Hey guys What up? So I have a contests. I want a nickname for my readers and have no idea what to name them. So I'm going to tell you so nickname I'm called and I want you guys to use the review to make your own. Sound good? ok.

I go by, Lynn, Evil Queen, Evil Prank Queen, Uri, and the rare account Zeke. But that what I go by. So use these nick names and come up with something. If I get 0 by tomorrow I will end up coming up with one you'll all hate. So get to work – Lyn

Disclamier….do I really need to do this?


Last Time

"I'll tell you later tonight" I text him and he look over at me and nods


Tris POV

After lunch, we head to gym with Coach Amar and I'm ready. Today the rumors are fighting. I have down hand to hand combat, Knife throwing, and Guns since I move in with Tori, so 4 years. I have NEVER lost a fight and I have even train in the Top fight club, Dauntless.

"Ok class todays are Fighting. You most likely know because someone couldn't keep their mouth shut. The person you will be fighting is on the broad. Will be fight till we have one winner. First place get an A for the rest of the year" Coach says

Fight for Today

Four Vs Eric

Chris Vs Lauran

Mal Vs Molly

Tris Vs Peter

Will Vs Al

Zeke vs Drew

Shauna Vs Uri

I feel bad for Peter because I am going to kick his ass. I don't know Al very well but he part of Peter "gang" as they like to say. He doesn't seem like he would know how to fight. He seems more of a geek that would be pick on my Peter's "gang" but I feel bad for him cause Will can fight. I mean he's a part of this group and this group seem Dauntless.

The fights start with Four winning, then Chris, followed by Mal. Now it my turn. So me and Peter get in stance. But I want to try something so I make it look like I'll start cry any minute.

"What wrong Stiff. Do you not wanted that pretty face to be hurt? I bet your just scared, right. Is the Big bad Six afraid of Me? I'll go easy on you if you beg" he mocks. He gets out of stance. He is such an idiot. But with that I punch him in the neck and then chest. This make him winded. He tries to punch me in the stomach but I block it. But before I could block the next punch he punches my jaw and try to kick my feet out from under me. I jump high enough to miss his foot from knocking me over and to kick his chest. This knocks him over. I kick his side and punch his mouth and I hear Coach yell stops so I do with on last punch to the nose till I hear a breaking sound. Then I get pulled off by Four and he pulls me off the mat.

"You ok?" he whispers in my ear

"Yeah, I think I may have broken his nose though" I whisper back and he nods

Will, Zeke, and Uri won the next fight mean I had to fight one of my friends.

"Ok next list up. I know the people who won are all friends. But suck it up and fight. I don't want to hear you lost a friend like my last gym class got it. Oh and these will be three at a time. Mal you're out, you look to bet up" Coach yell and we nod

Second fights

Four Vs Zeke Vs Chris

Uri Vs Tris Vs Will

In the first fight, I can tell odds are again Four. Right away Zeke and Chris team up. Four right away goes hits Chris stomach and chest, then knock her feet out from under her. Coach call her out and I give her and ice pack. Then it just Zeke and Four, Four looks like more of a history with fight. While Zeke looks, he knows good amount, but not enough to bet Four. Next thing I know Four is punching Zeke in the mouth while Zeke punches Four in the stomach. A good time later Zeke on the floor with a bleeding nose, cut lip, and most likely bruising all over. But for only got hit in his stomach, shoulder, and side of nose. Now it my turn. I wasn't going full out when I was fitting Peter maybe 35% but I may do 45% with this one. Last time I wanted full out 3 dude that were twice my size end up in the hospital. Plus, I did that to a few punching bags and broke them down from hanging. Six in one day, Do you know how hard it is to do that? I didn't even break a sweat till the fifth.

"Ok Will, Uri, here please." Coach yells I hear I snit bit of the conversation. It sounds like go easy on her…. that would not be smart so when they are done I ran over to the ring.

"Just a warning, I won't go easy" I say and they nod

"Start" Coach yells

I end up getting have Uri and Will team up on me. BIG mistake because I notice Uri leave his neck and top have of his chest in his last fight. Will in his last fight left his stomach. They are still leaving this open. I elbow Uri neck and Will stomach. This is when they are they are weak so I kick Will's side and elbow Uri back. They then kick my side and punch my back. And let say that hurt like Hell. So, I hit the foot that kick my side knocking Uri over and I take the hand that punch my back twist it not to hard but not too soft and push. Coach calls Will out and it just me and Uri which end fast when I punch Uri stomach harder then I meant to he double over. Coach calls him out calling a 15 minute break. Then our group starts forming a circle and talking. But Uri and Will look in pain

"Sorry guys, I didn't mean to hurt you too bad. But I do feel really bad." I tell them looking down

"It ok, but you have to tell us where you learned to fight." Will says and everyone in the group looks at me

"You'll find out tomorrow it one of my many things that will be told." I say and they sigh

"Come on Tris you at least have to help me. You got lucky you didn't have Four. He's never lost a fight" Chris says pouting

"Yeah Tris help us Girls out. We need some form of help when were in a fight" Mal says

"Yeah Tris what happens if we get corner and you or one of the guys isn't there then what?" Shauna asks

"I'll think about it. Last time I fought before today I sent 3 dude twice my size to the hospital. Then knock 6 punching bags down going full out. Not even breaking a sweat till the 5 th I'd rather not teach my friends how to do that. Plus, you know enough to get out of problem. Also, every girl knows the best spot to hit when that happens." I says

"Wow, Tris maybe little but she got fighting skills. But you'll never be able to bet Four your small and got speed but four has strength on his side." Will says

"Yeah I bet you that you couldn't even knock him out." Zeke say

"Ok what the Bet here?" I says

"Well first we spill up see who where on this bet" then all the guys are on Four side while all the girls are on mine side. The boys huddle in small circle and talk low enough we can't hear them. When they come up Four has a smile

"Ok If I win we get a kiss from the girl we pick for a week. So, that means Shauna has to kiss Zeke, Mal has to kiss Uri, Chris has to kiss Will, and Tris has to Kiss me." Four says. I look at the girls they are blushing. I know if I wasn't try to hide it I would be to but we nod

"Fine but if I win you have to wait hand and foot for a week" I say and they nod a little to ready

"Ok break over Four, Tris let go" Coach yells, so we do

"Start" he yells again

Four goes for my stomach but I block. He leaves really no opening for a punch so I'll have to go on defended till he tries to knock my feet out from under me. But I do this and kick his chest like I did before. He tries try to punch my side when I was get back on my feet. But I was ready and take his fist and turn it just the right amount to cause pain. When I do I push back making him fall over. I jump on top like I did for Peter but this time my feet on hands and body so his legs can move. I punch him once in the stomach for good measures. That it and when he is down for 6 seconds not being able to get up. (A.n 6 seconds was the time the person had to be stuck on the ground to win)

"Winner Tris" Coach yell holding up my hand

The girls are screaming and I walk over

"Look like you boys have to wait on us hand and foot." I say with an evil grin

"Ok you win Tris but just this once will we wait on you" Zeke say bowing down

Shauna looking brave and speak up

"Zeke you have to take me on a date. If you do I'll let you go on your waiting on us hand and foot" She says

Zeke looks really happy and starts jumping up and down

"Deal, I was going to ask you on a date after school" he says with the biggest grin ever

Soon all the girls are asking Chris asks Will, Mal asks Uri, then it just me and Four but we already have one

"that not fair they get out but I already asked you. How will I get free from being your Slave?" he asks and our group is staring at him like he's crazy

"I'll make a deal with you, you take me on this date I have already agreed on. BUT you know have to get Chris not to dress me up like a Barbie doll. And your free." I whisper to him he nods

"Chris, you're not allowed to dress Tris up for this date" he say.

"And why not? You may be the big bad Four but you haven't asked a girl out ever in the time I've know you. Maybe in the time of Zeke because he's know you since 1 st grade. Plus, this may be the only chance she get to be dressed up by me" Chris responses and everyone looks at her

"Fine but you have more trouble getting out of the next one. But only if tomrrow you kick everyone out and tell me everything" she says and I nod

"OK your free AFTER the date. Until then you wait on me" I says and he looks scared

"It not going to be that bad. Worse thing I'll make you do is eat one of my cake slice to see if it better or worse then schools. With that he nods

"We better hurry we got 3 minutes till music" they nod and I start running


Sorry next chapter will have Tris is history. I just wanted to do this. I want Four to find out on the date. -lyn