Revamped version of "My Divergent"
So, I have decided to put massive construction on this story and I hope you all like it better this way!
I don't own divergent but I do own any and all mistakes that I may have over looked
ENJOY!
Chapter 1| Tris~
I can't believe I'm finally here in dauntless, and I can't wait to see my big brother again. I've missed him so much since he defected from abnegation and left me to entertain myself. I tried to sneak out a few time to come visit him but my mom caught me each and every time. I finally understood that the woman knew me better than anyone and watched me like a freaking hawk!
I'm currently standing on a roof after jumping from the train and staring at a man that looks like he want to throw us all off to our deaths! Oh yeah, he is going to be so much fun to mess with!
"Listen up, my name is Eric and I'm one of the four leaders here in dauntless!" He grins evilly at us. "The only way you can enter our compound, is to jump your ass off this roof!" he says pointing over his shoulder. "So who's first?"
Hold the fuck up! Sexy crazy ass psycho leader, say what? Everyone turns to look at me like I've lost my fucking mind. Oh shit!
"Did I just say that shit out loud?" I groan in annoyance at myself while still looking at Eric standing on the ledge trying not to laugh at me or my lack of verbal filter.
"Yep" he tells me grinning down at me like a mad man.
Well, I've got every ones attention now! I might as well blow this shit up dauntless style.
I start to move confidently towards Eric and once I'm close enough to him, I throw him a little wink while removing my sweater. "Tris" I hear him mumble to himself. Well shit, the fucker knows my brother.
Eric jumps down from the ledge motioning for me to get my ass up there. Once I'm up I turn towards everyone with a broad smile...
"Oh look, the stiff gonna puss out!" I look at the dumb ass candor boy and give him my bitch brow. "What, got something to me say stiff?"
I just smile sweetly at the jackass. "Yeah, if you call me a fucking stiff again I'll cut your dick off and cram it down your throat asshole. Also, there's a reason I left abnegation, you moron!" I grin down at Eric and spread my arms out and free fall backwards off the ledge, and it feels fantastic; that is, until I hit something hard.
I look around and catch my breath only to see that I'm in a huge net.
I start laughing my ass off before I feel one side of the net being pulled down causing me to roll, and before I can fall to the ground I feel strong arms catch me. I look up to the person that caught me and smile brightly at my big brother before hugging the shit out of him.
Tobias grins down at me with pride once I stop choking him with my hug, and before I have a chance to say anything to him yells out causing me to cringe. "First jumper Tris, and if any of you fuckers mess with my baby sister I'll kick your asses; oh and Zeke..." Tobias looks to some guy to his right. "Pay up dude. I told you my sister wouldn't give Uriah a chance to be the first jumper, now didn't I?"
Before I can smack my brother for all the stupid shit he just spewed a black blur falls into the net catching my attention and at first I thought it was a dauntless born initiate until Tobias' starts running his trap again.
"What the hell Eric? Don't tell me my sister is the only one willing to jump!" Tobias laughs and shakes his head as Eric climbs his bulky ass out of the net.
Eric begins to laugh with my brother causing people look at him like he's lost his mind. I wonder what the hell is that about?
"No one was moving and I got tired of waiting!" Eric shrugs nonchalantly as he approaches me and my brother. "I think they were in shock from the shit that your sister did up there. So I told the slow fuckers that who ever is still standing on the roof in 5 minutes is not dauntless and not welcome here!" Eric stops and looks at me with a look that could set this whole place on fire. Jesus Christ, this man is intense! "So this is the infamous Tris..." He glances to my glaring brother then looks back at me with a wicked and mischievous grin. "Dude, I think I'm in love!"
Holy shit this man is too freaking much and my brother look like he want to strangle Eric with his bare hands.
Yes indeed, life in dauntless is gonna be a fucking blast!
After Tobias stopped murdering Eric with his eyes, and all the dumb asses on the roof have decided to join us Tobias starts screaming at everyone like they personally insulted him. "Alright everyone my name is Tobias and I'm one of your leaders, I'll also be one of the many instructors along with Eric here!" He points to Eric who is still looking at me. "You'll meet the rest of the instructors tomorrow morning but right now I'll be giving the transfers a tour of the compound so I suggest that you all pay close attention or you will get lost! After the tour, you are all free to roam around but you are not to leave the compound for any reason." Tobias glares at me for some damn reason. Asshole! "Your curfew is 10pm Sunday to Thursday, and 12pm Friday to Saturday! your to be in the training room at 8am Monday through Friday, if you are even one minute late you can go ahead and join the faction-less!" Damn who shoved that stick up Tobias' ass. "Each of you have fifty point in you individual accounts, and I suggest you spend it wisely!" Tobias yells over his shoulder and motions for the transfers to follow him.
Before I leave the room I look back at Eric over my shoulder and wink at him, I also give him a little wave as I follow the rest of the transfers.
After the tour I jump on Tobias' back for a long over due piggy back ride to the dining hall. Good God, he's still so easy to force into submission!
"I missed you, you little shit!" He smile over his shoulder at me.
"I missed you too, champ!" I kiss his cheek. "Now giddy up; I'm hungry!"
After I get my food I sit my lily white ass in between Tobias and Eric with a cheeky smile. Damn I feel so small between these two. I'm going to have to kick there asses publicly just so I can get some respect around here! My thoughts are rudely interrupted by that asshole candor dickhead that I now know as Peter.
"I see you're planning to sleep your way to the top, aren't you stiff!" The fucker looks so smug when he says this. He's got balls I'll give him that!
I hear Tobias and Eric both growl just before my brother stands and grabs the collar of Peters shirt and pulls him almost across the table. Oh Shit! My big brother is seriously gonna kill this stupid fucker!
"What the fuck did you just say you stupid little shit?" Tobias yells directly in the moron's face.
"I, I, I" The dumb ass stutters like the pussy he is.
Eric nudges me and wiggles his eyebrows when I look up at him. "Even though it wouldn't help your rank at all..." Eric whispers in my ear while my brother is distracted. "...I'm game, if you are baby!" He chuckles when he pulls away. I just lick my lips and wink at him causing him to choke a little and clear his throat.
Yeah, I won that round sugar!
"Since you're too fucking stupid to comprehend anything, let me break it down for you in a way that a candor idiot like yourself can understand!" Tobias sneers loudly. "If you ever say shit like that in my presence again I won't hesitate to toss your sorry ass in the chasm, and if you ever talk to my sister like that again you little shit, I'll break your fucking neck before you know whats happening. YOU GOT IT ASSHOLE!" My loud mouth brother fucking screams in Peter's dumbfounded face.
"Oh shit, look at his face!" I yell and point at peter! Eric and I are laughing so hard that we both almost fall to the floor. "You scared the shit out of him Tobias! Oh my God, I can't breath!" I continue to laugh hard, wheezing like a fucking pug.
Peter just nods and runs off like the pussy he is; once Tobias releases him that is. Looks like the asshole has some brains in that big ass head of his after all.
Oh shit I hope every day here is this much fun!
This story needed some massive work...
Hope you all like the new and improved version!
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