"Wait Dr. Tombs experiment, with my leg" Jak thought back then said
"She did see another me, a clone" Jak saw Nick and Judy looking at something, then Jak looked it was the thing that gave Jak the cleaver
"What the hell?!" Nick saw something wrong with its legs and arms, but it face was definitly Jaks, it walked odd, like it had a longer leg than the other, and its arms looked limp, so when it walked it swung them around, then it looked at them directly
"Oh my god" Jak saw the side of its face that was ok, but then saw it only had half his head, it was missing a piece of its jaw
"Dr. Tomb took my leg and jaw, he made that thing, and now its killing people! But for what? Fun?" Jak Judy and Nick all looked at each other then saw the thing almost vanish into thin air
"It uses a cleaver to rip its victims limbs off, then leave them to die, but with wierd wounds" Judy then thought of a name for the criminal
"Jak the ripper" Jak looked at her then said (Hahaha, so fucking funny, i love this story so much, i can make anything happen)
"Just like in my world, someone in london, named Jack the ripper killed people and he wore a cloak, but no one ever knew who he was, he was the best serial killer ever" Jak thought about how this Jak could start making people want the real Jak dead, if people saw him killing others
"We need to kill that thing, its got my leg, and my jaw" Jak felt all of them look at him, even Mary, then he said
"I want them back" Judy and Nick started to run after the figure, and Jak ran after the thing while carrying Mary in his arms
"Jak, what if it had the same powers as you, or its got better ones?" Jak thought for a moment before answering Mary
"Then he'll just be a little harder to kill" Jak felt his legs give a little, like it had been cut from the back, and he looked behind him, the figure was there holding a knife, he had been hiding behind a bin, when they ran in his direction
"NICK, JUDY, HES HERE" Jak set Mary behind him, and felt his leg heal, then the clone stood up straight and removed his coat, his body was mostly metal, his eyes were black, and he only had a flesh face and leg, he had an arm that resembled Jaks, which he been made of a lot of flesh Jak lost, he could move it but only up and down, or bend the elbow, the hand however moved like a normal hand
"Well, Jak nice meet brother" The clone said this while breathing out, almost like it hurt
"Not nice to meet you, metal fu-" Jak felt something enter his stomach, it was a metal spear, it went straight through, and Mary had been pulled away by Nick and Judy as they all stood a far distance away
"Fu-Fuck you" Jak pushed the spear through then picked it up and was going to use it as a weapon, but the clone, had disapeared, and Jak heard something around him, like someone whispering to him
(The clone has the abilitys that allow him to use metal off of his body, and form weapons, he can use his mind to speak to others, and make them crazy, he can also teleport, to up to ten feet at a time, before waiting five seconds to do it again)
"OI SHUT UP" Jak spun around swinging the spear, and it met with something, his clones hand
"Not strong, slow, weak" The clone yanked the spear out of Jaks hand then used the handle to drive it through Jaks torso side ways, but Jak got very angry, and he felt his entire body get hot
"Mate, you want to see fucking weak, your about to made into a goddamn mirror" Jak grabbed the spear, and it melted the metal, then he pulled the bar of steel in his body out, and twisted the tip of the metal, making a small spike, Jak lunged at the clone, who disapeared behind him, then Jak heard whispering again, and this time it was louder, like someone was screaming at him, he felt odd, like he couldnt see stright, he was so distracted, until he saw his clone, Jak heated the bar, then threw it at his clone, it drove though the clones chest, and Jak heard things start clicking then the clone pulled it out with his fake arm, he had gears and cogs in his body, that were melting then he ripped some out and made new ones placing the new ones where the old ones were, he then placed his hand on his chest, and removed it making a metal sheet over the hole
"Well, bout fucking time got goof" The clone was speaking in Jaks voice now, using words Jak used
"Oi mate, thats real fuckin creepy" Jak saw the clone pull part of it leg, off then reached inside and pulled its own bone out, then it closed automatically, it could only use Jak healing for its leg and head, anything else and it would be lost, so Jak need to either rip its head off or melt its torso then yank its head off
The clone cocked its head and looked behind Jak, then spoke
"Nick, Mayr" It had combined the names Jak said before, and Jak said
"No, Nick, Mary, anf Judy, you abominiation" Jak jumped towards the clone while spinning and kicked then smack the clone in the side, but as he flew it disapeared above Jak and slammed down on him
"Nick, Mary, and Judy your the abomination" Jak felt something sharp enter his neck then began cutting at it, Jak pulled the clones head down, burning its head, and then Jak put his hand inside its mouth
"No, i will never be an abominiation, your pieces of me i want back" Jak stuck his hand farther in and felt it come out, the clone disapeared and Jak stood up, watching the clones mouth and throat regrow
"Oh, that is so fucking nasty" The clones arm went up, into the fighting stance Jak was in, somehow he could move his arm like it was a ral one, when Jak moved forward in moved back, when Jak moved left it moved right
"So, now your copying me, because your not strong enough to fight me" Jak felt a bunch of metal pieces enter his chest, then he looked down and saw he had eight very large throwing knives in him, Jak took one out heated it then threw it at the clone, it grazed the clones flesh arm, and Jak saw the clone grab his arm then groan in pain
"Your nasty, pieces of shit" The clone said then appeared right in front of Jak, Jak felt something enter his stomach then expand, he grabbed the hands of the clone and they burnt off
"AAAAAHHHHH" The clone screamed as it fell to its knees and clutched its new stumps for hands then a metal hook, appered on his metal one, he took it and stabbed it into his flesh arm, then made a new metal hand
"So, i cant hurt your metal but you cant hurt my flesh, nd if i get rid of your leg and arm or just cut off your head, i'll be fine, since i cant be killed unless you do the same, that makes me stronger, so i just take off you limbs, then i cut your head off, and bam i win" Jak smiled then the clone did, it showed metal shards for teeth, and it had blood covering them
"Cut off your head, bam i win, you abomination" The clone replicated Jak voice perfectly, then Jak heard screaming and crying in his head, he fell to his knees gripping his head
"I'm going to win" The clones voice returned to its mechanical painful voice, and it walked to Jak, then pulled him up by his hair making a long blade with its metal arm
"No i will" Jak grabbed the throat of the clone and burnt it, the clone let go, and Jak moved forward and bit into the clones neck, Jak tore away at its neck and ripped its head off
"Holly shit, that was fucked up" Jak kicked the body, then set the head on fire, and kept it burning for a while, until he saw Nick, Judy, and Mary
"What the fuck did you just do?" Judy watched as Jak burned the head until it was charred bone, then he ripped the leg and the arm off, then melted the body into a puddle of blood, flesh, and metal
"I killed it, and i definitly won" Jak looked at Mary, and Nick was hugging her, her face was so shocking
"He just ate that things neck, and burnt its body" Mary was thinking about Jak and how scary he looked, he killed that thing, by burning it and eating it (Like a bbq)
"J-Jak, why did you do that, it was dead, but you burnt tis body until it melted" Nick saw Jak look at him, he had bloody teeth, and blood around his mouth
"Because i needed to make sure it was dead" Jak stood up and all of the animals backed up pulling weapons out, Nick and Judy their tasers, and Mary held Jaks gun in shakey paws
"Guys, i did it to protect you, i know how this stuff works, he was made after m-" Jak heard a gunshot then five more, then three more, but no one was aiming at him in front, he turned around and saw Rex, pointing a smoking gun at Jak
"Jak, what the fuck did you do that guy?" Rex saw the bullets fall to the ground, then Jak said
"Rex, why did you shoot me?" Rex lowered the gun then sighed
"I thought you were about to walk to them and hurt them, and i know you would hate yourself after you hurt them, so i had to draw your attention" Jak looked back and Mary, Judy and Nick were entering an alley way
"R-Rex, i would never hurt them, you know i wouldn-" Jak felt more bullet enter his back, then he turned again and saw Abbie holding his gun
"Wha-what the hell, Rex you told me shoot him and he'd be fine, hes bleedi-" Abbie saw the bullets flal to the ground and she lowered Jaks gun
"What the fuck" Abbie dropped the gun then fainted, Jak ran over and checked her pulse, then her temperature, and then he picked her up and gave her to Rex
"Jak, im sorry, i should have told her to stop, i can see your normal, i hope me shooting you, and getting my girlfriend to doesnt affect our relationship" Jak smiled with bloody teeth, then shook his head
"Were fine, use me as a target if you want, just make sure were friends at the end of the day" Jak sat down, accidently in the metal puddle, then Jak moved it around, making a thin layer of metal which cooled and made a large plate of steel, Jak started to melt and shape, he got the broken spear, and knives then melted all of it together, then waited for it to cool, he made a big cube of steel, then carried the block to an alleyway, he set it next to a dumpster, and left
(That was a quick fight, and yes it is over, i dont know why someone messaged me if Daniel Figgs was still alive, he was pretty dead)
"Mary, Nick, Judy?!" Jak called out but no responce came
