstered her weapon and walked towards the wounded young women. Jackal still had his weapon aimed at Katara to disarray her from trying anything while Deadshot walked towards his commanding officer.
"Sir, why are you allowing the tribal to live. She poses to be a powerful-
"The reasoning behind why I'm keeping her alive is between the General, the President and me. If they agree you would learn about it but right now you're job is to keep her and her brother alive. Long enough for this whole situation to calm down." The DeathKnight commanded causing Deadshot to straighten up, in both fear and respect, despite the LC's current condition and his distaste of his orders..
"Now if the General orders their deaths I would gladly have you shoot them." His words gave some joy to the marksmen, as he never enjoyed leaving jobs unfinished. Katara being in listening distance gulped in fear but her eyes were narrowed in anger at the man she and her brother had saved.
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"Now I'm really regretting saving that asshole" Katara thought as the doctor motioned her to stand up. Being her rebellious self she stayed on the floor staring on the ground. Leaving the doctor to order the other armored man, Jackal if she heard his name right, to stand her up. The man put his strange weapon on his back, somehow staying in place without it falling off, before he roughly picked her up by her wounded shoulder, causing Katara to grown in pain. The women gave no reaction to the man's actions instead she ordered Jackal to put her on the bed she had awoken on. The beds binds were cut with a sharp object caused by the scalpel she managed to grab with her bending.
"Now how did you get this, I wonder?" She asked holding the scalpel she used. The women apparently did not expect a responce as she began to look around the small space for anything Katara could of used to get it. After a few moments she noticed the vase standing on the nightstand next to Katara's bed containing a unirradiated plant had no water inside. She hummed in the discovering of how she escaped. As Katara sat on the bed the door on the opposite wall slide open revealing three armored soldiers wearing armor enter the room, weapons raised. A few words from the asshole (the LC) lowered their weapons and soon a man with grayish hair, wearing a thick, gray, parka like, clothing entered the room, with something burning in his mouth. It was small, with brown wrapping and a small ember burning in the front end. Smoke came out of his mouth as he removed it from his teeth.
"LC, report!"
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"Yes,sir Corporal Second Class Justin Hall, Corporal First Class Ryan Daniels, Captain Elizabeth Roosevelt and I were speaking about the lack of radiation in the atmosphere when our 'guest' escaped her binds and attacked. If you have not heard yet she has this ability to control water which allowed her to push the Corporal First Class back and miss his shot to the heart, wounding her shoulder instead. The force from the shot caused her to fall to the floor coincidentally dodging the Corporal Second Class's shotgun pellets. With the loss of not being able to use her arm it would seem she could not control the water as efficient as before. Allowing both the First and Second Class Corporals to subdue her. I ordered the cancellation on the attempt of execution from the Corporal First Class for the sake of mending her wound. Which is what the Captain is currently doing." The LC finished allowing the General to contemplate the report.
"Why did you stop Deadshot from finishing her off?" The general asked as he glanced at Katara getting an angry glare back at him. He smirked,"the girl has willpower I'll give her that." He thought as he looked back towards the LC.
"She has crucial information that would help us exceedingly in the future and" He abruptly stopped talking causing the men to look at him confusingly." I think her people might be a good addition to the Enclave as it would they have no form of radiation in their bodies or blood.." He finished causing all the people in the rooms eyes to grow wide and silent. Silent enough to hear Sokka's quiet snores. A moment later the three men the General came in with were very vocal on their dislike of his suggestion. The General, Jackal, Deadshot and Elizabeth were silent.
The LC was silent with a blank look on his face, ignoring the blatant insults to him by the soldiers. He stared at the General's eyes and he stared back. They spoke through them, having a conversation that would be very crucial for all future interactions with other tribes. After a few more moments of silent staring the General spoke.
"Close your damn mouths before I do it for you!" He commanded to the 's causing them to recoil in some fear. However, they still had enough courage to ask why he was siding with the LC.
"I ain't siding with anyone, now shut your traps or I'm going to put you three on bathroom duty for a month." That shut them up very quickly. The General walked away from the LC and towards Katara. She was poking at her now closed up wound with wide eyes. Elizabeth threw away the used stimpack syringe before saluting along with Jackal towards the general.
"At ease" Autumn said as he examined the tanned tribal. Who now carried a annoyed slash exhausted expression as she looked at her brother. Said brother was sleeping like a baby, in a deep slumber even with all the commotion. Autumn chuckled as the boy.
"Your brother is a very deep sleeper" he commented. Katara did not respond but if the look in her eyes told him that she agreed with him. Autumn's lips twitched before to turning away. It took him only a few seconds to assess her finding that she has a of lack discipline and control of her emotions. Suggesting that she was not a soldier or even trained in some form of combat, meaning her controlling over water must be minimal at best. Looking down to the llarge amount of water on the floor and the empty water containers across the room. " She was able to move around at least 10 gallons of water with only minimal control of her abilities, impressive." Autumn thought before walking back towards the was trying to stand up with the help of Deadshot and a crutch.
"You feeling well enough to walk." Autumn asked causing the LC to shake his hand in a 'so-so' motion. Autumn's eyebrow rose with an unasked question.
"I need to be their when you interrogate them, I have some suggestions that might help in getting them to talk." Autumn nodded in agreement and told the three soldiers in 's to get interrogation room 1 ready. Jose, with the help of Deadshot, began to walk around towards the exit of the infirmary but was stopped by a yell.
"What in the hell are you doing!?" Screamed Elizabeth when she had finally noticed Jose was walking in crutches stepping away from the tribal siblings.
"Great, I knew she was gonna be mad but I didn't think she was going to be this mad." The Deathknight thought as he looked towards Jackal, Deadshot, and Autumn only have them look away; in the case of Deadshot he removed Jose's arm that was over his shoulders and backed away towards Autumn. Jose's eyes twitched as his commanding officers and subordinates fear of the Doctor although understandable from prior experience dealing with an angry Elizabeth it still annoyed him.
"So much for the brotherhood among soldiers" he thought as he looked back to a fuming Elizabeth as she angrily stomped her way towards him. Her deep brown burning in frustration at the crippled LC.
"Ok, I should really stop making her angry. I've been in enough pain these past few days and I have feeling that she's going give me a lot more for all the stress I've been putting her through." Jose stabilized his footing as he rose his hands in defeat, hoping that she would relent.
"Now, Liz, let's be reasonable here, we both know tha-AHHH! Damn it!"
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The room was small only large enough to hold five or six people. It had a metal table in the center and fours chairs on both side of the table. The walls were glowing an eerie green and black. It was also completely soundproof keeping all the sound from the outside and inside . Something one of the occupants did not care very much for.
"Sokka! Can you please shut up! You're going to make it worse," Katara demanded. Sokka had been rudely awakened by Jackal causing a big scene involving Sokka for some strange and unthinkable reason trying to kill the armored soldier with a wooden spoon he had in his parka's pocket. He was swiftly knocked out once again with a smack with the butt of Jackals weapon before getting dragged to the interrogation room. Along the way she couldn't help but feel embarrassed, not because of his actions, but because he actually thought he could kill the man with a wooden spoon!
They had promptly left both of them inside for who knows how long. She didn't know if it was late in night or early in the morning. Her adrenaline has not left her, confusing her internal clock. What she did know was that they've been in the room long enough for Sokka to wake up on his own, meaning at least a few hours. She had hoped if she left him asleep the armored soldiers would return with her being the only one awake so she could try to save them both. Unlike her brother she knew when she was beaten and she also had more charisma to help talk her way out of this situation but her brother would try and escape the moment they would open the door getting them both killed in the process.
"But he woke up and now he's gonna piss them all off" Katara thought with an agitated sigh. Mere moments after he had woken up he began to scream and yell at the door. He shouts either filled with insults or pleas to let them out, a very strange mix.
"Make it worse! How can this-"
"Don't you finish that sentence, brother! Anything can get worse than it already is."The very moment she finished speaking the door slide open revealing two soldiers. She easily recognized one of them as Jackal because of his markings. The other however she did not recognized, he wore the same armor the soldiers that entered the hospital room after she attacked had worn; it's sparking shoulder of electricity mesmerising the sibling with fear and awe. He also had the same shield symbol as Jackal but also an image of a woman in a robe on his left arm. They both raised their weapons to stop both of them, mostly sokka, from attempting to escape or cause some form of trouble.
Entering the room with their weapons trained at them allowed space for the same gray haired man from before and the asshole to enter the room. The asshole, she noticed, had an ice bag in his hand placed over his crotch. A smirk came over her lips.
"At least someone hurt you. I'm just surprised it wasn't me" she thought.
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"Why?" the asshole groaned out.
" Because you're not supposed to be walking for another three hours, dumb ass!" She said as he grabbed him by the arm lifting him up.
"You, sir, are going to bed." Jose only groaned as a response. Getting hit in the nuts with steel tip boots hurt mores than any damage a Deathclaw can deal.
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"Sit" the gray haired man ordered. The siblings both sat, the brother being more reluctant than the sister. The man and the asshole sat in the chairs across from them while the two soldiers stood at their far left or far right and vise versa. The gray haired man blow smoke out of his mouth as the small brown thing was between his teeth. The smell of the smoke caused the sibling to cough and some disconvert for the asshole.
"Do you really have to smoke now, of all times?" He said to the smoking man. Who only grinned at his remark.
"I'm the commanding officer here so I can basically do whatever I want and to answer your question yes I have to smoke. Its stress relieve from all the shit that's been going on for the past 24 hours." The asshole signed before looking towards Katara. Katara stared back without fear. His mouth twitched at her action.
"General, since you're the commanding officers here, why don't you start" He said in a mock respectful voice. Katara is beginning to get the feeling that these two are old friends and that it's not a good thing..
"How about I start! Where the hell have you taken us! What do you plan to do with us and what do to plan to do the the Southern Water Tribe, you Fire Nation bastards!" Sokka screamed out causing Katara to mutter 'we're dead' getting amused expressions out of the Enclave personal.
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Sokka was angry, very angry, from the day he's been having. First, the arguments with Katara. Then, finding that Fire Nation soldier, "Who I knew was a spy all along, I knew it from the start…. I just didn't notice until it was to late, Sokka commented in his thoughts.
Then, getting knocked out and kidnapped by said Fire Nation spy. Then, waking up in a strange metal room by one of those armored soldiers.
"In my defence, I thought for sure I had a skinning knife in my pocket not a spoon," he said in his thoughts, in an attempt to reassure of himself that he wasn't a complete fool.
Then getting knocked out again to only wake up in another room that looked like it came out of his nightmares thanks to its eerie green black coloring. He started to bang on the door to try to convince them to come inside. By either one of his insults or pleas, it didn't matter to him, so he and Katara could escape.
Now it would seem that they've come in not because of his insults or pleas but because they were going to interrogate them.
" If they think they are going to interrogate us without any sort of trouble they have another thing coming." Sokka thought waiting for their response to his questions slash orders. Though when he saw their amused expressions he only got more pissed off. All Sokka did was move forward an inch before the two armored soldiers were on. He hands was grabbed and then bound by metal cuffs while the General had quick drawed his Laser pistol aiming it at his head.
"Don't you hurt him" Katara pleaded. Autumn glanced at her while he gun was still pointed.
"We're not planning to hurt either of you...yet. We want information, information we believe you have."
"Then you'll let us go?"
"That's depends on how much information you're willing to provide." He said as he holstered his weapon. Sokka was cuffed and bound to the chair, he also had a cloth covering his mouth from speaking. When Katara noticed this her thought was to free him from his bounds but after a moment of further thought she knew that having him kept from speaking would the best course of action. Ignoring Sokka pleading look her eyes blared towards the gray haired man, trying her best to not look at the asshole. Or she might not be so willing to do what they want.
"What do you want know?"She said getting Autumn to smirk. He then pulled out a small box like object and placed it on the table. He pressed side on the side and left on the table. Her curiosity getting the better of her she asked what it was.
"It's a sound recorder. Records anything from humans voices to the ocean's waves into its memory so our archivers can accurately cataloged this into our library". Katara at first wanted to deny that to be even possible but then she looked at the very advanced looking armored soldiers in front of her. It started to seem more of a possibility at that point. With a clearing of his throat Autumn began to speak.
"Ok, now lets us begin with formalities my name is Augustus Autumn General of the Enclave and leader of the Enclave military. Next, to me is Lieutenant Colonel Jose Antonio Navarro also of the Enclave military and leader of Knight Squadron." Katara eyebrows rose when she heard his faction, she was actually slightly surprised they were not Fire Nation or at least seem not be directly connected to the Fire Nation.
"My name is Katara, Daughter of Hakoda the Chieftain of the Southern Water tribe." The soldiers of the room blinked. "She's a princess?" was the soldiers collective thought.
"Huh, I didn't expect you be a princess I guess it's going to be a lot easier to talk politics between are two groups now." Autumn said getting Katara to shrug. Clearly not reacting to her own political status. Autumn 'humed' before getting out a map from his pocket.
"Do your people have maps of the area?" Autumn continued in his questioning of the water tribal half expecting her to ask what a 'map' was to his surprise she nodded.
"Yes, we even have a map of the world it's a little outdated but it should still be good." She said getting a small smile out of Autumn as he unfolded the map revealing it to be a map of the world showing everything from the Americas to Australia. Katara's eyes grew confused when she saw the paper; the LC noticed her confusion.
"What's wrong?" Katara had to hold back a glare as she looked at Autumn, ignoring the LC entirely but not his question.
" Is this the map of the Elemental Nations?" Katara asked. Elemental Nations? What are those? Was the collective thought among the soldiers. Katara noticed their confused gazes.
"You...never heard of the Elemental Nations have you?" Katara asked with some hesitation. If these people did not know what the Elemental Nations were; then where are they from? She looked at the map the general had taken out to make sure she wasn't mistaken before looking seeing Autumn, the asshole, and the two soldiers in the back shake their heads to her question.
" What are theses Elemental Nations?" Autumn asked. Katara, cycling her brain for an appropriate explanation. After some thought she chose to retell what her father had told her. Exhaling she took the map and flipped it around looking for something to write with she noticed a small yellow stick in the General's pocket. Katara quickly grabbed it and pressed down and began to draw, not at all surprised at their own advanced form of writing utensils. As she was drawing the Southern Water tribe she began tell her story.
"From the beginning of life on this world humans have been able to control the elements and because of their control the humans began to band together among those who controlled the same element." She said as she finished making crude drawing of all the four nations. She first pointed at the the Southern Water tribe.
" We of the Southern Water tribe chose to stay in the cold, icy weather because of our element, Water. We control anything that has some form water no matter it been polluted with mud, be it solid ice, rain or snow; we can control it. Not only that we can somehow gain more power when the moon is out, especially when it's a full moon." She then pointed at the Northern Water Tribe." There are two water tribes, the Southern and Northern, one for each polar ice cap. We haven't heard much from our sister tribe other than their ice stronghold still stands and they have had no Fire Nation's attacks as of yet." She moved her finger down towards the Earth Kingdoms. So far the new information is puzzling and also shocking, the LC however is quite excited but he did not show it as the possibly of actually being in a different world that would be considered fantasy excited him..
"The next group of people would be the Earthbenders in the Earth Kingdoms. I say kingdoms because the landmass for earth is so large that multiple nations have been built and fought over. The nation with most civil wars had always been the Earth Kingdoms. Thankfully most of the Wars are always stopped by the Avatars." Katara said, pausing for moment to catch her breath before continuing.
"As you would assume the Earthbenders can bend anything with earth, like sand,mud, and rock. I've even heard that some of more powerful benders can even move whole mountains and use it to attack their enemies. I...also forget to mention that Waterbenders can do a similar feat but with whirlpools and tsunamis, if there's enough then shaping the waves that is." She then moved her finger from the earth kingdom to the Air Temples.
"Next, would be the Air Temples, they are..were the most peaceful of all the four elemental nations. They were never angry with anyone; always trying to find the more peaceful route in every conflict. They were able to control air to the point they were known to be able to fly using the wind as a guide. They were fun loving people who enjoyed and tried to be happy in every moment of their lives. Though not much is known of them because they were usually secluded in high mountain temples that they were only able to reach. Sadly we will never learn anything more from them thanks to the Fire Nation." Her eyes flared with anger and rage. The Enclave glanced each other in interest. This Fire Nation has been talked about multiple times and is somehow connected to every nation. They could be a powerful threat but they could also be an essential ally.
Katara instead of pointing at the Fire Nation drawing she glared at it.
"The Fire Nation are a bunch of self centered, incestal, bastards. They declared that they seek to continue this war to spread their prosperity to the rest of the Elemental nations but all they've done has been murdering the innocent, cause mass starvation and destruction of many cities and town across the world. The first nation to fall was the Air Temples and now the monks are all extinct. They then attacked the Southern Watertribe because of the closeness of our two nations. They destroyed our stronghold, killed off most our Waterbenders, and nearly made us extinct. My father and all the men of our tribe have gone off to fight in the war against the Fire Nation in a desperate attempt at trying to bring peace back to the world. Now, the Fire Nation are fighting the Earth Kingdom and every day they control more and more ground. From what I know they have taken control of three Kingdoms already and nearly destroyed the greatest Earth Kingdom, Ba Sing Se." She growled out now seething in anger. Memories of her dead mother and ruined lives of her friends and family began to resurface. She was pulling the water from the pipe systems around the room towards them in her rage.
"Miss Katara please calm down." A charismatic voice sounded from the microphones on the top corners of the room. It caused Katara and Sokka, who was still tied up, to look around for the new voice, as Katara's anger lessening by the second. The Enclave soldiers, however, quickly stood, turned, and saluted.
" At ease gentlemen and ladies." He said as the soldiers stood in a relaxed stance with their hands at their back. The siblings were sitting in their chairs slightly confused at where the voice was coming from. Until they noticed the soldiers staring at the microphones at the top corner of the room.
"Who are you?" Katara asked staring at the microphone.
"I am the Leader of the Enclave, Miss Katara, my name is John Henry Eden. A pleasure to meet you." The President finished causing the sibling faces to be confused; they looked at Autumn with the same expression.
"I thought was the leader?" Katara asked as she looked towards Autumn.
"You're half right, my dear, he is the commanding officer of the military. I am, however, the Commander and Chief of the Military, Science division and Civilian populace. In simplistic terms I'm their chieftain while Autumn is my sub-chief." Eden finished. "I guess even with their high level of technology and organization they still are lead by a chief" Katara thought with a small smile. The Autumn shuffled slightly at being called a 'sub-chief' even though that is, in a way, the correct term to call him it still made him feel...lesser than what he really was.
"Sir, what do you need?" Autumn asked curious on why disturbed they interrogation. "Though in my opinion this is less of an interrogation more like a history lesson" Autumn thought.
" Well, I did not reveal myself for anything that has the need of you Autumn but more on requesting Miss Katara to try and control her powers" Autumn asked as Katara blushed red in embarrassment.
" Your powers were stressing the water pipes within the walls and from what I could tell, with the sensors I have at my disposal, the pipes were ready to burst if not for my interruption." Katara's blush intensified at his words. She mumbled an apology to which Eden forgave if she promised to control her powers from now on. Though she did not understand why she was feeling embarrassed. She figured it was probably because the man sounded kinder than the rest of these brute.
"Now, with that out of they way, you may now continue this informative conversation but if I may be so bold, can I to ask a question?" Eden charismatically asked the sibling who nodded their heads.
"Who is this 'Avatar' you have spoken of? From you have told us he the power to stop entire wars in the Earth Kingdoms. Why hasn't he come and fought off the Fire Nation?" Katara sighed at his question, sadness slowly showed in her eyes.
"The Avatar is a bender gifted to have the ability to control all four elements at once. Remember how I told you how powerful Earthbenders can move mountains. The Avatar has the power create mountains, create islands, he essentially can do anything really but even with all this power he's still not unkillable. For every generation of an Avatar dies they move on down cycle; the cycle is Fire, Air, Water, then Earth. The Fire nation had killed their Avatar, who at the time was a part of the Fire Nation, to allow them to invade the neighboring kingdoms. Which is also why they attacked the Air Temples first."
"Because the Air Avatar was next in line" Autumn interrupted getting a nod from Katara.
"How were they able to kill the last Fire Avatar. I understand that he can be killed but if he has the power to defeat entire armies, which in itself I find hard to believe, one nation should not have been much trouble for him."Autumn finished getting another nod from Katara.
"No one knows but from rumors I've heard coming from the occasional Earth Kingdom traders it's said that because of his age, younger and more fit Firebenders were able to defeat him. Other rumors said that he simply died from old age." Katara finished leaving a silence in the room.
In these silent moments the Enclave digested the information given to them. Even though it's incredibly hard to believe seeing her powers first hand put some level of truth into her story.
"This is so..unreal. If this Fire Nation has been fighting a war of this scale we would have seen something with our satellites." Autumn thought. "When we could still use the damn things that is" He looked towards his fellow officer and with a small between glance between each other he knew what he was thinking the same thing, mostly. "Jose probably thinks this place is not earth or some other cocimimy idea he has in his head."
"Thank you for the information, Miss Katara it was most helpful." Katara relaxed slightly at Autumn's words.
"So you're going to let us go?" Her eyes filled with hope.
"Yes" Sokka and Katara's eyes grew in happiness at the general's words, small smiles were growing on there lips.
"But," the word caused both of the siblings happiness to fade almost as fast as it had come." before you go we have a proposition for you two." The siblings looked at each other in confusion.
"LC. Navarro spoke of the possibility that you two may be a part of the Enclave. Well, you won't, technically, be a member you will be more of an allie trained by us and under our protection. We will also be willing to trade medicine, maybe some of our food, for more information. We,however, are not willing to trade any of our weaponry or armor." The water tribals eyes grew wide in confusion before Katara's eyes narrowed in anger. She looked towards the man who had ordered her kidnapping.
"Join you! You had kidnapped us and you expect us to join you! We gave what you wanted and we hope you will have enough honor or whatever you value in society to follow through with your promise." The soldiers behind them clicked their safeties off but there were told to stand down by Autumn waving his hand.
"We aim to still keep that promise. Even though you are not a part of the Enclave you and your village are unaffected humans making your value to us to be very high. We only wish for our people to be friendly to each other, maybe even allies. This arrangement is very beneficial for your people. As you said most of your men have gone leaving only, in what I assume to be elderly,women and children. I suggest to remove any former predacious and think of all the positives you would gain. " Autumn said calmly. His closed Katara mouth gave a contemplative look on her face. They stared at her expressions amusingly as she thought on all the possibilities with allying her people with the Enclave. It took twenty minutes later before she spoke.
"I'll admit our people have been barely scraping by since it's only my brother and I gathering and hunting for food. You helping us hunt or even providing us food would be great my people but I need to think on it a little more longer and talk to my brother about it since he's a bit tied up at the moment.'" Katara finished with a slightly sheepish look as her brother brooded next her. The officers chuckled at her unintended pun causing to blush in embarrassment.
Katara then cleared her throat and controlled her reddened cheeks before continuing to speak.
"I do have one question though and I think an answer since I've been more cooperative with you." She said determinedly.
" That's fair" Autumn answered with mild curiosity.
" What did you mean by "unaffected" humans?" Katara asked getting a sigh from Autumn before turning towards the LC.
"Maybe you should tell her, Jose, history is your best subject, after all." The LC nodded before he flipped the map over, back to the images of Earth nations. Taking a deep breath he began.
" If you want some sort of proof on what I'm about say we have more than enough evidence to prove. We, the Enclave, are not from this world, this planet. If my prediction is correct then We come from a different world, a world called Earth.
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I feel as if some of you might of predicted on the whole "ally" thing, I would of if I was the reader but I hope I still didn't disappoint ( too much). Again this chapter 'feels' very wrong to me I don't know why.
I know its a dick move for it being a cliffhanger but I think this would be a better ending since if continued this it'll feel very, very, dragged out as I was almost 10k in and I was only 75% finished with what I envisioned for the chapter!
Another thing I hope the whole survival from a close range laser/plasma shell fight between Jackal and Deadshot and Katara did not seem super cheap and have at some form of realism to it.
If any of you have criticism please try and make it constructive. Also if you enjoy my story please either fave/follow/review or check in once in awhile to see if there's an update.
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