Hello guys, I bring forth big news. My story so far SUCKS BALLS, I almost puked at how terrible it is now that I look back on it. There are some really stupid things in there like the sex dream Mileena had with Raven, wtf is with that? Why would she dream that? Makes no sense. Then there are a lot of complicated things with Raven mainly because I didn't plan out the story before writing it so I came up with new ideas and implemented them on the go which leaves huge plot holes. If you ever want to write a fan fiction, don't start and just roll with it, make sure to at least plan the main plot before you do anything. Then you can have side things going on but the main meat of the story needs to be planned and I learned that the hard way so I will be re-writting this whole story, the concept is still going to be the same, Mileena, Zaraki and Raven. I hope I can rename the story because I don't want to make a new one and lose the followers I have on this one but we shall see. The story has great potential I think and my baby girl Mileena deserves the best fan fiction I can make.
