I seem to be doing this rewriting shit, a lot. Mostly for the reason that I dislike what I've written, and that I've gained a superior understanding of whatever crossover material I'm writing about.

In my opinion, I had a great concept that I well... Never really expanded upon, created shit, you name it.

If you want a list, of what I dislike and reasoning, I'll put one right...

Now.

1 - The Courier himself.

Imra had quite a few character traits, that I like, but a myriad of ones that I dislike. And his power level fluctuates so much, that I can barely track it anymore. But, let's put it this way - he's isn't meant to be that powerful.

In my perspective, the Courier in general is a guy/girl that takes on his opponents through sheer force of will, determination and not pure skill like Imra does. Like, in your first playthrough, did you fight Lanius on his terms?

I know that I didn't, and I abused the many extremely powerful items that I could against his ass. Ulysses is very much the same, but I even unleashed the badass that is Boone in power armor, and the anti-material rifle, which I never usually do against boss NPCS.

My character himself against Ulysses, used the Fatman, that sledgehammer weapon that I forgot the name of, and tons of weapons against that guy. He wasn't wearing power armor, but he was wearing the Elite Riot armor that has one of the highest DT in any armor that I've seen in my playthrough.

I reckon that you've got my point - my playthrough was essentially me abusing the fact that I had the most powerful weapons/armor, that I had tons of health, the Pip-Boy, and finally the fact that I had Boone tailing my ass, being the badass that he is.

And that my Courier that I based Imra off, is essentially a twenty-sevenish man instead of twenty or some other number that I put down in the fic. And I really do think that a young Courier is extremely unrealistic.

2 - Where it was headed.

I was trying to go the magical, fantasy-ish route with prophecies and all that shit, but now I've realized something.

That it doesn't work at all, with either the fact that I've crossed it over with Fallout, and that Imra/any Courier, is one of the worst type of things to base all that around.

And I generally dislike where RWBY is headed with all that magic shit. I do like where the story itself is heading, but that silver-eyed, maidens and all that is too much in my books. They just feel like a vague attempt to get into the higher power levels that fiction (in general) is trying to get into.

Now you could argue that it adds depth, but I really disagree. They should have made the characters stronger through sheer hard work, training, and even their Semblances which in my opinion would have made it all much more badass.

Yes, I'll admit it, I sound like Rock Lee but it's truthfully how I feel about the matter.

To put it in a sentence, it feels like a Deus Ex machina that might have been forshadowed (you have to admit, that it was shoddy forshadowing at best. I mean, a single vague description that can be taken many ways is forshadowing nowadays? What?) Now, Ruby becoming more powerful because she is a silver-eyed warrior is cool and all, but don't make it a Mangekyo Sharingan type of thing, Rooster Teeth? Alright?

3 - Differences in morality.

Now, before I get pitchforked even more, let me explain.

RWBY and Fallout don't really mesh, in the whole morality scale to put it blankly. Most of you probably/hopefully already knew that, but I'll still conjure up an example for all you guys/girls.

Hmm...

Killing in the two verses. Let's talk about that.

Fallout in general makes you practically a mass-murderer, in a lot of cases even if it is indirectly.

Now, the only notable deaths that I've seen on RWBY are... Summer Rose (meh. She shouldn't really be on, since she hasn't appeared, but... I have this guy.) Tukson (off-screen for the most part), Pyrrha and er... That's it?

Let's take Fallout: New Vegas, now shall we?

(Please note that I'm taking every ending, faction in consideration. And that it's my rather crappy memory.)

Benny. That guy that shot you in the head, remember?

The entirety of Goodsprings. The Powder Gangers.

The Brotherhood of Steel. That NCR Ranger that you kill to get access to the bunker.

Mr House. Colonel Moore. President Crocker. Caesar. Ulysses. Lanius. That doctor that can cause the end of the entire Mojave (if you choose the side with him).

The entire Mojave itself, through simply playing a kill-everything playthrough/or the above.

Now, admittedly, the show is barely four volumes in, but don't pull a face-heel turn suddenly! At least, make it seem from the start that despite the fact that the main characters are all naive, it's a death world.

But it didn't. And then, about five episodes in, you have Rooster Teeth telling people that the show is unadvised to be watched by kids, that character death is going to happen constantly.

Despite my misgivings about the show/manga/the writing, Naruto surprisingly had it rather spot on, with the fact that Naruto was a naive shit, but other older/wiser ninja were there to tell people that it was a world where shit happens.

I'm not demanding that it become another Attack on Titan, here people. Just make an effort to actually put in place, what you're saying about the world.

My point was before I went off on a tangent, was that generally, I think that most of the cast of RWBY would be really reluctant to trust any Wastelander, especially your character, whatever build he/she may be.

4 - I messed up my own story.

I can explain my reasoning, and hopefully not go off on a tangent unlike above.

Remnant's Courier had become in my mind, random things that I inserted there for well... No reason at all. Neo becoming his partner? A stretch of my imagination. I see Neo as simply having the benefit of fan-made characterization, a rather fantastically crazy weapon set, and a blank slate for the most part in terms of personality.

Now, even then, I messed with her character so fucking hard that she essentially became an OC that replaced Neo.

Next, we have the fact that I used the generally overfucking used plotline of him going to Beacon for no reason, and that he landed in the Emerald Forest, has an effect on Blake's arc for no reason apart from being an acquantaince, and all that.

If I do rewrite this fic, I'll try my best to make it original. I'm not spoiling anything apart from the fact that...

He is Level 50, and a badass.


If you survived that longass... Well, criticism of nearly everything that RWBY stands for, (I'm joking), and my fic (truth), I hope you patiently await the next installment of the new coat of paint that Remant's Courier needs/deserves.

I might start it, as soon as this goes online.

Oops. Spoilers.