Message to the guy who has the pet peeve about where i put periods and stuff, I'll put the commas and periods wherever i feel like it. I have been here since 2012, written more than 200 stories, worked on about 5 or so different archives, i know what i'm doing. But i'll try to improve on that since it obviously bothers you so much. Had enough problems on the amazing world of Gumball archive with fanfic critics, i certainly don't want to deal with that kind of problem or anything similar again, especially not here since i really like this show more than gumball at the moment.

(Loud House, 2 am)

Luna was just coming home from a late night concert, she kept very quiet as she went to her room as she was sure everyone was sleeping, or at least she thought everyone was sleeping. She was surprised to see Luan still up, she was in her nightgown but sat at a desk in their room looking hard at a picture on her computer and trying to glue something back together

"Luan, it's 2 am, what're you doing up?" asked Luna

"(Yawn) Trying to fix Alpha leader and Scattershot" said Luan as she glued a gun onto a blue one eyed robots arm

"Who?" asked Luna

"Luna you weren't here earlier today, i have made a huge mistake and now almost everyone hates me" said Luan

"Oh no, what did you do?" asked Luna

She showed her Lincolns broken game and remaining pieces of the statue, she was halfway done reconstructing the thing.

"You broke Lincoln's game?" asked Luna

"That wasn't the only thing i broke today, i broke Lynn's leg, Leni hates me for calling her dumb as rocks, I burned Lola and Lana's mouths, sent Lori on a wild goose chase, even Lily hates me and i haven't done anything to her, but she was upset when i broke Lincoln's stuff. I didn't mean to, it was just a prank, it wasn't supposed to end like this, i never wanted anyone to hate me" said Luan sadly

Luna hugged Luan and put the statue under her bed.

"I'm sorry this happened Luan" said Luna

"I need to make things right, in the morning, i'm going to the mall, going to the video game store, and i'm using my own savings to buy Lincoln a new game, he worked so hard to buy it and i stepped on it. Then i need to find a way to make things up to everyone else" said Luan

"Well right now, all you need is some sleep, you look exhausted" said Luna

"I spent the last 4 hours staring at a picture trying to fix the statue, of course i'm exhausted. (yawn) Sleep sounds really good right now" said Luan as she collapsed onto her bed

Luna covered her up.

"Goodnight Luan" said Luna

(Morning)

Luan awoke to the sounds of things breaking. She turned and saw most of her siblings messing with her stuff

"Well look who's awake, sleep well Luan?" asked Lincoln

"What're you guys doing?" asked Luan

"So you like breaking bones and robots do ya? Well we can break things too" said Lana

The girls and Lincoln ripped Mr. Coconuts to pieces, Lincoln snapped her gag glasses in half, and a good amount of her video tapes were destroyed.

"We kind of did you a favor with those video tapes, they are an invasion of privacy" said Lynn

"Now we're even. If anyone needs me, i'll be at Old man Smithers' house dusting his taxidermy collection. I need the extra money to replace my game" said Lincoln

All the siblings left, Luan looked at her ruined belongings, she was devastated, but at the same time she felt like she deserved it for all the damage she caused.

"Whoa, that's harsh dude" said Luna

"I need to make things right. I need to fix all this" said Luan

"I'm going with you to the mall, mainly because i have to pick up a guitar from the repair shop" said Luna

"Fine, i could use the company" said Luan

(Mall)

While Luna went to pick up her guitar from the repair shop, Luan went looking for the video game store.

"Let's see, nope, nope, nope, aha, here it is"

She walked into a video game store called Gamers corner, Lincolns game was heavily advertised with posters, cardboard cutouts, even a demo station. A bunch of people watched on a tv as someone tried playing a level using a virtual reality helmet. Luan walked up to the counter where 2 employees were arguing about something most likely related to the game.

"The motorbots are the best faction in Robowarriors"

"No way dude, the destructocons are the best, we have the builder-cons who can build anything"

"The motorbots have Alpha leader, he can't be beaten"

"Destructocons"

"Motorbots"

"Um, excuse me?" asked Luan

"Destructocons'

"Motorbots"

Luan squirted them with water from her squirt flower and got their attention

"A customer, we're so sorry young lady. You go stock something i'll handle this" said the motorbot supporter as he pushed the other employee away

"Welcome to Gamers corner, how can i help you?"

Luan put the broken game on the counter

"My brother bought this game yesterday and-

The employee opened it and was horrified at the condition of it.

"I'm sorry miss, no refunds or exchanges on a product this damaged" said the employee

"Long story short, i made a huge mistake and made my brother angry at me. I want to make it up to him by buying a new copy" said Luan

"Steve, one copy of fall of Astrotron. That'll be $49.99 plus tax, is there anything else i can help you with?" asked the employee

"No thank you just the- wait, what's that?" asked Luan

She pointed to something in a glass case, it was a copy of Lincolns statue

"Oh that's the preorder bonus, pretty sweet right? A few people cancelled their preorders and we got stuck with a few of those" said the employee

"How much for it?" asked Luan

"It's not for sale" said the employee

"Please, I need that statue" said Luan desperately

"Well, it's not for sale, but we are giving our remaining stock to anyone who buys the game and can beat the hardest boss in the game at the highest difficulty, using the VR helmet, it's great publicity for the store. We already gave away 2, we have a few left if you want to try and win one. Fee is 5 dollars to try it out. But you'll never win, you don't look like a gamer. I know who you are, you're Luan Loud, i saw your pathetic act at Tony's the other night" said the employee

The other employee named Steve came back with another copy of the game

"Here you go Miss" said Steve

Luan slammed an extra 5 dollars on the counter

"I'll do it"

"Ok, if that's what you want, you'll never win anyway" said the employee

Luna entered the store with a guitar case in hand.

"Hey Luan, back from the repair shop, so did you get the game? What're you doing?" asked Luna

Luan was being set up with a VR helmet to play the game.

"I'm winning a new statue for Lincoln, i'm going to play a game and beat some robot" said Luan

"But you don't even know that much about video games" said Luna

"I see Lincoln play them all the time, how hard can it be? Just have to figure out which buttons do what" said Luan as she looked at the controller

"Hey everyone, we have a new challenger. Luan Loud" said Steve

A couple shoppers laughed knowing who she was, others cheered. Luna patted Luan on the back.

"Good luck sis, you'll need it" said Luna

Luan smiled.

"Rules are simple, get killed by Scattershot, YOU LOSE! Of course for an extra 5 dollars you can always try again, There's health refills scattered around the arena, use them wisely. Prepare to fight Scattershot" said the rude counter employee

"Just start the game, it's dark wearing this thing" said Luan

"We haven't turned it on yet" said Steve

Steve turned the game on and Luan saw herself in a first person point of view in some sort of arena. Everyone else in the store watched from a tv above her, which displayed her as a big red and blue robot in a 3rd person view.

"Wow, this is so cool, i feel like i'm actually there" said Luan

"That's what they all say" said the rude employee

A blue one eyed robot which Luan recognised from the statue appeared in front of her.

"Welcome to my lab Alpha leader. You came a long way just to witness your destruction" said the robot named Scattershot

"Scattershot, your space portal experiments will doom both worlds, you cannot possibly control it" said Luans character Alpha leader

The fight began and Luan charged for scattershot mashing every button to see what they did, and while she got a few machine gun hits in, Scattershot blasted a powerful spread gun attack on her.

"Come on Luan, focus" said Luna

"I'm trying" said Luan "I don't know what all these buttons do"

"I will control the space portals, and once i do, the energy from the other world will save Astrotron, not doom it" said Scattershot "You're defending organic beings, which is bi product at best, that's not life, gears and cogs are life. Astrotron will rise from the dark ages and be the center of the universe again"

"Not if i have anything to say about it" said Alpha leader

Luan transformed her character into a vehicle and drove towards scattershot, he retaliated by dodging her attack and blasting a powerful laser at her which drained most of her health

"You will go great on my dissection table" said Scattershot

"This isn't good this isn't good. Where's the health?" asked Luan nervously

"Go left Luan, go left. Watch out for his spread attack" shouted Luna

"Go ahead and lose little girl, you'll never beat him, because you're nothing but an unfunny loser" shouted the rude counter employee

"Unfunny huh? I'll show you who's unfunny" said Luan angrily

Luan found a health pack and fired machine gun bullets at Scattershot which did some damage but not a lot.

"Try switching weapons, use the d pad" shouted someone

"What's a d pad?" asked Luan

"The thing that looks like a cross" shouted another person

Luan switched her weapon to a rocket launcher and fired rockets at scattershot, angering him.

"This is where you die Alpha! The Destructocons will win" said Scattershot

He turned into a tank and fired rockets into the air. Luan turned into a vehicle and drove as far as she could from the rockets and towards Scattershot. She transformed and performed a powerful melee attack on him by mashing buttons on the controller.

"It's over Scattershot!" shouted Luan

Scattershot flew up into the air

"Bug bots, attack, destroy the intruder while i stabilize the space portals" said Scattershot

Big bug looking robots dug out of the ground and crawled and flew towards Luan.

"Your destruction is imminent. It is highly logical that my bug bots will destroy you" said Scattershot

"Oh no you don't, eat some of this" shouted Luan

She sprayed bullets at the flying bug bots and rammed into the ones crawling towards her

"Next time you should 'Bee' more careful, hahaha, get it?" asked Luan

"Now's not the time for jokes Luan, time to end this" said Luna

The crowd cheered for her, which gave Luan some more motivation to finish the battle.

"Nice move, but now its my turn" said Scattershot

He transformed to tank mode again and rammed towards her, but she dodged his attack and fired every bullet and rocket she had at him

"No, please Alpha, you don't understand-

Luan rammed towards Scattershot and delivered a final move against him. She threw Scattershot into the air and slammed him into the ground, ending the battle. Steve removed the helmet from Luans head and held her hand up.

"We have a winner." said Steve

The crowd cheered. Luan bowed for them and Luna gave her sister a big hug. Both girls walked up to the counter, where the rude employee was surprised and shocked Luan survived that battle.

"Bu bu bu but but how? How'd you survive that? Scattershot is powerful, he's the Destructocons most powerful scientist, how could a girl like you possibly have beaten him?" asked the confused worker

"I have a joke for you. Who has brown hair, is the funniest person in this room, and has just proven you wrong? It's me, now give me my prize." said Luan

The worker fainted. Steve pulled a box out of the back room

"Here you go kid, congratulations, here, have a free hat while you're at it" said Steve as he placed the statue box on the counter and hat on her head

Luan removed the hat and took the game and statue.

"Pleasure doing business with you" said Luan

She and Luna left the store. Luna was impressed at what Luan had just accomplished.

"Wow Luan, i can't believe you actually did that" said Luna

"I know right? I guess with enough motivation i can do anything. Now that i have what i need to make it up to Lincoln, i just now need a way to make it up to the others" said Luan

"Let me think? Why don't you start with apologies?" asked Luna

"I can at least try, but i don't think it'll work" said Luan

"It's worth a try, what do you have to lose since everyone hates you?" asked Luna

Luan gave her a mean look.

"Sorry sis, didn't mean that" said Luna nervously