Shadowclone076 & ItsJustMac
It feels awesome having a team support you when you write. I would love to hear what you think about the story so far, so please leave a review. Now, it's time for a different perspective! For my new readers, you will now learn a bit more about our current main hero! P.S. I will allways defeat the problems at hand! It will be finished! (Plan B was creating another account, but this works too!) On To the Story!
Beta: Animewatcher4685
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto (but I do own the characters I created)
(If inclined, listen to one of these songs, you decide when.)
"Speech"
'Thought'
Reading
"Demon Talking"
Theme song: Ambulance By My Chemical Romance (I don't own them either. Epic Band)
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It was dark, raining and misty. The sun was gone and even the forest dared not to make a sound. The killing intent in the air was thick enough to cut. Hindan was searching for their lost apprentice, swearing at their luck.
"When I find that brat, I am gonna cut him up and make you stich him back together!" Said Hidan, searching bushes and treetops.
"I don't think he will survive being cut up, and I will probably kill him if you make me." Said Kakuzu.
The rain was pelting them now; wave country was vicious with its rainstorms.
"We must return, our mission was completed and the brat was killed. That is what we will say." Said Kakuzu, turning left and walking towards what could safely be assumed to be the hideout.
"Hell No! I am NOT telling them I lost this little shit!" Shouted Hidan, now cutting trees down.
"If we must look, then you must give me your reward money. It was your job to look after the kid after all." Said Kakuzu, crossing his arms, slightly smirking behind his mask, happy to be getting a bit more money. (AN. What is he saving up for?)
"Just help me look for the little fucker!" Said Hidan, now even more infuriated. The rain had nothing on the density of this killing intent.
"Here he is." Said Kakuzu, not even looking for a second, just lifting his right arm, suspending Mac in the air by the scruff of his Akatsuki cloak.
"You Bitch! You had him the whole time?" Screamed Hidan, finally blowing up.
"I expect you to pay me by the end of the day." Said Kakuzu, dropping Mac and walking off, satisfied.
Hidan turned his glare towards Mac, who only looked at him with an innocent smile. He was off before Hidan could process the single thought. 'Kill'.
Itachi POV (village hidden in the mist, ninja academy)
Itachi prowled through the Mist, doing what ninja's were originally made for, recon. He snuck through the halls and rooms with such proficiency that the only trace he left was in time. He eventually got into a record room, a room full of records of every ninja that had graduated within the past few years. It would be outdated, but it would provide a background check that may reveal how he procured his information.
He pulled out the file containing the record of Jin Takoma (Mac). He opened the file:
Jin Takoma
Age of graduation: 13
Primary chakra affinity: Earth
Secondary chakra affinity: Water
Taijutsu:
Freestyle swordsmanship
Ninjutsu:
Earth Style; Rock hand Jutsu
Genjutsu:
None
Grades: (Descending from S, A, B, C, D, F)
Ninjutsu: F
Taijutsu: D
Genjutsu: F
Weapons: D
Strategy/Tactics: D
Notes: Jin is outspoken, rude and by far the worst student to ever graduate from this institution. The only remarkable thing about him is that he is able to wield a sword that kills others who attempt to take it. He has no genjutsu to speak of and has only ever done one ninjutsu in his entire enrolment; a fist of rock, and not even a big one. It was baby sized. The only reason for his graduation is his great foresight into his opponent's actions. He has great knowledge of what ninjas can do, but fails to apply any of this knowledge properly.
Itachi could barely believe his eyes. This boy who took down 3 chunin and lasted long against a Jounin did this horridly in his academy? He was either a very fast learner, or he was a genius who hid his abilities from the world until his escape. From this file, Itachi learned 2 things about Jin; First, he was obviously very good at hiding his abilities. Second, he was also going to hide his source from him just as well. He would have to do some more searching in order to plug this info leak.
'I have gravely underestimated you Jin; you are very good at lying about your abilities. Just how much are you hiding? I will soon find out.'
He then read the next page in the file, stating his more recent developments:
Jin had just been assigned a D-rank mission. It would be no surprise if he failed this mission, even if it was just delivering a letter between the sketchy areas of the lands.
Jin had returned from his mission, successful, but he is wearing an eye patch. The fool must have got stung by a bee, or fallen after running too fast.
After inspection, it turns out that the eye is in fact the Bayakugan. This version however is different in a number of ways. Firstly, there is no eye, just a black/purple mist in the socket. Second is the fact that it is blind. He claimed to have received it during a fight, but what kind of an enemy would give his opponent another ability?
After listening to the report of the fight, it was revealed that this 'eye' would kill him if the opponent wasn't defeated in 10 minutes. It now grants him the ability to increase his ability for that 10 minutes before the risk of death is imminent. The eye siphons chakra and uses it to amplify his other four senses. The enemy intended to use this to siphon all his chakra without amplifying anything. He also explained that his opponent was trying to steal his eyes, but that is too much of a fairy-tale to believe.
Itachi closed the file. He put his palm to his forehead, this kid not only knew how to fight, but he also got a way to increase his field of battlefield vision. The eye combined with his natural talent meant that it was no wonder he could hold his own against the Jounin.
Mac POV
Mac was nursing a big bump on his head. This was the Anime part striking back hard, making bumps that big possible. He was walking behind Hidan, who was now closely looking at him.
'Hey, Hideo, how could you beat those chunin and jounin back then?'
"I didn't beat the Jounin, but in case you didn't know, I had been on the run for my whole childhood. I had pretty much gotten used to killing hunter nin."
'So you killing those chunin must have been easy, eh?'
"The Jounin didn't make it any easier. Why the sudden curiosity?"
'Don't know, just making conversation.'
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If my Itachi if off, I apologise, I am not used to typing as characters I don't own. If they are in-important, then I make up how they are. As I said, leave a review, I would like to hear your opinions! I will not give up on this story until it is completed!
Mac has a Theme Song! (The Westerner – Falling in Reverse) song directed towards Ichi.
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