Chapter 3: Raditz's Attack!
Tatakai: "Puff puff.. Cant take this anymore.. I fe-el like im dyin-"
In the middle of training, Tatakai colapses in exgustion!
Tien: "This guy may be weak, but his will power sure is great. He will surpass you soon Chiaotzu."
Tien seems proud of this fighter! Can our hero really be as strong as Chiaotzu in this short time!?
Tien: "Its been 28 days and his already made it this fa-"
Tien feels something mysterious, yet obvious!?
Tien: "HUH WHATS THIS!? I feel a power greater than that of Goku's! It feels dark.. Could Piccolo become that strong? This is bad, i have to wrap this up!"
An object seems to be coming there way, its moving fast and a brief shine has caught Tien Shinhans eyes for a second! What could it be?
It moves closer and... A GIRL ON A MOTOBIKE?
Blonde girl: "Hey Tien! Whats up? Ive been looking everywhere for you man, where have you been? Whos the dead guy?"
Chiaotzu: "Its Launch, shes back. Why does she always follow you Tien?"
Tien: "We dont have time for this, I thought it was the great power i sensed from that direction.. Chioutzu carry Tatakai and lets get going."
Chiaotzu: "Okay Tien!"
Launch: "OH I WONT YOU LEAVE THIS TIME 3 EYES! Why do you always run away! HYAA"
Launch takes out a gun!
POW POW! The gun made!
Tien, Chiaotzu and Tatakai have left..
Launch: "Damn it, his gone again.."
Tatakai wakes up in mid air, being carried by Chiaotzu.
Tatakai: "Huh? WHAA- You didnt teach me how to fly yet! IM GONNA FALL! Tien SAMA!"
Tien: "Shut up! This is no joking matter, Piccolo is stronger than ever and his probably going after Goku!"
Chiaotzu: "Huh!? Really? That isnt good!"
Tatakai: "Goku? Hmph.. So im finaly gonna meet the Great Son Goku just to wish him a good burial? Ill beat King Piccolo myself if Son cant do it, ive been training hard!"
Tien: "You weakling! You dont know how powerful he has become! He can distroy the whole planet!"
Chiaotzu and Tatakai: "Gulp.. The whole planet?"
Tatakai: "Im not scared! HAHAHA! KING PICCOLO YOU JUST WAIT! ILL BEA-"
Tatakai loses balance on Chiaotzu and is holding on his leg.
Tatakai: "Whaaaa! HELP! TIEN SAMA!"
Tien: "So annoying.."
Chiaotzu: "Indeed.."
As they reached the Turtle Hurmits house, they see many faces.. But none was of Goku's.
Tien: "Master Roshi! Did you feel it too? That power.."
Tatakai: "Master..? Hey Tien Sama, you never told me you had a master!"
Tatakai greets Master Roshi.
Tatakai: "Nice to meet you Master Ro- what was it? Rosheh? Roshi.. Thats it! Master Roshi! Wait Whaaah! Thee Master Roshi!? The best martial artist back in the days! Woah Tien Sama, you really are popular!"
Roshi: "Back in the days! Im still young you know! Anyways Tien.. Uhh whos that crazy looking fella you got there? Does he have a sister!?"
Blue haired girl: "Ey pervert! Thats not important right now!"
The blue haired girl strikes Roshi in the head!
Roshi: "Yeah yeah i know! Tien.. You arent the only one who felt it.. And if you are wondering, its not Goku's.. Niether is it Piccolo's. You see, just when Goku came back , he brought with him a kid, it was his son.. If you think thats family crazy! Right after he brought his son, His brother came from a different planet! Goku is an... Alien! His brother wasnt as nice as Goku, because he kidnapped Goku's son, Gohan.. And now Goku is after him with the help of Piccolo.."
Tien: "Master.. Have you been drinking too much?" (Tien's thoughts: "Has he been smoking weed lately?")
A bald headed child comes to the scene..
Balde: "Im afraid his not joking.. Its.. True.. Even worse, Chichi's gonna kill us! Even worse, what if Goku dies! Were all dead.."
Tatakai: "Im new to all this, and i dont know half of you guys, and im also probably the weakest one here! But there is something i do know.. IF WE STAND HERE AND WORRY FOR HOURS, WILL IT HELP SON GOKU IN ANYWAY!? WE HAVE TO HELP HIM EVEN IF THIS BROTHER ALIEN GUY CAN KILL ALL OF US! Are you just gonna stand here and whine like BITCHES!? Ill beat you all senseless if i have to! Im going to help Son Goku!"
Balde: "This kid actually got some balls to go up against Raditz.. Look man, even if we wanted to help them we cant really do anything.. And it isnt safe walking around with that attidute.."
Tatakai throws a punch directed straight at the bald kid!
Tatakai: "You coward! HYAA"
The bald kid dodges the punch and jabbs Tatakai's face with a fast yet light punch.
Tatakai is knocked down, but isnt knocked out!
Bald kid: "You're actually pretty fast, but it isnt enough.. Raditz would have just flicked you away like a bug. Im Krillin by the way, nice to meet you!"
Krillin's wink looked like a wink from the gods, it was as if krillen was an Angel!
Tatakai: "So-o c-ool... Krillin semp-ai.."
The sparkles didnt only light up Tatakai's eyes, but also his heart!
Blue haired girl: "Stop acting all tough and cool Krillin and how about you help Goku!"
Krillin: "Well you see Bulma, I really want to help but ill just get myself killed.."
Bulma: "Pathetic!"
Roshi: "Ouch!"
Tatakai manages to stand up, barely.
Tatakai: "Tien Sama! If we cannot help now, then please teach me more so that i can be of help next time! We wont be able to help now, so lets go back! TRAIN ME UNTIL I SPEAK THE LANGUAGE OF BLOOD, cause thats what will be the only thing ill see while training!"
Krillin: "His got spark!"
Roshi: "Indeed.."
Bulma: "Something both of you dumbwits need.."
Roshi and Krillin: "Hey!"
Talking pig: "HAHAHAHAHA she got you guys good!"
Bulma: "Oh shut it oolang, or should i say piggy!"
Oolang: Hey! Can we not!?
Tatakai: "Ill even skip this years New X Martial Arts Tournament!"
Tien: "Huh? Thats it! That will be your training, winning all the gates! I think if you make it through all the challenges, you might actually get stronger!"
Tatakai: "Huh?... Hah! I understand! Ill get that S Class title in no time! But first, teach me how to fly and shoot cool blasts!"
Tien: "*Smirk* Will do, lets get going Chiaotzu! Carry Tatakai and lets go. Master Roshi... Krillin... I leave the Raditz problem to you!"
Tien, Chioutzu, and our hero blast off!
Roshi: "I guess we should go help Goku now..
Krillin: "Yeah.."
A random angry demon woman rushes in!
Angry woman: "WHERE'S MY BABY!"
Krillin and Roshi: "ITS CHICHI!"
Somewhere far, Goku and Piccolo are fighting the evil Raditz!
Raditz: "Is that all you got... KAKKOROT!?"
Raditz's evil laugh echoed through Goku and Piccolo's ears..
Goku: "His stro-ng!"
Piccolo: "I gu-ess we can finaly agree on somthing.."
Goku: "You got that right, hehehe-hehe!"
Piccolo: "I swear Goku, you never fail to amuse me, *smirks*."
End of Chapter 3! You all know what happenes if you watched and/or read the dbz series
Im keeping the actuall story lines with just a bit of changes
biggest change would be the existance of Tatakai no Ken!
His name means Battle Sword! Named after the sword he wields! Is it destiny?
Oh and if you are curious about Tatakai's power level, its "128"
Chiaotzu is "139"
Before training under Tien, Tatakai's power level was "72"
Being a Lieutinent General which is a very high rank in the army, its right bellow General
General Blue was at "86.3"
