Authors note

I want to ask your opinions so please send me a pm or review, now I know some of you have said to me about the grammar mistakes. So I had a look online and find this grammar software that might help me, I don't know if it any good as I am yet to try it,

But my question is, should I delete chapters 1 & 2 and try to fix them or should I leave them up and just start using the software on the next chapter

Please let me know thanks

If you want me to take it down then I will be taking it down tomorrow morning and will try my hardest to get it back up the same day

Thanks you