Hello everyone. I have a little announcement to make. First off, to those who read my story, it'll be a little while longer before the next chapter is posted for I lost the jump drive I wrote it on and when I found it I found my third chapter wasn't saved to it. So I have to redo it. It would be done by now, if I wasn't so busy and tired. I'll try to post it sometime next week.
And while I'm here, I'd like to address three of the reviews to this. I call them: one, four, and six.
One, from zog the angry chipmunk. I'll try to but I normally don't have must time to write anymore so I might forget to spell check. I try though and with the help of my sister, the rest of this will hopefully be better. Thanks for saying its good, too! : )
Four, from Athena's Assassin. While everyone is entitled to their opinion, I don't agree. I personally love humans going into the Bionicle world stories. That's the whole reason I started looking at this site; I wanted to read stories like that and I found them here. And Gabrielle is not a 'Mary-Sue'. She is a version of me if I (A): was living her life, (B): {ps, right at this point I had to stop to do a job for my mom} went through this, and (C): well, the rest of her is what I wish I could do. Seriously, I have never held a bow staff. I'd probably knock myself into a coma if I tried to fight with one. So, in short, I will not pass it on.
And six, from Bahamut PURE. While you agree with A-A, at lest I get the impression you'll be reading this. But like I said to A-A, I like these stories and I probably will be writing more. But, so you guys know, I am planning to write and post stories with just the canon. Just the plots will be original. Continuing, I keep changing POV's to work with the stories. And it also was a test to see how I like writing in different POV's. But don't worry, it mostly will be from Gabrielle's POV or third person. But I WILL write it in different POV's as I see fit. Like later I'm going to have to use Mata Nui's point of view.
And I don't plan on overdoing the dream thing. I personally hate how characters seem to take forever to realize or accept the truth. But from my on dream experiences, I sometimes take a while to realize I'm not awake. Depends on how tired I am. And I will have her realize it's not a dream in the next chapter.
I'll try to be better with my writing and I'm going to have my sister help proof-read this before I post the chapters.
And for the description? I did that because I normally don't give much detail to how my characters look. I just felt like doing that. Besides, it saves time for me later. And trust me, I'm not going to have the canon people just trust her. Mata Nui will because he is special. The others, it'll take some getting use to. Matter of fact, I'm taking a page from the writer, Tenshi of Light21, who made one of my favorite stories on here, Her Twins, and I'll hopefully do it right. And yes, they will think she is a Rahi. Oh, that is also the word for 'not like us'.
So, in short, thank for the reviews. I'll try to work on my writings. And hopefully the next chapter will be done soon! : ) oh, and you two who also reviewed, I'll get you in the chapter author notes. So, Bye!
Water Toa
