Eve: Hey guys!

Amu: Welcome back.

Atsuko: Hai!

Eve: Wait, why is Atsuko here and not Ikuto?

Atsuko: Nii-san said he had something to do.

Amu: He's probably napping.

Atsuko: Where's Tina, Eve?

Eve: I don't know. Probably watching anime or being grounded.

Atsuko: Ooh~! What anime?

Eve: IDK.

Amu: It's been awhile since you guys made commentary together right?

Eve: It's because whenever I remember to do this, Tina's doing something else. Now disclaimer please!

Amu: Eve and Tina do not own Shugo Chara. It is owned by PeachPit. They only own Atsuko, Ayaka, Melody, Asuna, Akame, and the plot.

Atsuko & Eve: Enjoy~!


Chapter 10

~Ayaka's POV~

Today was December 18th. It was the day of the dance. I woke up at 8:00 AM. The dance started at 6PM so I still have plenty of time until the dance. The girls and I went dress shopping yesterday and we all got Christmas colored dresses. Amu got a red, strapless dress that reached her knees. At the end, there were white ruffles. Rima got a white, strapless dress that reached her mid thigh with a sweetheart neckline, a golden heart belt under her cleavage, and white ruffles underneath her belt. Utau got a red, strapless dress that reached her mid thigh with a sweetheart neckline, red sequins, and a silver flower pin that pinned a piece of red fabric that went around her waist and to the floor on her dress. Lulu got a mint green dress that reached her mid thigh with one shoulder strap. The top half was dotted with silver sequins. Atsuko got a white dress that reaches her knees with a sweetheart neckline, lace short sleeves, and a red bow around her waist. I got a red strapless, mermaid style dress, with lace under my cleavage. Then at the bottom, it flowed out and at the ends there were white ruffles. I did my daily routine, ate breakfast, and changed into casual clothes. It was 9:15 when the doorbell rang. I went to get it and at the door were Utau, Lulu, Amu, Rima, and Atsuko. They all had their dresses with them, but they were covered so no one saw the dresses. For some reason Atsuko brought her backback.

"What are you guys doing here?" I asked them.

"We decided to get ready for the dance here!" Atsuko said.

They all filed in and went straight upstairs. I closed the door and followed them.

"Do you have an empty room?" Rima asked me.

"There's one down the hall." I said.

They all went to that room. Utau then dumped a bag on the guest bed.

"Okay so we have about 4 hours before we have to start so I guess we could eat breakfast." Amu said.

"You guys haven't eaten breakfast yet?" I asked them.

They all shook their heads.

"I'll make breakfast then. My mom is at work so don't make a mess." I told them.

30 minutes later breakfast was ready. With the help of Akame I was able to make pancakes, bacon, and eggs.

"BREAKFAST'S READY!" I yelled over to the living room, where the girls were watching TV.

"WE'RE COMING!" Rima yelled back.

"NO WE'RE GONNA EAT WHILE WATCHING TV, BUT YOU PEOPLE HELP BRING OUT THE FOOD."

"GOT IT."

Then we ate breakfast and watched TV.

"Ok people we wasted 45 minutes eating breakfast, but now we have to finish getting ready." Utau said, after all of us finished eating.

"KK, then since we're already wearing our dresses, let's do our hair first. Then makeup." Atsuko planned out.

"Sounds good. So who's going up first?"

"Rima, you, Ayaka, Lulu, me, Amu."

"Alright let's get this show on the road."

After like 2 hours and 15 minutes, we finally finished our hairdos. Rima's hair was curled. The sides were twisted and wrapped around her head like a crown. Utau's was curled and in a side ponytail with bangs. Lulu's hair was curled and the sides were tied into a ponytail at the back. Atsuko's was curled and put up into a high ponytail with bangs. Amu's hair was pulled into a bun, but the sides were twisted and went around her head like a crown. And mine was an ulyana aster hairstyle with pearls in it and bangs.

"Ok girls, we have an hour left to do our makeup. It shouldn't take long." Atsuko said after we were done.

"I don't know how to do makeup." Amu said.

"Then I'll do yours."

"Can I go without it?"

"NO." Atsuko and Utau said in unison.

"Alright people since I'm always prepared for stuff like this, I brought my makeup bag for parties." She said as she dug through her backpack and brought out a giant makeup bag.

"Good lord, your makeup bag took up all the space in your backpack?!" I said, astonished.

"No duh. I already knew that you had a bunch of hair stuff so I brought this." She cleared her throat. "Ok, people this bag has all the stuff we need to look beautiful but I only have this one bag, so use it with care! And make sure to do your makeup matching with your dress."

"Alright." everyone said.

Then we walked over to Atsuko and she laid out everything. God damn, Atsuko how many makeup tools do you have?!


~Timeskip To After All This Is Done~

"There you go." Atsuko said as she put on the finishing touches to Amu's makeup.

"Omg we are going to be the bell of the ball!" Lulu said as we looked at ourselves in the mirror.

"Isn't this too much makeup? My face feels heavy." Amu said.

"Come on Amu, I tried my best to put as little on you as possible." Atsuko said.

Realizing it Atsuko was right. Amu only had black eyeliner, mascara, brown eyeshadow, foundation, contour, and red lipstick. Compared to us, she looked normal. Atsuko had glittery brown eyeshadow, no foundation because she somehow has perfect skin, light pink blush, mascara, black winged eyeliner, and red lipstick. Rima might've put a little bit too much, but it suited her great. She had gold to brown eye shadow, a lot of mascara (her lashes were curlier with the lash curler), blush, a red lipstick, a bit of bronzer, foundation, concealer, and her brows were also a tiny bit more tidy and fuller. Utau had a gold to red ombre eyeshadow winged, black eyeliner, foundation, concealer, and a maroon lipstick. Lulu was a bit on the simple side, but she still put a lot of stuff on her face. She had green eye shadow, mascara (she also used the lash curler), eye liner, pink blush, a light pink lipstick, foundation, concealer, and her brows were fuller and tidier. I on the other hand had a bit more. I had a little less mascara than Rima but it was still a lot, brownish reddish eye shadow, bronzer, a bit of pink blush, contour, and red lipstick that matches my dress.

"Girls we have about 15 minutes to get there, let's go." Amu said, anxious not to be late.

"Wait, I gotta take some selfies and then post them on social media." everyone says at the same time (including me).

"But then we'll be late."

"No it's not called being late, it's called being fashionably late." Lulu said posing for selfies.

"GROUP SELFIE." Atsuko called out. Then all of us besides Amu runs over to her and kept posing.

After like 15 more minutes of that Amu pleaded with us to go and we decided to post them after we had the rest of the photos after the dance.

We were like 15 minutes fashionably late, as Lulu said it, so when we walked inside everyone stopped doing what they were doing and looked at us.


~Ikuto's POV~

"Let's go. Our dates should be there already." Nagihiko said as we were just finishing up with figuring out how to tie ties and bowties.

"Yea we got 15 minutes, we should be on time." I said eyeing Mahiru, but he didn't seem to notice.

"Let's go, I can't wait to see Ayaka." Mahiru said.

"Me either…" I murmured.

"Did you say something Ikuto nii-chan?" Tadagay asked.

"I can't wait to go to the dance." I said putting on a fake smile.

"Me too. But I can't wait to see Lulu more!" Tadagay said with a creepy smile on his face.

"Let's go." I said getting even more creeped out noticing the other love doves

When we arrived, the other guys left me trying to find their dates, while I had to deal with girls surrounding me from everywhere.

After about 15 minutes I finally escaped, and the guys finally found me.

"The girls aren't here." Tadagay said about to cry.

"They'll be here soon." Sebi said.

"Then let's enjoy ourselves until they get here." Nagihiko said.

"Alright."

But right when we were leaving, the door opened and 6 beautiful girls walked in and became the bell of the ball. The six girls were Ayaka, Atsuko, Utau, Rima, Lulu, and Amu. They walked over to us, and all the guys stopped staring, realizing that they were their dates.


~Ayaka's POV~

"You guys are already here!" Atsuko said.

"We were on time unlike you girls." Ikuto said.

"Hey Ayaka, can we talk?" Utau said.

"Sure."

"Come on." Utau grabbed my hand and led me outside.

"Ok, first things first, when you get back in there, play along with me that we were talking about a surprise for our dates. Actually I do have one, but this is for your own good so I'm letting you in on this. Got it?"

"Yea. But what are you trying to tell me?"

"Ikuto has a crush on you."

"WHAAA-" Utau covered my mouth.

"SHHH! Anyways, the day that Ikuto decided to ask you out, it seemed that Mahiro had already asked you out."

"Was it by chance 2 days ago?"

"Yes."

"Oh god, Ikuto should've asked me earlier! Mahiru asked me out that day!" I said kind of disappointed that I was between 2 hot guys' love.

"So are you saying you like Ikuto?" Utau asked, eyebrows raised.

I blushed.

"I-I don't know who I like more." I said turning my head away from Utau.

"So you like both of them?"

I nodded.

"Let me tell you something Amu had to learn herself." Utau said. "There is a fine line between 'like' and 'love'. You just have to find the difference between the two before you break someone's heart."

I look down at my feet.

"How do you know which is which?"

"When you think it's right." Utau said.

I frowned.

"Wipe that frown off your face right now. We ARE going back in and have fun." Utau said. "Also no one else knows but me so don't tell anyone."

"How could no one notice?"

"He did a good job hiding his emotions I guess."

I sighed and tried my best to smile.

"Okay let's go back in." I said.


Eve: I hate myself for writing this right now. It just feels like... it was written by a noob. Though I'm still one, I like to think I've gotten better. I was going to edit it but i was like, "How should I do it?" and of course I come up with an idea for another fanfic after I thought that. What do you guys think?

Atsuko: *is daydreaming about Sebastian*

Amu: *is daydreaming about Makoto*

Eve: I've created two monsters. Okay then. Next chapter is the actual dance~! And of course I'm gonna introduce a new person as well! Who do you think it will be? A girl? A boy to add to Ayaka's harem? Please R&R! Constructive criticism is welcome and NEEDED. And as far as I see I'm not seeing many reviews. Wow, out of about 400 views there's only 8 reviews. PLEASE REVIEW! See you next week!