Hmm, this is a little odd.
I was looking around, and found a note in my room. It seems to be some kind of message, but I can't make heads or tails of the meaning. Maybe you guys could figure it out?
"This is a wonderful story, and very interesting, keep writing!
- mike2324232"
I don't quite understand it, but it's definitely praise for something...
(Is this too much cringe, or can I keep doing this? XD)
Anyways, I have a feeling this is going to be a looooooong story. I have SO many ideas for this, and it's been up for two bloody days!
I luv Riddle School : 3 : 3 : 3 : 3
At the time of writing this, I was completely speechless.
Less than a minute before, I had my view counter at 497. As of the time you read this, it's passed five hundred. Thank you, all of you wonderful people!
By the time I'm done writing this, it'll be 500! All 110 signed in visitors, and then all of the guests, are amazing! Without you, this story would likely be dead, so, I can't give you ENOUGH thanks!
Now, I'm done rambling. If you have any questions, comments, suggestions, insults, compliments, feel free to write them as a review! I may be finding more notes in my room soon...
Next thing I update will be Shattered SOULs, so be sure to look out for that!
Without further adeu, I present to you...
Chapter II: Revenge
After cursing his lungs out once the person who trapped them was away, Phil slowly stood up and looked around the room. He was still partially blinded by the tears that had been awoken at the news of Smiley's death. He would make that thing PAY.
There was nothing in his room he could use to escape, except for a hammer on top of a bookshelf, about a foot and a half out of his reach. The door was made of pure steel, and the walls were brick, so there was no way he would be busting out of those. He saw another vest, sighed, and tried to open it.
It worked, and soon, Phil found himself crawling through the vents, again. He was met with a crossroad, but to the left, there was a large egg with a face, who crawled backwards slowly after being seen. Unsettled, he looked to the right, and found the same egg, except blue. This one crawled backwards, too. Quickly, Phil crawled forwards, and found himself in a room that looked like...he couldn't even describe it.
In the room, there were many chambers that could hold a creature that was huge, possibly up to twenty feet. They seemed capable of...regeneration? Maybe, if he could find Smiley, he could use one of these to bring her back!
"Phil...? Phil?!" Asked a voice that was all to familiar to the boy. Whipping around, he saw none other than Smiley running towards him. He was so blinded by happiness, that what happened next was completely unexpected.
After wrapping her arms around him, she whispered something that was said, not in her usual, gentle voice, but a creepy one, as if she was playing some sick joke on him.
"Oh, Philly, I can't believe you fell for that~!"
Sharp steel was shoved into his back. Phil felt...betrayed. The girl dropped him, and, wiping a small bit of blood off on her pants, said "Why would I EVER love you? You're worth NOTHING to me!"
She walked away, laughing a cold, heartless laugh, leaving Phil Eggtree to die.
"Pathetic, Eggtree," the voice from before rang out. "Out of all of you, I would have thought you would have escaped. But no. You're going to die here, Eggtree, where nobody cares about you. Not. Even. Smiley," it said, putting emphasis on Smiley. "Revenge is but a dish best served cold, Eggtree. And soon, you will be very cold."
Turning off the speaker, the creature leaned back and laughed, the top of it's bald head barely visible from the lighting.
"Phil Eggtree is dead! Joyous of days, this world, it shall be mine!"
The 'commander' turned their chair fully around, it's thin, white body fully shown. It was dressed in a red hoodie and gray pants. The same clothing Smiley had in Phil and Phred's dreams, before they were killed.
"Now, 'friend', we have some things to discuss,", it said, in a creepily accurate imitation of Phil's voice. "I'm afraid any dates you had planned are cancelled. Forever."
Minion forty-three pushed in a cage on wheels, which held a captive Smiley. She was forced to watch Phil die by an impostor's hands.
"No...no, he can't be dead, he can't be! He...can't be..." she repeated, not believing anything she saw.
"You saw it with your own two eyes, Sundae. Now, I wonder how your other friends are fairing with their 'you'? Oh, right, they're all already dead," he said, still using Phil's voice, and flipped the cameras to show corpses of Phred and Zack. Both feeds had her, staring over them, a knife in right hand, a creepy smile on her face. Both of their wounds seemed to be on their chests, since there was no visible blood from their backs, which was what Smiley saw, other than the back of their heads.
"And the best part? They all hate you now. Even Phil Eggtree, your one and only dream man. The one who you love so dearly, you will never see again. Forty-three, dispose of her," ordered the commander.
"Sir, yes, sir!" The Zack minion responded, and pushed her cage out of the room.
"Watching this worm bleed out will be fun...almost as fun as watching that idiot, Quiz, kill himself for the "greater good"."
I'm dark, as you can tell.
So, everyone's dead, sentenced to death, or dying. Aren't I a lovely person? : 3
Y'know, I'm a little tired of the main protagonist always hogging the spotlight, which is why I gave Smiley so much. She seems like she'd be second in command if Phil were to die, so, that's my plan.
Of course, she's going to die, so, meh.
'I can create ruin at any instant, yet I fail at creating peace.'
- Unknown, 2016
Seriously though, making sad, painful, dark stories is so easy. Which is the tone for a lot of my stories, surprisingly. Maybe I should try some lighter writing...
Well, I wrote all of this in one night. There's starting to be a pattern with this. Everything but my Shattered SOULs series have had chapters written in one bloody day/night.
WOOT WOOT, HYPE TRAIN, COMING THROUGH!
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Thank you, all of you wonderful viewers!
If you stay tuned, maybe you'll see them get a happy ending after all...;)
Doubt it, though XD
How would she ever find their bodies, even if she did escape?
Oh, there's a cliche for that, alright.
Anyways, all you lovely people, my name is Unknown, and I will see all of you, in the next chapter! Ciao!
