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A few of you didn't like how Tris and Tobias did it... Sorry? Oh and by the way, that will not be a regular thing in this story.
Omg, on Thursday, I was doing English and we are reading, 'Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde', it is a good book so far. Why am I talking about this? Well, you see, we were analysing the characteristics of Mr Utterson and we used the factions in Divergent to talk about him! So far, we know he is Abnegation, Candor and Erudite! Possibly Amity xD.
Anywaysss...
Tobiased to care, oh shush. Yayyy! That PM made me laugh!
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(Guest), somehow I know this is pansycakes rule not logged in! Yes, it's your ideaaa :)
Pansycakes rule, you cannot even... what?! Ah, the feels hit you like a truck. I wasn't intending on them to do it but why not?
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Tobias's POV:
I wake up to the sunlight creeping through the curtains behind us and grin at the sight of Tris's naked body resting next to me. I watch her peaceful slumber as I recount last night. In all truth, it did escalate a bit fast but I enjoyed it. Tris grunts and turns over in my arms, facing me. I smile as her eyes flutter open groggily.
"Hi," I whisper, knowing if I used my normal voice, she would complain. She lets a smile settle on her face and closes her eyes again, nuzzling her nose into my chest.
"Why do you always smell so good in the morning?" she groans. I chuckle and run my fingers through her hair admiringly.
"You know, I called you Six last night," I mumble in her hair.
"And?"
"You faced your fear..." She looks into my eyes as I pull back and sighs.
"I'm officially Six now. Somehow, Johanna had a fear simulation room and I went through it, the morning after you came back. I gained another fear." I tense slightly, remembering how she acted odd that day and keep silent.
"It's a combination of me losing any of you guys, and you guys leaving me." I run my hand down her back as she trails off, continuing to gaze into my blue eyes.
"It's okay," I speak into her ear.
"I know." She squeezes my torso. We lay comfortably in silence, me resting my face on her shoulder while she breathes in my scent on my chest.
"How did I get a great boyfriend?"
"Fate." I smirk.
"Stop smirking." I laugh and she shakes her head. My hand slides down to her butt, so I can hitch her thigh onto my leg and I tickle her tenderly. She breathes out slowly and all the blood rushes to that one place, rubbing against her.
"Would you like some breakfast?" I ask, pulling my lower half back a bit. I feel her smile and return to my previous position, eliciting a moan.
"Yeah, why not? But can you cook?" Tris says croakily. I continue running my hand up and down her leg.
"Hanging out with the Pedrads taught me a few things." I grin and stumble out of the bed, but not without catching sight of Tris's red face.
"You're such a tease!" she whines.
"You know you love it though," I retort, grabbing a pair of boxers from the dresser.
"Wait, where did those come from?" She raises an eyebrow.
"I knew we would be staying overnight, so I packed a change of clothes with a few extras."
"I hate you. And Chris. And Shauna," She mumbles as she comes to the full realisation. I smile sheepishly and she rolls her eyes, getting out of bed. I pick up the shorts from yesterday and slip out of the room to prepare breakfast.
Okay, so basically. You know when they had the girls night? And Chris and Shauna were all giggly? That's when they got the idea. They told Tobias the next evening when he returned with the boys and the day after that, is when he packed the clothes. They got a member of Amity to place the wooden basket and blanket in the meadow during the outing. Understood? Let's go.
Tris's POV:
I devour the syrup-covered pancakes and groan at the taste of it.
"Dude, why didn't you tell me you could make pancakes like this. It's literally orgasmic."
"Orgasmic?" Tobias asks with humour laced in his voice. I grin and lick the syrup off the fork before responding.
"The beautiful taste of the pancakes is just so powerful, it almost gives me an orgasm." Tobias chuckles and shakes his head. I smile and gobble down the rest of my pancakes, before licking the plate.
"What the?" Tobias possesses a baffled look on his face.
"Don't judge." He raises his hands in surrender and takes our plates to the sink. I laugh and hug him from behind as he washes up. Rubbing my face on his back, I think in astonishment at how the activity we did yesterday did not create an awkwardness between us. In fact, we are still going strong and I'm glad.
"Natalie and Nikolai are still asking for you," Tobias whispers while he turns in my arms. I look up into his concerned eyes.
"Tell your sister I'm still thinking about it. By the way, where was she when we were at Candor?"
"Going over paperwork. I did see her while you were going through the videos."
"Oh good. I forgot to ask."
"It's okay." Tobias smiles before kissing me on the lips.
Sorry, too many time skips but it is getting closer to the dramaaaa.
Celeste's POV: (long time no see! Shauna is 6 weeks and 5 days!)
"Soooooo, how was the birthday evening last night?" Chris smirks. Shauna coughs suggestively. I laugh at Tris's bright red face.
"It was great! Nice going with the picnic, and the cottage was cosy! We watched a few films and just snuggled together. Luckily it was still warm as it got darker as it's almost winter."
"Tris. Babe. You know I'm a former Candor. And you biting your inner cheek, just gives me the the impression you're lying."
"Damn you. Fine, we did it." I shriek and jump up from my spot on the couch before leaping onto the other couch, wrapping my arms around her torso when I land by her side. Chris does the same on the other side and Shauna is dancing, singing to herself. Lynn chuckles and shakes her head at our enthusiasm. Amber joins Shauna with the dancing and singing while Tris blushes furiously, giggling.
"Girls, are you okay? Shauna, what happened?" Zeke screeches, banging on the front door. Shauna jogs to it and opens it with a wild smile.
"Sorry, Zekeybear! Just a little girl moment! We're totally cool. Love you!" Shauna kisses him and shuts the door in his face.
"Okay then...," Zeke says with confusion and we listen out for the door closing across the hall and squeak a little quieter.
"It's not that deep, guys."
"What do you mean? You're not a virgin anymore! I'm 16 and I've done it."
"Yeah, that's because you couldn't control your raging hormones, unlike me," Tris spits back playfully. I burst out laughing at Chris's face and everyone else roll on the floor at the comeback.
"She got you there." Lynn shrugs.
"Oh hush!" Chris waves her hands in the air and glares at Tris before smiling. Tris grins and frees herself from me before getting up and engulfing Chris into an embrace.
"You know I love you."
"Yeah, okay."
"I take that back."
"Wait! I love you too!"
"That's better." Tris pats her head and Chris slaps her arm with a beam.
"How was it though? Don't deprive a pregnant teen of information!" Shauna screams from her spot on the floor.
"Well..."
Moving on. Seriously, I do so many time skips, gawd.
"Was he a demon in bed?" Zeke asks in a girly voice at dinnertime.
"Zeke!" Four punches him on the arm and Zeke recoils, tending to his 'wound'.
"One, that's not how we talk, two, it's 'beast', not demon, get your facts right, and three, you're a dude, that's just weirdly awkward," Tris mumbles before drinking her hot chocolate.
"But I'm your BFFL, we can tell each other anything," Zeke pouts.
"Oh, really? When's the last time you told me a secret?" Zeke stutters and Tris smirks.
"By the way, I'd prefer Uriah."
"YES!" Uriah hollers before getting all up in Zeke's face. Zeke leans backwards as Uriah goes towards him and Zeke slaps his face away.
"You choose that doofus?"
"At least he can keep a secret when you'd just run around, screaming the whole place down. With no dignity."
"Bruh," Will whispers over his cappuccino. I choke on my muffin and Lynn grins, muttering 'she's getting better at this' and everyone else shake with laughter. Zeke huffs and glares at Tris.
"I'm sorry," Tris gets out between laughter.
"Nah, it's cool." Zeke shrugs.
"You sure about that, baby?" Shauna raises an eyebrow.
"Oh now, you want to beef with me?"
"Dude, chill," Peter chortles.
"Just get over it. It is not the first time you've been stripped of your self pride. By a girl." Four nudges Zeke's shoulder.
"That's just it, man. It was by a girl. It's always by a girl!"
"Lord, please. If you love us, the baby will not go through this," I utter. Zeke throws a look at me and everyone else cry, clutching his or her sides.
"Excoose me?" Zeke puts his mouth in a shocked expression, splaying his hand on his chest and moves his head back.
"That just proves my point, God." Lynn falls off her chair and I follow as Lynn pulls down Chris who tugs down Will. Uriah, expecting this, dodges the pull during his laughter but knocks over Marlene who releases her spoon, as she falls, that hits Hector and everyone else falls, except Zeke and Shauna.
"Everything okay over here?" Johanna speaks as she walks towards us with an amused expression.
"Oh yeah, just peachy(!). If you call a teenage boy getting roasted okay, then everything's just fine!" Zeke responds. Johanna laughs musically and we all get back onto our seats, wiping away tears.
"Do you not remember coming here when initiation ended? You and your brother were injected by peace serum. At your request, of course."
"That's why he kept singing some random song called 'Pink Fluffy Unicorns Dancing On Rainbows'!" Tris giggles and Zeke facepalms. Uriah groans, remembering the night vaguely.
"How the hell did we survive? Getting on and jumping off a train, drunk." I muse.
"We're just awesome like that." Lynn winks and I laugh.
"Tris, I came over here to inform you that Andrew has asked for you."
"That douchebag? He can go and suck it."
"Tris!" Johanna scolds. Tris blushes and mutters an apology.
"He has been pestering our guards ever since your birthday."
"Oh, so he remembered it was the day I was born 19 years ago? Wow, okay. Nope, doesn't change my mind."
"Please? My guard is getting very annoyed and I'll have to inject him."
"Go ahead. I'm not stopping you."
"Tris."
"Jo."
"Beatrice."
"Johanna."
"Beatrice Grace Prior, you'll go and visit your father."
"Johanna Olivia Reyes... Fine. I'll go," Tris sighs before pushing out her chair and standing up.
"Tobias. I have a knife on me."
"I'll come!" Four stands up and the duo walk out together. Johanna breathes out in relief.
"The dude would not shut up. Literally," Johanna groans before strolling off. We share looks before chortling.
Should the Dauntless/Erudite come?
Andrew's POV: Eek.
"Sir, can you, please, shut up?" the guard grits out his teeth. I scoff and keep pestering him to get my daughter.
"Where is he?" Ah, there she is.
"He's there. Thank God you came. He was getting on my nerves!" the same guard huffs and unlocks the cell, letting my daughter in. Oh, and that wretched boyfriend.
"Beatrice! How have you been?" I say cheerily but glare at Tobias who mock-waves at me with a smile.
"Cut the crap, Andrew. What do you want?"
"That's no way to greet your father!"
"Oh, I didn't realise he was in here! Wait, he is not. You are just the shell. So chop chop, I have better things to do than talk to you." I growl and lunge, momentarily forgetting my shackles but she doesn't even flinch as I am yanked back to the floor. I grunt and sit properly on the floor, crossing my legs and folding my arms.
"I see they've followed my orders and not let you shower. Hope you're getting fed though?"
"This is all down to you? B*tch." She smiles and shrugs, sliding down the wall, twirling a pocket knife she retrieved from her back. I cringe slightly at how she's so calm with the way the knife spins, not cutting her once but return to my smooth facade. Tobias stands against the wall with a leg propped up and he stares at the opposite wall.
"I hear you have the Sphere?"
"And?" She raises an eyebrow, dragging her stormy blue eyes to my grey ones.
"How many have you got?"
"Two. But it's not like you care." She throws the knife into the air and catches it by the tip between her thumb and index finger.
"Aha, but I do know who you need." I wag a finger in her direction.
"Yeah right," Tris laughs humourlessly.
"If I'm correct, you're one of them. Possibly Sarah too. Do you not see the pattern?" Tris slows down her twirling of the knife.
"What pattern?" Tris tilts her head.
"You need the other two Prior Divergents to unlock the Sphere. After all, it was your grandmother, Judith, who created the Sphere, roughly around the time the Matthews started killing Divergents." Tris stops the knife circling, widens her eyes and lets her jaw go slack. I smirk and Tobias clears his throat nervously.
"You're joking," she breathes.
"Nope. You and Sarah have unlocked it. No doubt the other two are Natalie and Nikolai. Clearly the Sphere's being passed down the Prior line."
"My god, this just gets more stupid, complicated and annoying," Tris mutters, standing up.
"Hey, where's my thanks?" I protest, and Tris smiles at this.
"What for?"
"I just told you that, but, you just, what the?"
"Oh, you expected me to say thank you? Sucks, does it not? When your own daughter doesn't appreciate the help you offered. Karma's a b*tch, isn't it? Dad," she sneers before striding out with a happy Tobias. I breathe out slowly, rest my head on the wall and rub my face roughly.
"What have I become?"
"An arrogant, self-possessed and poor excuse of a father. I could go on but nah, I got better things to do," Tris shouts back as the guard locks the cell with a relieved expression. I laugh at how true that statement was.
Yeah? Nah? Eh? I honestly don't know. I tried Andrew but I don't think I executed it well. This isn't of usual length, which is disappointing but hope you guys loved this all the same. Thanks. Till later, BooksLover2000...
