Oh wow, didn't realize I hadn't posted a new chapter since the 4th…I had a bit of an epiphany as I started thinking about my other fanfictions. This question is directed at fans of Choose the World You See. Do you think it would help the style if I made each chapter a page or two rather than 5 or 6? It might sound small, but I could definitely pull it off and be more frequent in my updates (as you see with this fanfiction). It would essentially mean restructuring the entire thing, but I could be more thorough and I think it would be interesting. Let me know your thoughts!
Chapter 46: Better a Live Coward
"Oh, wow! Beat, look at all the animals!"
"It's a zoo, yo. Of course it has animals."
"That's not what I…sigh, forget it."
"Oh, wow! Check out that snake!"
"Ahh!"
"What's your deal?"
"I'm…I'm afraid of snakes, okay?"
"Hahahaha! Aw, that's so cute, Rhyme. Who knew you was chicken?"
"O-oh yeah?! Well…better a live coward than a dead hero!"
"Wasn't Phones and me dead when we saved you?"
"Oh yeah…damn."
"Anyway, don't sweat it! There's plenty of other animals…EEEEEK!"
"Wow! Your brother bolted fast!"
"Never knew he had such a high pitched scream…wait…aren't you..."
"Koki Kariya, your humble servant."
"What the hell are you…AH!"
"Damn, now she's gone too! What could've been so terrifyin' that both siblings were scared off?"
"Hey, Kariya! Let's get steppin' already!"
"Ah, Uzuki…well, that explains it."
