Hey Readers,
I have read the reviews I got on the first chapter and I really appreciate helpful criticism. I would just like to tell you that I have fixed the issues I had with the first chapter. Someone noticed that my chapter switched between Brax's pov and third person when it should of just been in Brax's pov and that I also used shortened terms for some vocabulary which I fixed up and the chapter now makes a lot more sense
Reviewers Question
Q: What about Kyle?
A; Kyle is going to come in further on in the story because he did not grow up with the Braxtons and actually meets them later in Summer Bay a while after they moved there.
