Thanks Icytopia for the reviews, ill try and follow your suggestions!
The patrol exited the camp and started making thier way to Sunningrocks, the fresh leaf-bare snow making a soft cushion under their paws. "Thunderclan hasn't been trying to take back Sunningrocks in 3 moons..." Eagletalon darkly said, worry clouding his gaze. "And we haven't seen any activity from them from a while." he added, shivering from the icy winds.
"So? Better for us at least. No need for pointless fighting." Stonepaw replied, refreshing the scent boundaries. "And we dont get to do much." he purred, stopping by Stormflight, whispering something in her ear.
"Stonepaw needs to talk to me, ill catch up with you guys later" Stormflight told the rest of the patrol. "So what do you need Stonepaw?" the beautiful tabby asked Stonepaw, her eyes shining in the dawn sun.
"I needed to ask you something, important to me." He said, staring at his paws. "Do you, like me?" he asked quickly, lowering himself to the ground.
"Of course I do! Your my best friend!" her voice rang in Stonepaws ears, but he got out of his trance and asked a second question.
"Not like me as a friend, like, I meant to say, do you love me?" he said softer, trying his best to stand up straight, even though his paws were shaky.
"Oh! Um, I havent thought that you would ask that..." She started, startled. "I do love you but, I just dont know if you do." she mumbled, gaze softening as she looked at Stonepaw.
"You mouse-brain!" he purred back, "If i didnt why would I ask you?" he stopped shaking, his eyes warm with affection.
"Sorry! But I thought you liked Ivystripe, so I didnt have the guts to ask yo-" she started as she was cut off by a menacing growl.
"What are you two doing in our land!
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Whew, thank Starclan i finished, this fanfic buissness is harder than i thought. Ill get chapter 3 out by next week, if not, Monday the following. And yes, there will be lemons here and there so be warned. Au revoir!