Shadowclone076

NEW DRAWINGS! The pic on this cover is Mac's portrait, Rebirth: What logic's cover is his eye and sword, and Ichi is my profile pic on Fictionpress. Now, On To The Story.

Beta: Animewatcher4685

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto (but I do own the characters I created)

(If inclined, listen to one of these songs, you decide when.)

"Speech"

'Thought'

Reading

"Demon Talking"

Theme song: Ambulance By My Chemical Romance (I don't own them either. Epic Band)

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In the land of fire, rain falls heavily on the forests, overflowing ravines and flooding leaky buildings… In a small clearing, generic bandits fight with Kakuzu, a S-Rank Akatsuki. Another S-ranked Akatsuki and recruit, Mac/Jin, stand in the more misty part of the forest, staring into the mist for their enemy.

*Poof*

Mac opens his eye and looks into the mist, but can no longer see Laela. She had escaped into the mist.

"You better not get killed you brat, this is humiliating!" Sneered Hidan, ready to jump in any direction.

Mac threw some seals up and slammed the ground. Another poof.

"GO TODIDILE!"

A gator appears from the smoke, and it is by Mac's side in a second.

"AH! STOP BITING ME!" Yelled Mac, running around with a gator maw on his head. It then looks around and sees dead bodies. It lets go and falls to the ground, Mac nursing his head from his place on the ground.

"I see you actually summoned me for a battle, good thing for you." Said the gator, releasing him.

Hidan was not impressed, and was too distracted by this display of abuse to see the fireball coming at him.

*Boom!*

Hidan lost part of his cloak and got singed. Mac lost sight of him as well, the blast had separated them.

"Fuck! As if I wasn't already cold!" Shouted Hidan

Mac dashed into the mist, swinging wildly, hoping he hit something. This tactic worked surprisingly well for its stupidity, incapacitating bandits who were taken by surprise by the wild strategy, then came the friendly fire.

"You will pay dearly for damaging one of my hearts." Said Kakuzu. He was apparently busy killing and fighting ALL the bandits single handily.

"Well, you can't tell me I never broke any hearts anymore, eh Ichi?"

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Ichi sneezes, looking reading a boring book in the leaf library. His arms were still bandaged and he got a random chunin turn the pages for him (He ranked it as a D rank mission, ninja can also ask for help). He was doing research. Anyways, NEXT!

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Kakuzu was irritated with Mac now; this boy was making a joke out of the mission. His pay was at stake!

"Stay close to Hidan you brat!" Said Kakuzu, going back to his laughter.

The surrounding forest and stream was littered with bloodied and beaten bandits, a handful of bandits left. But typically, Mac got separated from the pair of zombies.

"We got to get a leash for that kid; he won't last long if we don't improve his skills." Hidan said; black skull state active, Kakuzu simply ticked off.

Mac POV

Laela charged; dual daggers ready. Mac flipped his sword outwards, pumping chakra into it to slice through those daggers. Laela knew better.

"ATTACK FACHE!"

A Black Puma leaped from behind her, claws outstretched and well above the already in motion blade.

'shit.', Thought Mac.

Mac threw sand into the cats face.

"ARG! YOU %$E^&%$" The puma knew some colourful language. Mac took the opportunity to attack the tiger.

Laela intercepted him with the daggers cross shaped to stop his downward slash. She followed up with a knee kick.

The intended purpose was to knock him off balance, and it worked. He fell.

And kissed her.

He just…kissed her…

Laela was out cold, shock knocking her out, white eyed and tears forming at the ends. Mac immediately sheathed his sword, not wanting to kill a girl, much more, a defenceless girl.

"Oh no you don't, and eye for an eye!" Said the Puma suddenly, leaping in his path.

So did Mac's crocodile.

"YEAH! Todidile! Use bite!" Ordered Mac.

The croc sneered at Mac, hitting him with a thick killing intent. Mac fell back.

"Puma, you cannot beat a croc, we are superior, millions of years, and we did not have to evolve as we are perfect." Said the croc.

"Tch, everyone knows that your kind don't have much stamina, you will fall eventually." Said the Puma, claws popping out of the paws.

This puma had black fur, white fur on the underside, inside of legs, and around mouth and underside of jaw. Fur on forehead is spiky. Solid, midnight black coat on top half of body, unzipped, reaches down to top of front paws, bright red flowers on back, and twisting lines going up front legs sleeves.

The croc was you typical appearance of a run of the mill croc, only that it was wearing a mist cloth that tied around the neck and flapped over the back in a triangle shape and it was wearing an eye-patch to match his 'master'. Also Mac forced him to wear it, not needing it at all.

The puma disappears, moving at lightning speeds. The croc reacts faster, slamming his tail into the claw of the cat, scales absorbing damage and inflicting impact on the paw. The cat disappeared again, reappearing above the croc, stealing the 4th hokage/Naruto vs. Tobi scene moment of claw falling into an impact.

The croc grunted, doing a natural defence, the death roll, but at great speeds! The claws did not get deflected, but instead grinded against the body making a vicious grinding sound.

The tussle broke up, puma with a bloody paw and croc with broken scales.

'Dammit Jin, why are you just standing there?!' Thought the croc.

"Mac, why are we just standing here?" Said Hideo.

'It's a Pokémon battle! You don't interfere with a Pokémon battle!' Thought Mac, watching intently with a smile on his face.

"What if your croc dies?"

'Good point.'

"Return!" Shouted Mac.

"Wha-?" The croc disappeared in a poof.

"Use run! You escaped successfully." Said Mac, running at high speeds, the puma not able to chase with the damage paw and passed out master.

'These claws are supposed to be able to tear steel in ribbons, what is that croc made of?' Thought the Puma angrily, picking up her master, carrying her off.

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The cat has a rather complex appearance, here are the specifics. I like Pumas!

Dark sandy color on the outside fur and head, but white fur on the underside, inside of legs, and around mouth and underside of jaw (basic puma coloring). Fur on forehead is spiky. Solid, midnight black coat on top half of body, unzipped, reaches down to top of front paws, bright red flowers on back, and twisting lines going up front legs sleeves.

This is for her personality, but I'm picturing her as a little tomboy-ish. With a few traditionally girl likes (but I say boys can like them too); flowers, dark pink, dresses (wears them when not working, street clothes).

(Update +-1 week)