A/N: Sometimes I like to write, what it seems to me, decent poetry of my otps whenever I feel sad. I feel like you get the most inspiration when your in agony, No? or is it just me?
Anon (response): I will post all hitsuhina related things on both Tumblr and here , but I write on Tumblr first then I post it on here but eventually all my works will always be on both sources whenever I find the chance. ;)
Title: "Fallen"
Rating: K+ (slightly angst)
My lament facade laid bare, just for you.
The horror in my gaze turned blindly with shivering fright.
Feet drench in the crimson pool.
It continues endlessly, your blood, your sorrow screeched.
As it painted the oaken grounds with a lovely cerise, or so your venerated idol volubles.
The body that held the shine of vibrant dawn.
Changed into the dread of insipid.
Life was cradling you ever so softly.
So dull and fading.
Much like the embrace of artic winters.
It swallowed the radiant warmth that was once you.
Gracing you with a plethora of chilling kisses.
Your name, the name I silently held with adoring fidelity.
I tried to call out to you, but all that I knew was guttural muteness.
My head swirled with raging torment by the simple, fallen image of you.
Resting in the oceans of your blood and tears.
It was difficult to breath.
The ferocity that plagues my being with such an icy passion.
Did not expel the angst screams inside of me.
My darling…
As I face your 'beloved' devil.
I beg you to know that, as you fall into languid dreams.
You are my honor and pride that has been wounded.
I heed to redeem you, me.
Like a knight to his threaten king.
I shall bring you...
The blood...
Of your…
Enemy.
A/N: I hope this was angsty enough, if any of you are confused at the last three stances of the poem I wanted to achieve a kind of haunting feeling by the pauses I put in. I had hope to paint the picture of when Hitsugaya had been cut by Aizen and slowly whispers he last thoughts before he passes out in the room with Hinamori next to him.
I'm cruel, I know.
Review if you will, it always makes me squeal to hear feedback, constructive criticism is always welcome but just don't be an jerk and make it seem you're a flame rather than helping my writing skills.
One more thing, for the mature/adult individuals, a nsfw one-shot is coming soon (evilly grins).
