IMPORTANT PLEASE READ

Before I continue I need feedback on my layout, as I'm not sure the way i am laying out the speech in the paragraphs is easy for you guys to understand? would you prefer a different layout? if so please pm me or leave a review.

Another point that i wanted to raise is the fact that i am considering changing the rating of this story to M , as i have had a few requests to include sex scenes. I am more than happy to write them and put them in this story but I'm not sure who reads it so i don't want to put any sex scenes in if i have younger readers.

Sorry for the rant I hope that you all understand where I'm coming from, I just need some feedback so that i can write more chaptersas i cant do that at the moment as I'm not sure how to proceedwith this story.

Don't worry though i will have the next chapter up this weekend :)