So, got another review, and, nice ideas! I kinda chuckled a bit with the quickie in the back room bit. The "Mystery Shack mech-thing" is actually called the Shacktron, or, Shackbot if you played Take Back the Falls. I might make it to where Bill traps them in an illusion. I could also kill Mabel or Dipper, but why the hell would I do that? Who in their right mind would kill one of them? The ONLY exception is if you were typing a fanfic where the plot has one of them dying. Anyways, back to the horrible idea of killing one of them, I could kill one of them to kinda take it away from the show, do something different, to where Mabel or Dipper just go insane, try to kill themselves to be with the other twin, constantly failing at it and just staying in a deep depression, of course, I will bring the twin that I decide to kill back. IF I decide to kill one of them. That's a BIG if. I could make Mabel or Dipper a dream demon while they're dead. That would copy another fanfiction author's idea. I'll think about it. I am envisioning a sexy scene with Mabel in the future. You'll have to picture it, but, it will hopefully be as sexy as I want it to be. I don't really find it that hard to sneak a lemon into a high-strung event such as weirdmageddon. Of course, it's supposed to be a VERY serious event, but, I know how to work one in there. Besides, if Mabel and Dipper want to have sex bad enough while Grunkle Stan is home, they'll go into a closet. Pacifica the bitch is the only one who knows Mabel and Dipper's relationship is so serious that they are starting to have sex with each other. Grunkle Stan will find out eventually, but I won't tell you when he will. Will he say he doesn't care? Or will he separate them immediately? F.Y.I., even I don't know if he will or not. Like I said, no plot. But, I find that with me constantly saying that you can't separate the twins in a pinecest story, I won't separate them. I find it to be so sad that I cry for about 3 hours after I read one of those AUs because, let's face it, people don't want the twins to be separated. That's why people put separations into AUs. I don't normally cry either. Actually, I was lying about the crying part. I lie a lot so, yeah. I don't lie too much when it comes to this entire website. I don't lie about this story. But when it comes to the rewatching of the gravity falls ending when Dipper and Mabel leave, you can't help but cry for months. You just, sit in your room crying your eyes out at the most random times. One thing that is different throughout this entire story from the show is this actually takes place in the fall. Not in the summer. So that means Dipper and Mabel already had their birthday. Also, it's the beginning of fall, so they won't be leaving gravity falls when weirdmageddon is over. Which means this story is actually different from the show, but the same at the same time. You see what I'm getting at? So, review whether or not my killing idea will work, and peace! And when I say sexy, I mean, sexy.
