Hey guys, so I had a guest tell me my spelling and grammar sucked. I'm sorry to say there nothing I can do. My brain doesn't pick up on the thing that are wrong like that. I was born that way and no matter how I try I will be bad. So, if think my grammar is bad there nothing I can do. Even the doctor have said that sooooo…-Lyn

Disclaimer: VR has a life. I am a Fangirl so my life is books…


Last Time

"We better hurry we got 3 minutes till music" they nod and I start running


Tris POV

When we get to music we sit down and listen. Nothing really good happened. Me, Chris, and Four walk to Art. The other guys I a different class. When we get there are in class assignment was to draw a tattoo we would get. I have a few tattoos already. I have a these black angle wings on my back to hide some marks, I have a tattoo that I think stands for bravery. (It the Dauntless sign guys) I also have black rose on the inside of my left wrist. I been thinking of getting another but I wanted Tori to do it like she done my other, we've just been busy. But I draw Three Ravens flying to my heart. They stand for my parents and brother. I'm done with half the class left and I look around. I just notice now Four sitting next to me. While Chris is in front of me. Then Four pass me a note

(Tris and Four)

So, do I really have to wait on you hand and foot?

Nope, try a piece of my cake. Tori says it better than the cafeteria. But I wanted a second opinion.

Oh ok, so you ready for tonight?

Yeah, but I'm just wear what I have on now. I'm not Chris going over bored here

He looks over at me when he down reading it

Will you look fine "Just the way you are" when I read it I almost burst out laughing. And he has a smirk

"And when you smile the whole world stops and stares for awhile". Did you really think that would work?

"Cause girl your amazing just the way you are". I was hoping. Oh BTW your song with Shawn was amazing. Zeke couldn't stop talking about this morning. When you record it?

Umm….that wasn't supposed to be out for another week….was it on youtube or itunes?

Youtube. I guess someone leaked it. I got to finish my Drawing. You Done

Yep there a chance it was leaked. And yeah you should finish. I'm going to draw something random now

I sit there drawing a girl surrounded by shadows with black angle wings and black hair. She would be like a shadow but alive. I used to use this girl when I made up stories. She was the girl whose family was gone, she starting getting bullied and tried to blend in. one day she had this beautiful back wings, she loved them and later found out she could go into shadows. She soon made some friends that were like her. She found her mom who was taken by a king. Her mom dies again. It just a sad story I wrote when I was 13.


(The picture will be my profile pic if you wanted to see it. I drew it)


Time skip to the date

I'm wear what I wore this morning just the jacket not covering my stomach anymore. When four picks me up he come up on a Motorcycle and I walk out

"Nice ride" I say when he hands me a helmet

"Thanks, have you ever ridden one?" four asks

"Yep" with that I put my arms around him he winced but I didn't say anything and were off. He drove for a good 30 minutes till we got to a park and he parked

"So what are we doing?" I ask

"Well if I tell you then it wouldn't be as fun" he responses with a smirk

We end up have a picnic and started to get to know each other. I found out his favorite color is black, his favorite band is Twenty-One Pilots. He found out my favorite color is also black, my favorite band is Fall Out Boys. Also that my cake better than the one at school. Then he kisses me

"Tris I like you"

"I like you to Four. But before you ask the question that on the tip of your tongue. I should tell you my past cause I have a feeling that will change once I do" I tell him

"What could be so bad that would happen" he says

"Well then let me start. When I was Four my Parents and brother died in a car accident. I was with them but didn't get hit as bad so I lived. My brother and dad got hit with the worst of it. They died on impact. My mom made it to the hospital before she died. I was four so I don't remember them but I learn this when I was in foster care. I had no living family so want home to home. I think I wanted to 2 homes every year but only end up staying a few weeks before they left me. The last home I stay up before Tori was the worst. I was beaten, hit by many things and my Foster "mom". The last time I was hit I was 12. He hit me with a lamp breaking my arm, then hit me with his belt. When he was done that day, I hurt so bad that I dragged myself to my room and call 911. After telling them what happened they came and locked him up and got me help." I can feel the tear that were in my eyes slip out and four just pulls me up into his lap and hold me wiping my tears away

"Hey it ok, are you done?" he say trying to calm me down and I shake my head no

"No, still got more. After I was back in foster care for 2 week before Tori adopted me. It took me time to feel like I could trust her. After a year of living with her I had her give me a few tattoos. I had her do my angle wings, rose, and the sign I always thought meant brave. Then I was still broken but started to make friends. One of them just happened to be Peter. We started going out. One night he pushed it to far. He hit me hard in the shoulder and head I don't know. I got up and even though I was dizzy ran home" Four is holding me tighter and he is wiping the tear that are coming harder.

"when I got home, Tori was still at work with the recording place. My head was throbbing and my shoulder in pain. I black out, Tori found me and rushed me to the hospital. When I woke, I had a concussion and bruise on my shoulder. When I was allowed home, I started right down my feeling they turned into songs and Tori heard me sing one time. I got a record deal. Just last year my friend Robert died of cancer. It was sad but I wrote a song that I called "Say Something". I never published it but I will sing it ever now and then when I'm down. That it but Peter does scare me, ever know and then he'll say something. Earlier at lunch he told me I'll be his. But I won't I hate him." (A.N: couldn't think how to but the warrant in so forgot I said about that in chapter 3) At this point Four just look pissed and I'm crying like crazy he's just holding me tight. I feel safe in his arms and started to calm down

"Tris I'm going to tell you something but you can't tell anyone" I nod and I get up and he take his shirt off. His back is all beat and bruised like before Tori.

"Four, who did this?" he put his shirt back on

"My 'father' did, he's been doing since my mom die when I was 8. Please don't tell anyone and please don't call me four" he say

"I won't without you telling me you can but what can I call you?"

"call me Tobias. It my name, I'm 'son' to Marcus Easton" I stand there shocked

"as Marcus Easton from Easton Records? I mean I knew he seemed off but how off do you have to be to hurt someone who's is your blood."i ask shocked

"I don't know. But know for the question I'm still going to ask. Tris will you be my Girlfriend?"

"yes, I will" I kissed him it started out slow but turn into a kiss that could melt you and I pull away. he pouts

"Come on, we better get home before Tori get nosey and calls" I whisper that last part. He kisses my cheek. We walk off hand in hand to his bike

Once we get back to my house I drag him in and we watch the first Harry Potter till I fall asleep.


That the end of this chapter. So I think I'll let the contest go till the 7 of next month. HAPPY NEW YEAR….i know some people post before and after midnight but I'm to lazy. So you get this till tomorrow at some time -Lyn