Heyo, everyone! I just wanted to let you all know that this story is officially DEAD! Dead, I say. Dead as a doorknob! Feel free to enjoy chapter one of it's rewrite, however. I'll be keeping this original up, but I may end up deleting it. It just depends on how it affects traffic to the rewrite.
Here's the link!: s/12143516/1/Minecraft-Ocelot-Mode
A few changes have been made. Read them here, otherwise you're free to go!:
1. This one will actually get somewhere. I've got it pretty well laid out!
2. Instead of shipping Aidaya, I'll be shipping Gilaya in this new edition.
3. This story will take place in a submodern AU (which includes today's technology and yesterday's potions!)
4. It's rated K+ so that I can get more readers, but if you ever think I need to change the rating, let me know! This won't have any adult-content, only a few light jokes made by Aiden about Gilaya and a few kisses shared by Gill and Maya. It's the violence and illnesses I'm concerned about.
5. Instead of diving right into the Witherstorm, there will be a bit of dialogue before that!
I fear I may be spoiling, so I'm gonna close. Close it Crisper!
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(picks up note) 'Bye'?! Crisper, when I said 'you can leave', I was talking to readers, not you! (closes it myself)
