second time making a fanfiction give the story a chance and all types of criticism are allowed thank you and enjoy :)

It was a sunny day in meteor city, the smell of decaying meat and sweat filled the air as usual

The usual marketplace commotion started up again. "fresh meat" says Alex rubbing his hands together. Alex slipped into the crowd and made his way towards a vendor selling apples. He reached into his pocket and threw a rock beside the stand. The merchant bent over to examine the rock. Alex ran to the stand grabbed a handful of apples and floored it into the streets. " stop thief" exclaimed the merchant. The nearby gaurds attempted to catch up to him, Alex was a step ahead he abandoned a apple and climbed atop a wooden shack. The weak straw roof collasped under him as Alex fell inside the house. " ugh" Alex exclaimed in pain. The nearby gaurds entered the house and sorrounded alex. The soldiers picked him up and threw him across there shoulders like a ragdoll.

15 minutes later

The soldiers were traversing across the city, with each step Alex could only get more worried " what will they do with me" " how long will i be in there" " what can be worse than this" his final question was answered when one of the guards was beheaded. " oh hell" exclaimed one guard " its an bandit" yelled another guard " leave the kid just run!" screamed the 3rd guard. Alex was dropped to the ground as he attempted to lift himself up. The bandit kicked him in the chest nearly knocking him out. Alex looked to his right hazily seeing a buff bald man wearing black and dark brown satchels walking towards him "death by steroid jokey " says Alex.

2 hours later

Alex woke up hazily, a rat scurried returning him to his senses. He scurried to the bars and attempted to open them. " crap its locked" said Alex. He began to bang on the doorsr as hard as he can, " let me out you jerks" yells Alex. Alex saw a blonde man enter the room " shut your mouth or you wont have one soon" yells the man. To Alex's suprise he punched open the bars, and ushered him out. " why are you helping me?" asked Alex " shut up" exclaimed the man.

Alex was pushed outside of the camp there were 3 people outside on rocks, one was wearing a scarf with a skull, the others body was filled with holes, and the last looked the most normal a average hight woman. The blonde that had escorted him began to count 1...2...3...4...5...6...7...8...9...10...11...12...13...14...15...16...17...18...19...20... The mans hand was covered in fire " ripper cyclotron" exclaimed the man. In mere seconds the bandit camp was destroyed. Alex covered his eyes and turnt, when a rock came flying to him. Before it could hit a girl in robes sliced it in half with a fan. " So that camps destroyed" says the blonde. " What do we do with the child" says the woman with glasses. " Its obvious we leave it" says the one with the paper fan. " it will die says" the woman with glasses

"hmm we do have a pest problem back a t the base" says the blonde calmly " maybe it can take care of it for us" " hey im not a it my names Alex and do i have any say in this" exclaims Alex. " well we could leave you do die" says the lady with glasses " no i'd rather exterminate the bugs" says Alex " very well then its settled your coming with us" exclaims the lady with glasses. " my names phinks, the one with glasses is shizuku, and the one with holes is bonolenov" says the blonde. Shizuku motioned for Alex to follow them. Alex did what he was told and they began the journey back to there base.

i know that probably wasnt that good let me know what you think about it all types of criticism allowed :)