still not sure about this writing style. idk, it works but i might remove the "s from conversations as you can still tell what they're saying without them and it would speed up writing. idk, tell me what you think. if it doesnt look good later on ill revert to a more traditional writing syle; past-tense! ooooooowaaaaaaaaaaaeeeeeeeoooooooooooo!
oh, and, 1 follower1 yay! i didnt expect to get any from that 1 chapter that has hardly no changes from the original episode 1. but, thanks 1 follower. either you're reeeeeally smart or really fuckin stupid. for my own pride, im going to say number 1. anyways yeah RWBY
The cruiser carrying Ruby and her older sister, Yang, docks in front of the school.
The door opens and outcomes vomit boy, who immediately proceeds to release his regurgitated food into a nearby garbage can.
The passengers on board, Beacon's new freshmen, begin to leave the ship, taking in the sights of the beautiful school.
Ruby, Yang: Wow!
Yang: "The view from Vale's got nothin' on this!"
Ruby, excited at the sight of the other students' weapons: "Sis, that kid's got a classical staff! And she's got a fire sword!"
Yang, grabbing Ruby to calm her down: "Easy there, little sister! They're just weapons!"
Ruby: "Just weapons? They're an extension of ourselves, they're part of us! Oh, they're so cool!"
Yang: "Well why can't you swoon over your own weapon? Aren't you happy with it?"
Ruby, unfolding her scythe: "Of course I'm happy with Crescent Rose! I just really like seeing new ones. It's like meeting new people! But better."
Yang: "Ruby, come on, why don't you try and make some real friends?"
Ruby: "But why would I need friends when I have you?"
Yang, running away with a group of people: "Well, my friends are here now, gotta go!
Ruby: "Wait, where are you..."
Yang: "Kay, c'ya, bye!"
Ruby: "Are we supposed to go to our dorms? Where are our dorms? Do we have dorms? *sigh* I don't know what I'm doing." (Ruby falls backwards onto a cart carrying luggage)
Girl: "What are you doing?"
Ruby: "Uh... sorry"
Girl: "Sorry? Do you have any idea of the damage you could've caused?"
Ruby, picking up a bag of luggage: "Uhh..."
Girl, grabbing bag: "Gimme that! This is Dust; mined and purified from the Schnee Quarry."
Ruby, scratching her head: "Uhh..."
Girl: "What are you, brain dead? Dust! Fire, water, lightning; energy!"
Ruby, sniffling due to the Dust being thrown around by the light girl: "Uhh..."
Girl: "Is any of this sinking in? What do you have to say for yourself?"
Ruby sneezes due to the Dust, and activates a fire potion, causing an explosion in the school courtyard.
The vile of Fire Dust gets thrown across the courtyard, landing at the feet of a girl reading a book.
She picks up the vile and examines it, while continuing to read.
Angry Girl: "Unbelievable! This is exactly the kind of thing I was talking about!"
Ruby, playing with her fingers embarrassed: "I'm really, really sorry!"
Angry Girl: "Ugh, you complete dolt! What are you even doing here? Aren't you a little young to be attending Beacon?"
Ruby: "Well... I..."
Angry Girl: "This isn't your ordinary combat school. It's not just sparring and practice you know. Were here to fight monsters, so watch where you're going!"
Ruby: "Hey, I said I was sorry, Princess!"
Strange Girl: "It's heiress, actually. (The girl approaches Ruby and the angry girl, with the vile of Fire Dust in her hand) "Weiss Schnee, heiress to the Schnee Dust of the largest producers of energy propellant in the world."
Weiss: "Finally, some recognition!"
Strange Girl: "The same company infamous for it's controversial labor force and questionable business partners."
Weiss, surprised by the statement: "Whu... How dare-! The, the nerve of-!"
Ruby laughs at the well-placed insult.
Weiss: Ugh! (Weiss takes the vile of fire from the girl's hand, and storms off as her luggage carriers follow after her.)
Ruby, to the angry Weiss: "I promise I'll make this up to you! *sigh* I guess I'm not the only one having a rough first day. So, what's-!"
Ruby turns back to see the mystic girl walking in the other direction.
Ruby, falling to her knees from exhaustion: "*sigh* Welcome to Beacon."
"Hey."
Ruby looks up to see a man holding his hand out to her, offering her help up.
Man: "I'm Jaune."
Ruby, taking Jaune's hand: (Ruby chuckles) "Aren't you the guy that threw up on the ship?"
Jaune: "All I'm saying is that motion sickness is much more common problem than people let on!"
Ruby: "Look, I'm sorry Vomit-boy was the first thing that came to mind."
Jaune: "Oh yeah? What if I called you Crater-face?"
Ruby: "Hey, that explosion was an accident."
Jaune: "Well, the name's Jaune Arc! Short, sweet, rolls of the tongue, ladies love it!"
Ruby: "Do they?"
Jaune: "They will. Well, I hope they will... I mean, my mom always says, uhh, never mind."
There's a few moments of silence between the two teenagers.
Ruby, unfolding her scythe: "So, I got this thing!"
(Ruby's scythe slams into the ground, hooking the blade to the concrete.)
Jaune, nearly cut by the blade that was almost twice Ruby's size: "Whoa! Is, that a scythe?"
Ruby, showing off her weapon: "It's also a customizable, high-impact velocity sniper rifle."
Jaune, staring that the super-sized blade that Ruby was now petting: "A what?"
Ruby: "It's also a gun." (Ruby chambers her gun.)
Jaune: "Oh, that's cool!"
Ruby: "So, what've you got?"
Jaune, unsheathing his sword: "Oh- uh, I got this sword."
Ruby, looking up and down Jaune's weapon: "Oooooooh!"
Jaune: "Yeah, I've got a shield too." (Jaune pulls out his shield, which un folds in his arm.)
Ruby, sliding her hand across Jaune's shield: "So what do they do?"
Jaune, who accidently activates his shield compacting feature, throwing it off of his arms and onto the ground. Once Jaune picks it up, he compacts it onto his belt: "Well... the shield gets smaller. So, when i get tured of carrying it, I can just put it away."
Ruby: "But, doesn't it weigh the same?"
Jaune: "Yeah, it does."
Ruby: "Well, I'm kind of a dork when it comes to weapons. I guess I did go a little overboard designing it." (Ruby examines her weapon as she holds it close to her chest.)
Jaune: "Wait, you made that?"
Ruby: "Of course! All students at Signal forge their own weapons. Didn't you make yours?"
Jaune: "It's a hand-me-down. My great-great-grandfather used it to fight in the war."
Ruby: "Sounds more like a family heirloom to me! Well, I like it! Not many people have an appreciation for the classics these days."
Jaune: "Yeah, the classics."
Ruby: "So why'd you help me back there, in the courtyard?"
Jaune: "Why not? My mom always sys, 'Strangers are just friends you haven't met yet.'"
Ruby: "Hmmm... Hey, where are we going?"
Jaune: "I don't know, I was following you... You think there might be a directory? Maybe a food court? Some sort of recognizable landmark?"
Ruby, chuckling: "Uhh, no."
Yang: "Ruby! Over here, I saved you a spot!"
Ruby, to Jaune: "Hey, I gotta go. I'll see you later!"
Jaune: "Wait! *sigh* Great, where I am supposed to find another nice, quirky girl to talk to?"
Yang: "How's your first day going, little sister?"
Ruby: "You mean since you ditched me and I exploded!?"
Yang: "Yikes, meltdown already?"
Ruby: "No, I literally exploded a hole in front of the school... There was a fire, and, I think some ice?"
Yang: "Are you being sarcastic?"
Ruby: "Ugh, I wish! I tripped over some crabby girl's luggage! and then she yelled at me, and then I sneezed, and then I exploded! And then she yelled again, and I felt really, really bad, and I just wanted her to stop yelling at me."
Weiss, surprising Ruby from behind: "You!"
Ruby: "Oh god, it's happening again!"
Weiss: "You're lucky we weren't blown off the side of the cliff!"
Yang: "Oh my god, you really exploded."
Ruby: "It was an accident, it was an accident!"
Weiss holds out a pamphlet in front of Ruby's face entitled, "Dust For Dummies."
Ruby: "What's this?"
Weiss: "The Schnee Dust Company is not responsible for any injuries or damages sustained while operating a Schnee Dust Company product. Although not mandatory, the Schnee Family highly encourages their customers to read and familiarize themselves with this easy-to-follow guide to Dust application and practice in the field."
Ruby: "Uhhh..."
Weiss: "You really want to start making things up to me?"
Ruby: "Absolutely!"
Weiss: "Read this and don't ever speak to me again."
Yang: "Look, it sounds like you two got off on the wrong... and she's gone."
Ruby and Yang looked at Weiss' skirt bouncing behind her as she walked away and disappeared in the crowd.
Ozpin, through speakers sounding around the auditorium: "Ahem... I'll keep this brief. You have traveled here today in search of knowledge. To hone your craft and acquire new skills. And when you have finished, you plan to dedicate your life to the protection of the people. But I look amongst you and all I see is wasted energy. In need of purpose, direction. You assume knowledge will free you of this. But your time at this school will prove that knowledge can only carry you so far. it is up to you to take the first step."
Glynda, who has now taken the microphone: "You will gather in the ballroom tonight. Tomorrow your initiation begins. Be ready. You are dismissed!"
Students being to disband and leave the auditorium.
Yang, falling onto her sleeping bag next to Ruby: "It's like a big slumber party!"
Ruby: "I don't think dad would approve of all the boys though."
Yang: "I know I do."
Yang, seeing Ruby writing on a piece of paper: "What's that?"
Ruby: "A letter to the gang back at Signal. I promised to tell them all about Beacon and how things are going."
Yang: "Aww."
Ruby throws a pillow at Yang.
Ruby: "Shut up! I didn't get to bring my friend with me to school and it's weird not knowing anyone here."
Yang: "What about Jaune?"
Ruby: "He's nice."
Yang: "There you go, plus one friend! That's a hundred percent increase!"
Ruby: "I'm pretty sure Weiss counts as a negative friend. back to zero."
Yang: there's no such thing as negative friends! You just made one friend, and one enemy!"
Ruby once again throws a pillow at Yang.
Yang: "look, it's only been one day. Give it time."
Ruby sits up, seeing the strange girl she met earlier that day across the room.
Ruby: "That girl..."
Yang: "You know her?"
Ruby: "Not really. She saw what happened this morning, but left before I could say anything."
Yang: "Well, now's your chance!"
Yang grabbed Ruby by the arm and began pulling her towards the dark girl, who was reading her book alone up against the wall.
Yang, still pulling Ruby: "Hello! I believe you two may know each other?"
Strange Girl: "Aren't you the girl that exploded?"
Ruby: "Uhh, yeah! The name's Ruby. But you can call me Crater-Fa... *sigh* actually you can just call me Ruby."
Girl: "Okay."
Yang: "So... what's your name?"
Girl: "Blake."
Yang: "Well, Blake, I'm Yang! Ruby's older sister. I like your bow."
Blake: "Thanks."
Yang: "It goes great with your... pajamas!
Blake: "Right."
Yang: "Nice night, don't you think?"
Blake: "Yes, it's lovely. Almost as lovely as this book... that I will continue to read... as soon as you leave."
Yang: "Yeah, this girl's a lost cause."
Ruby: "Well bye, Blake."
Blake nods her head as Yang and Ruby begin to walk back to their sleeping bags, and continues to read her book.
Male Voice: "Milli?"
Robotic Female Voice: "Yes?"
Male: "File; Blake Belladonna."
Female: "No entries found."
Male: "None?"
Female: "No sir."
Male: "Hmm."
Female: "Might I suggest speaking with her?"
Male: "All in good time, Milli. All in good time."
alright cool you read that thing. im gonna go to sleep, its fucking 1 am
