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Guest: Damn, this scared me! Are you actually? You'll seriously murder me?! Who is this?! Please don't be Stella Nite Wolfblood?
Hannah(Guest), yayy! Nahh, it's not! It just shows how much you enjoy my stories, much love.
Mileyismyhorse, yay! Hehee, ohhh keep the cookies coming! :D
ReaderGirl2000, YES I'LL KILL YOU (will I? :D) but how are you so sure of that? Or maybe I've just been harbouring my true inner self? *evil laugh*
Dauntless4664, omg I love you :3. It's totally fine! Yaay, the story loves you so much more! I'll try, thankyou.
Brooke(Guest) newcomer? Swear you were in the first fanfic? Everyone loves Uriah! Dang, this makes my plan harder to set in action... hehee... story loves you too.
Stella Nite Wolfblood, the only person who did what I asked! I'm glad someone loves me back! Hmm, I don't know. So Andrew can be killed off? Let's see *claps and rubs hands together* you're finally logged in :D
Yasmin allyson Eaton, and you're surprised because...?
Shauna is 8 weeks and 5 days pregnant. (16th of October.)
Third's POV:
"Happy birthday, bro." Uriah pats Peter on the back as everyone cheers.
"Oh my gosh Shauna! You're showing!" Chris squeals as Shauna walks in the Dauntless cafeteria with a grinning Zeke besides her.
"Oh, great. Baby bump on my birthday," Peter playfully whines. Amber whacks his head while everyone laughs. Hold up, they're in Dauntless?
Last week:
"We need to show this video to everyone," Tris murmurs to the rest of the gang who are huddled around the TV connected to the laptop they are running the drive on. The drive had come from the Sphere that opened a little slot and the drive was lifted up. To say everyone was scared is an understatement.
"I second that," Uriah agrees. Later, it was set that they'd go to Erudite to meet Fernando, a close friend of Will, around the back so they could sneak into the main hall where the controls for the city screen were placed. This plan was put into motion and chaos erupted. Penelope and Amy Coulter were enraged, some of Erudite's members fled, confused at Judith's admission to the creation of the factions and what was beyond the fence because what Judith said, overwhelmed the things the late Ms Matthews told them.
Society's laws were gradually being demolished and many were pleased at this. However, others were not and decided to solidify their position on Amy's team.
Images flitted through the video and camera shot of their area surprised everyone. Everyone discovered they were part of an experiment and the Sphere was controlled by the Bureau which was an hour away from the fence, but there would be a car waiting for a team to travel there. Chicago, Milwaukee, New York were the three main experiments but Chicago, the largest.
"This could be a chance for freedom, freedom leads to experiencing the real world and the real world will be daunting. Daunting, however, doesn't affect you, does it?" David, the man who was speaking through the Sphere, spoke. Tris looked at everyone who were eagerly staring at her. She then glanced at the minute camera in the corner of her apartment that had been there forever, knowing the Bureau was watching.
"Let's do it." Cheers erupted and hollers echoed, bouncing off the walls.
"How do you drive a car?" Four mused.
"Who said you're driving?" Eric retorted. Four laughed and shook his head.
"I just want to know."
"Me too!" Uriah screeched.
"Me three!" Zeke jumped in his seat.
"Me Four!" Four concluded, earning a whack on the head.
"Okay, Four I'll teach but Pedrads, are you sure?"
"Hey!" Zeke protested and Uriah pouted. Everyone was chattering about leaving for the Bureau in two weeks' time.
Back to the present. Combination of past and present tense.
"I was vomiting then when I got up and looked in the mirror, voila!" Shauna giggles and Zeke kisses her tenderly.
"I'm going to be a father. I still can't get over that."
"Neither can I," Amber mutters and Zeke flicks her ear. Everyone chuckles and immediately launch into the subject of leaving next week. Wait, but WHY are they in Dauntless?
Well, in all the chaos, Dauntless migrated to Erudite so they could get full debriefs of plans, allowing the loyal Dauntless, that consisted of Benjamin, Drew (what?), Nathan, Nita, Allison, Michael, Edward, Myra and others, to return to their homes.
Due to the loss of their leader, the factionless split up, seeking refuge in any faction. The five leaders of the brave faction, scoured through each person's life to see if they were trustworthy or Dauntless enough to take on the tasks that would be laid out for them.
Scarlette and Alyssa were a couple of the people let back in. Older people who were kicked out also joined, Estelle retreated to Candor after being denied and Dauntless was slowly on its way back to being a strong army. Erudite was not too pleased about this but they kept quiet, which was suspicious, meaning many defence plans were conjured up. Nikolai was granted permission to come back but not returning to the position he previously held.
The gang were the people going out of the fence, with Tori and Bud. Tori wanted to meet George, since it was revealed he was alive and well, in a relationship with Tris's father figure/instructor, Amar. Myra and Edward were also part of the team, since Myra would be a massive help during Shauna's pregnancy and Edward is Myra's boyfriend, as well as a good fighter and strategist. The ones left in charge would be Michael, Nathan and Benjamin. Allison and Nikolai were backups, once they proved their reliability.
"How will all of us fit in a car? There's 19 of us?" Max decides to answer Sarah.
"There will be three cars. Two of which will have 7 seats and the third will have 5 seats. Choose your second and third driver."
"Bud?" Tori suggests. Everyone murmurs some sort of agreement.
"Four, this is your chance." Eric nudges him.
"Yeah, why not? I get Hector and Sarah though."
"What about Tris?" Zeke asks.
"Do I really have to say that my girlfriend's coming too?"
"Good point." Zeke wags a finger at Four.
"One person has to go with the four of them...," Bud points out.
"I will," Tori volunteers.
"Okay," Four shrugs.
"Cheke, Urlene and Celynn are in the first with Eric. Wilstina, Pamber and Medward are in the second with Bud," Tris concludes after a bit of debating.
"Medward?" Myra smirks. Everyone laughs at the new name.
"It's the only one that sounded right!" Tris huffs playfully.
"Really? What other ones did you have?" Shauna challenged.
"Eyra. Myward. Edra."
"Should have chosen Edra."
"It's too close to Ezra!" Tris points out and a clearing of the throat is heard.
"I'm walking past this table and I hear something like my name being repeated three times. Care to explain why?" You could hear the humour in his deep voice and everyone chortles.
"Ship names!" Tris shouts back, as she turns around. Ezra hums in response.
"Myra and Edward?" Ezra points at the two.
"Yep," Tris answers.
"Just do Medward?"
"That's what I said!" Tris throws her arms in the air.
"Is it me, or is it weird how they're talking... Like that?" Sarah muses.
"It's weird," Zeke deadpans.
"Says the one who cuts his toenails and stores them in a jar," Tobias shoots back.
"You actually do that?" Ezra has disgust laced in his voice. Zeke stutters while everyone laughs and do some forms of 'eww'.
"Wait, where are you going?" Christina inquires.
"Nikolai."
"Send him our greetings," Will speaks.
"Greetings? What century are you from? Wait, don't answer that. I have a pretty clear idea," Ezra guffaws and his footsteps become fainter as he distances himself from the table.
"OOH!" The Pedrads boys howls in unison, drawing eyes to the table.
"It's not that deep, guys," Celeste scoffs.
"For them, it is." Shauna raises an eyebrow.
"It's as deep as my 'ego', in your-"
"Zeke!" Sarah screeches. Shauna slaps his head and everyone struggle to control the tremors of laughter running through their bodies.
Again, short. The last two chapters I guess were fillers. My build up to outside the fence. Seriously guys, if you have ANY ideas, any whatsoever, don't hesitate. At this stage, ideas are very welcome. Loving you. Till later, BooksLover2000...
